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lovely update maan getting despo and romantic he want to spend time with geet but is not able to he goes in search of his dr devil but is mesmerised to see her coming out fresh out of bath as fresh as dew he corners her and wants her to come to terrace seems he has a surprise for his ladylove a party was held for maan he was searching for geet who was looking beautiful but it also attracted nandinis cousin lustful eyes who misbehaved with boiling maans blood he punched him and took geet away his parents were shocked geet didnt wanted to ruin his party so she ddnt do anything maan gave a surprise to geet where he danced with her also claimed to be his he confessed to his love loved his drama with nakul
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The Bliss




The simple things of life can be blissful, if you can take the time to enjoy it. There is love in the air, everywhere... you just need to feel it, embrace and enjoy all that life has to offer.

Every moment that is enjoyed, treasured and relished is a store house of memories, that you can draw out, enjoy and smile with love. It is bliss..


Oh sweet bliss how did you find me in the dark with all my troubles

collecting like copper pennies in a fountain,
under pain concrete form,
a flower breaks
through the crack of my once solid shell.

Stay with me bliss ,
never leave me again,
for my need is great and my patience is plentiful.
Oh lessons I need not learn again,
forget where I have been.

Let me walk in the sweet embrace of a Sunday's morn
and not forget it tender kiss of compassion
for God had granted me another day with you.
Hold me in the arms of your unfolding grace
and we will put back all the fallen stars in the sky...


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Note..

This a fiction , all incident , medical terms , professional terms nd places r imaginary ,, plzz don't relate them with reality .


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Epilogue _ A



Epilogue - B

In Party venue Yash nd Ruchi wrapped everything smartly ,, Veer warned ND not to invite her stupid cousins in any Khurana gathering except her family ,, Nandini was feeling insulted 1st bcoz of Rahul's misbehaviour nd then Veer's warning ,, her hold was losing .

After recovering Maan all wr giving him priority along with that Geet nd this thing was pinching Nandini ,, from last 2 yrs she nd her son wr getting attentions from all but now Maan took their place ,, Veer was behaving like a sweet younger bro ,, she was annoyed nd sulking inwardly .

At mid myt all came tired nd slept quietly but next day at BF table whole family gathered ,, DM,Yash,Ruchi nd Veer said sorry to Geet for Rahul's misbehaviour.

Geet: plzz , don't say sorry ,, u wr not at fault ,, in that big gathering we cn't say who cn behave like that .. uncivilized ,, in fact I m sorry Veer nd uncle , u gave that party for Maan nd he left that bcoz of me .

ND : we cn sort out d matter peacefully ,but Maanveerji became out of control , beat Rahul nd left d party ,, he didn't think about our respect ,, we r feeling so insulted .

Maan: how cn I stay there after witnessing that ,, that jerk was misbehaving with My Geet in front of me nd u hoped that I kept quiet ,, that was respectable for me nd for u too nandini ,, ask Veer does he cn stay calm nd bear that insult if someone misbehave with u ?

All ears get alert when Maan blurt My Geet ,, Geet looked down bashfully where DM,Yash,Ruchi nd Veer exchanged smiles raising their brows ,, now d cat is out of d bag ,, Veer took d charge trapping Maan nd yes Geet too .

Veer: wow!! Bro .. kya baat hei ... My Geet .. haan.

DM didn't sit quiet : Maan ye kab hua ?

Geet was feeling so embarrassed , even Maan too get what he had said in flow ,, he smacked his head inwardly biting his tongue ,, he was in a fix .. what to do?

Veer teased : come on bro ,, Plzz explain what DM is asking ?

Ruchi nd Yash looked at Geet with a smile ,, poor soul was blushing hard with lowerhead ,, Maan sighed nd dipped his head defeated thinking ..Gaye Kaam se.

Yash : ku Maan ,, Geet to wo humari bhi hei per lagta hei tumhari kuch special hei ?

Ruchi naughtily: he babaji mere ghar mei meri dusri bahu aane ko hei aur mujhe pata hi nahi .

DM: are RuchI apni chod mujhe dekho na , love story mere samne chal rahi thi aur maine dekha nahi .. mujhe to apni umar pe sharam aa rahi hei , lagta hei baal dhoop mei safed kiye hein ,, etne choty bacche mujhse jyada smart nikle .( DM pouted nd all started laughing )

Veer smiled : DM aaapke baal brown hein , yahan bhi cheating .

It was going tough for Geet to bear this teasing by all ,, she was so shy-shy ,, Geet got up nd run out in a blink ,, Maan was blushing hard on this teasing ,, he was speechless nd cn'd run like Geet .

Yash: come on Maan , ab bol bhi do .

Maan: kya dad ,, kya bol du ?

Veer: that Geet is special for u nd u love her.

Ruchi laughed : ek bar bol de beta mei abhi band- baja bja deti hu .

DM: Thand rakh Ruchi ,, Geet ke dad abhi abroad hei , band baje mei time hei .

Ruchi: no prob Maa , platforme ready rakhty hei na .

Maan embarrassed : Mom , DM ..plzz stop this .

Veer: aji eesa mauka fir kahan milega ,, DM , mom .. carry on .

Maan: Veer.

Yash: say Yes Maan ,, there is no escape ,, do u love each other ?

Maan bit his lip , smiled shyly nd accepted nodding his head .. Yes Dad nd now excuse me .

He got up nd rushed out saving him from more teasing ,, he never thought in his dreams that his family cd tease him like that .. openly ,, but somewhere he was happy in his heart seeing d happiness of his family ,, he took a sigh of relief nd then thought about Geet .. Oh God!! Where is she ?

