MG OS/SS ~HO GAYA HAI PYAR TUMSE~ Note page 15 || March 18th

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

CONGRATS FOR NEW STORY

INTERESTED TO READ NEW SHADE OF GEET

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Ketki

@ketki61

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

All the best for a new concept

Waiting as always

Enjoy

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priyanka5020

@priyanka5020

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

awesome intro

loved Geet's bold avatar

will be interesting to read

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CRAZYCUTEE

@CRAZYCUTEE

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

nice concept i did not see tanu weds manu return

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prachi sinha

@geetsmile

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

awesome prolouge

n cs

meko read karni h

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ja1970

@ja1970

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Nice prologue . Geet's character is interesting. t

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Nice concept, Geet as a fearless Haryanvi,

All the best for new story.

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

TEASER

Dil ka kare jab kisi ko kisi se pyar ho jaye..
Dil ka kare jab kisi ko kisi se pyar ho jaye..

khurana ji ... Pyar toh karo ho na.. Darr toh na jaoge na.. She asked with her pure village accent.. It was not that she can't speak anything other than this.. But then with her khurana sahab she always loved this free language of hers.. She was there in KM in the morning itself ..
Meanwhile maan was just hypnotised with her sweet voice with was appearing like a sweet threat but he knew that it was the day when he can just have her in his life for the lifetime..
He loves her there was no doubt , in fact maan loved her gesture of coming to him..
Maan couldn't form any word just a nod came and his hand caressed her cheek and she just kept her hand on the same hand..
Geet : bas yehi chahiye tha made ko khurana sahab.. Kahin pit pita gaye toh darr na Jana..
She said teasingly but knew that getting permission from her family was next to impossible that she has to do.. But she was also geet and now she has her love with her so she can climb mountains ..

Meanwhile downstairs in KM

Omg daadi , omg , dadi exclaimed Annie.. Her eyes were focused on her ever sweet daadima and Vicky bhai and she just said dramatically..
Annie : daadi , zaroor maan bhai ne kuch kiya hai.. Ye geet .. Omg she is definitely here to beat bhai.. Dadi you didn't saw that hockey stick..
Omg daadi.. Jaldi chahiye
Ye lady Hitler hai ..
Why maan bhai had to see her .. Ye use nahi chodti Jo use pareshaan karta hai..
Annie was going on and on and daadima and Vicky were just listening to their over dramatic annie definitely feeling that the terror named geet singh was here to kill the great MAAN SINGH KHURANA

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SO HOW WAS THE TEASER

M not sure about continuation seeing likes and comments
Still will give it a try ..