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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 26 - excellent update! wonderfully written! Maan sees Geet gng to her room n kitchen! he questions her! she tells him abt gng 2 the orphanage etc! he tells her 2 bring coffee with sugar 4 him! she is confused! Maan has dinner! he takes one bite n spits it out! he shouts Nakul! he thinks Nakul made it n tells him 2 eat it! bt it was Geet! she finishes it! she vomits n is unwell! Nakul checks on her! she explains! Nakul made something 4 Maan! Geet gives it to Maan! Maan sees she is unwell! Nakul tells him! Maan stunned n feels bad! he takes dinner 4 Geet! Geet surprised seeing him! They feed each other! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 27 - beautiful update! superbly written! Maan gives her medicine! Geet awed by his care! geet awakens n is so excited! She tales Nakul's blessings! Maan happy seeing her wear the gift! he wishes her good luck! she gets all the info n goes back 2 KM! She is happy 2 study! she sends food 4 Maan! she wants 2 share her day with someone n tells Nakul! he doesn't understand bt pretends do so! update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update maan saw her talking carefree with nakul liked that very much he wants her to talk to him like this again that maid name maan got angry but he will help her to make her own identity nice part thnx 4 update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 28

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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update!!👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da update! Js read Part 28 - terrific update! Geet tells Nakul abt her day! Maan arrives n is stunned 2 hera her talk so loudly! Maan hears the convo! Geet shocked wen she sees him! Maan stares at Geet! she is affected by him! Geet calls Pinly 2 help her complete the forms! She has 2 go 2 KC! she takes his lunch n sned with peon! peon giove sit n tells him his maid is there! Maan angry a maid!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 29 - awesome update! well written! Maan goes n gets her n takes her to his office! he helps her fill the form! Geet has to go closer 2 him! Maan controls! Maan says he is her guardian n tells him 2 fill it in! relation - friend! Geet stunned! there is a knock on the door! Maan holds her hand under the table! Adi enters n signs papers n leaves! she is nervous! he goes to the meeting bt tells her nt 2 leave! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 30: lovely update! Maan does a drama to make Geet use the computer.
I hope Maan & Geet get married soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 updating! Part 30 - spectacular update, well written! Geet happy! she writes his name on his hand with hearts! Maan sees her hand! he is curious! she refuses 2 let him c! Maan hurt by this! Nakul sees them close together! Maan gets her to type 4 him! Maan happy as she is near him! Maan sees wt she has on her hand! she is asleep!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 31 - excellent update! well written! Maan overwhelmed! His Geet! he feels so happy! she is his everything! his inner thoughts well portrayed! Maan realizes where he his! he wants to get closer 2 her bt stops himself! Maan fetches her frm school n takes her shopping! Maan spends time with her with the excuse that his hand is paining! he helps her with her wrk! her friend comments on her outfit! Geet restless! she hopes he will fetch her again! she senses his presence! update soon

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