Maan mumbled : don't know how she'll react ?

Maan checked her in DM's room but she was not there then he called her on phone ,, her phone was ringing but she was not replying ,, Maan dialled again nd impatiently waiting for her reply ,, this time she replied .

Maan: G e et ,, where r u ?

Geet: don't talk to me ?

Maan: Geet plzz ,, don't do this ,, I need to talk u ,, plzz tell me where r u ?

Geet: then search urself .

She cut d call nd Maan huffed then came out in search of her ,, looked at every possible place nd lastly went on terrace , where they spent a beautiful time last nyt ,, he cd understand her condition , when it was hard for him to take that teasing of his family then that was more tough for Geet too ,, she is a girl nd facing his family teasing ,, he went close to her , held her from back nd sat on a couch keeping her on his lap ,, Geet startled nd looked at him .

Geet: Maan , ye kya ker rahe ho , plzz chodo mujhe .

Maan looked at her with a smile holding her more tightly ,, Geet looked all around nd then at him tensed .

Geet: chodo mujhe , koi aa jayega .

Maan: koi nahi aayega ,, aur ab darne ki jaroorat bhi nahi hei ,, I accepted what is truth .

Geet: what ?

Maan: that u r My Geet , nd I love u .

Geet looked at him awed ,, he never hesitate nd accept boldly , but how she wd face his family ?

Maan: in fact I m angry with u ?

Geet confused : for what ?

Maan: u didn't congratulate me properly ,, didn't give me any gift on my success.

Geet smiled at his complaint : u r so rich , have everything very costly nd top branded ,, what cn I gift u ,, I m a mere scholar .

Maan: u have all d most precious gifts for me , nd didn't say those magical words to me which cn make me d happiest person .. d 3 magical words from ur beautiful lips ,, I m eagerly waiting to listen them .

Geet blushed hard ,, she knew what he wanted to listen from her ... Her Confession ... Yes this is d best gift for him ,, thinking that she looked at him lovingly , craned her neck slowly nd placed her plumy lips on his cheek ,, kissed him nd whispered near his ear ... I love Maan ,, I love u so much .

It was really surprising for Maan ,, his heart felt a somersault nd his whole body tingled with an unknown pleasure ,, Geet slowly parted with lowered eyes nd blushy smile ,, Maan looked at her nd then at her beautiful rosy lips ,, she fulfilled his wish .. Confessed her love .

Maan was overwhelmed with love nd emotions he cupped her face with his one hand nd took her lower lip nd suck that softly mumbling .. Thanks for this lovely gift Jaan , I love u .

Geet shivered , losing her control over her ,, Geet held him tightly ,, she was in his lap nd Maan was feeling d effect in her body, even in his too ,, untamed raw desires started arousing ,, Maan took those trembling lips again for a full mouth kiss ,, it was her 1st kiss nd he was making that memorable ,, he was not hard nd not in hurry ,, very lovingly nd softly he was licking nd nibbling those petals ,, Geet's breaths turned heavier nd heavier ,, feeling short of breath she gasped to take some air nd parted her lips ,, Maan took d advantage nd slipped his tongue in her mouth to explore d sweet world ,, his tongue touched hers nd a current passed through their bodies ,, both shivered nd he pressed her more to him ,, Geet was in d spell of that magical moments ,, she snaked her arm around his neck nd with other hand threaded her long fingers in his thick hair ,, she gripped his hair gave a pull pressing her more to him ,, their whole body was warming up nd both wr in short of breaths ,, Maan's phone's ringing tone brought them back from their la-la land ,, he parted ,, touched his forehead with her nd whispered in a breaking voice .. love u jaan .

After taking few long breaths he became lil normal nd looked at his miss call ..dad ,, he called back nd Yash told Maan to join him in study with Geet .

Maan : Geet , dad is calling us in his study , come .

Geet:Maan mai kaise face karu sabko ..?

Maan: ku ab kya darr ? Geet they love u a lot , come I m with u na .

Maan held her hand nd brought her down ,, they entered in Yash's study where Yash,DM nd Ruchi wr waiting for them ,, DM nd Ruchi hugged Geet nd pecked her forehead nd blessed her ,, DM gestured Geet to sit near her nd Geet obeyed ,, she sat next to DM with lower head.

DM: we r very happy for both of u beta ,, thanks for giving us this happiness ,, nd very soon we'll talk to ur dad .,hope he didn't have any prob ,, give me ur dad's phone no.

Yash: though I have full faith that mr Handa won't deny me but if needed I cn beg for u ,, my children's nd family's happiness r imp for me .

Geet was touched with his words , how simple nd down to earth this man was ? She wdn't let him face any any insult nd 1st clearly talk to her Dad .

Geet: ji uncle ,, i'll mailed him to contact me then u cn talk .

Yash: good ,, Maan when u both r going back ?

Maan: at eve dad ,, nd mom I want to take Nakul with me ,,plzz,, he is willing to come with me .

Ruchi : nakul ,,, OK , when u r staying for some more yrs than take him ,, we'll manage with Satish .

DM : its good , Nakul cn take good care of Maan along with house nd I'll get some relief .

They all had some gen talk nd then retired to their respective rooms ,, DM,Maan nd geet did their packing to leave at eve flight with DM.


Precap ... Epilogue ...Starting of a blissful life ...


Epilogue - C


sorry for mistakes ...



Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Lovely update
Maan family arranged party in Delhi
He was restless didn't see feet
He admired her and teasing her
Lovely Maya punch rakul and Terrence scene was awesome
Waiting for next update
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🤗 Hello my dear friends ..

i updated The myth tonight ..will update it TM ..

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