MG FF 'Badmaash Dill'#2 Chap 49 Page 87 19th Sept'17 - Page 42

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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 49

I noticed that in last two updates you changed some parts from ArSh updates.

Again full of fun, mystery, suspense & little romance update. I enjoyed every bit of it. The start was funny. Maan already planning to run away as the food was short and poor khuranas were had to sleep without food.

Finally all found that maan & aliya were came. Nidhi, vikas & aliya were enjoying river rafting in such cold water while it was raining.

The pooja scene was hilarious. All were laughing at him and he was hell irritated sitting in jeans pant and doing pooja rituals. Lol.

Maan tried to stop aliya to wear that lehenga. He knew he will be in dead situation from all ladies. All were jealous to see that elegant lehanga wore by aliya. She already pointed her finger towards maan. Bechara maan.

Maan still felt that pang in his heart seeing nidhi getting married to sid. He still could not forget her. he still could not resist himself loving her when he was getting married to geet in 10 days. He was so aloof with geet; not interested in getting married with her, that hurts. I feel ke will he get marry her at all or will run away before that.

But the way he started convo with her I felt little good. Some hopes are there. But still sometimes I scared with what he thinks about her.

Liked all MG moments. The building up their relationship was good. Hope they will build strong bonding.

Geet & nandini were little uncomfortable with the way all mad gang was behaving very freely talking, scolding or taunting at each other. maan narrated her about vikas-piya marriage thing.

I felt good that nidhi sid were progressing and nidhi was actually responding him. The initiative from her to kiss him was good start.

Maan nidhi talk was soothing. Both explained and consoled each other.

The bandage scene was also cute one that he showed her trust over her and he urged her to keep that secret.

The dance scene bet maaneet was super. raaz rakhne aate hain na mujhe' dil jeet liya geet ne maan ka. Hope he will tell her about his past one day.

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Posted: 8 years ago
great updates...
just finised reading all...
love maan and geets equations...
cant wait for their marriage..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey...I just finished all the parts

I really liked how you started it...I mean it was beautiful. ...the moments between the characters...were fun , heart warming and adorable.
It looked very real...the story was excellently woven around an arranged marriage where we got to read different shades of joint Indian families ...moments between friends...moments between the prospective husband-wife...
I was enchanted ...I won't lie...it's essence was its simplicity ...and ofcourse the whole credit goes to you for that😊


But I do feel...you should have ended this story first and later started again with a different season ...overhauling the previous track...
Because the track you incorporated didn't fit...anybody would catch it if he/she is reading in a flow without taking breaks.
And this is the reason...the story seemed messed up.

I read the further story in Arsh version too...
So it seemed more messed up

Many parts in the story contradict each other.
Whether it's Maan's sudden realization of love for Nidhi...or his thoughts regarding Geet...
In Arsh version he has accepted that he can't live without Nidhi...he loves her so so much. ...phir kyu Geet to zabardasti ghusana🤢

And one of the most irritating things was the logic he presented for not marrying Nidhi...I felt like slapping him.
He is cheating on Geet ...no two ways about it...

I seriously feel for the girl...

Had it been like he had moved on and not telling Geet about his past...he would have been ok but this is not the case here...
This is no mistake...please. ...mistakes are unintentional.
Both Maan and Nidhi cry foul ki hamare sath ye ho gaya...but they did enjoy the phase..they miss that. Nobody misses hell. It is because of that ..they are what they are...so stop playing with others' lives.

Being a Maaneet fan...I don't want them to end up together...NEVER!!!!!!!


And talking of Geet...I don't she is negative...I would probably say she is flawed...and we all are...but since we have always seen her as Mahaan Atma in other stories ...it generates negative vibes

She is immature...anybody her age who did only have good things to experience might share the same fate...
If Maan Nidhi piya hadn't faced the tragedy...u never know they would also have been the same.

I think all the other characters havr probably gone through a lot...so comes the maturity in them...I really didn't like when somebody targeted her of something she isn't.
And which wife would react like Shilpa did when Armaan broke his eternal love story. ...I am sorry...but of late the sequences sometimes seem very unrealistic. ..

But it's still enjoyable because you never feel to incorporate humour and fun in each and every update...

I feel the character of Shilpa/Geet doesn't fit in the second part...she seemed useless.

Yes I agree with you that every character is important. ...but I think every character was described beautifully except her...
For example in Harry Potter...every character is important...but we still know it's Harry Potter's journey...but here Geet/Shilpa was only seen in bits and pieces...even less than a side character.
But it's not your fault...wo yahan fit hi nahi baithi ...if she comes just for the sake of the title...I don't think it's good for the story.

You are a beautiful writer ...but I somewhere I do think...kuch jhol hua is story me...
Nevertheless. ...I can't deny that your characters Dev Rohail Rahul and Aliya are my favouites...

Let's see what you intend to do with the story...All the best😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanjana_Roy


Many parts in the story contradict each other.
Whether it's Maan's sudden realization of love for Nidhi...or his thoughts regarding Geet...
In Arsh version he has accepted that he can't live without Nidhi...he loves her so so much. ...phir kyu Geet to zabardasti ghusana🤢

And one of the most irritating things was the logic he presented for not marrying Nidhi...I felt like slapping him.
He is cheating on Geet ...no two ways about it...

I seriously feel for the girl...

Had it been like he had moved on and not telling Geet about his past...he would have been ok but this is not the case here...
This is no mistake...please. ...mistakes are unintentional.
Both Maan and Nidhi cry foul ki hamare sath ye ho gaya...but they did enjoy the phase..they miss that. Nobody misses hell. It is because of that ..they are what they are...so stop playing with others' lives.

Being a Maaneet fan...I don't want them to end up together...NEVER!!!!!!!
So true, I also don't understand the logic when in Arsh version they both talk to each other about their feelings after both are married in Delhi and say ok we will move on: seriously?? when you are accepting you cannot live without the other person how can you justify and be true to this marriage of yours...this is for both nidhi and maan/armaan...like you said if he is truly moving on then ok...but only time/sameera can tell us that...


And talking of Geet...I don't she is negative...I would probably say she is flawed...and we all are...but since we have always seen her as Mahaan Atma in other stories ...it generates negative vibes

She is immature...anybody her age who did only have good things to experience might share the same fate...
If Maan Nidhi piya hadn't faced the tragedy...u never know they would also have been the same.
The character of Geet/Shilpa has not been fully opened yet, she is not the main character here in this story so far, it is more maan/armaan But I trust Sameera to bring out the lead heroines character more...

I think all the other characters havr probably gone through a lot...so comes the maturity in them...I really didn't like when somebody targeted her of something she isn't.
And which wife would react like Shilpa did when Armaan broke his eternal love story. ...I am sorry...but of late the sequences sometimes seem very unrealistic. ..

But it's still enjoyable because you never feel to incorporate humour and fun in each and every update...
I agree she is an amazing writer keeps us hooked on with fantastic weaving of characters...

I feel the character of Shilpa/Geet doesn't fit in the second part...she seemed useless.

Yes I agree with you that every character is important. ...but I think every character was described beautifully except her...
For example in Harry Potter...every character is important...but we still know it's Harry Potter's journey...but here Geet/Shilpa was only seen in bits and pieces...even less than a side character.
But it's not your fault...wo yahan fit hi nahi baithi ...if she comes just for the sake of the title...I don't think it's good for the story.

You are a beautiful writer ...but I somewhere I do think...kuch jhol hua is story me...
Nevertheless. ...I can't deny that your characters Dev Rohail Rahul and Aliya are my favouites...

Let's see what you intend to do with the story...All the best😊 Waiting eagerly for the next few parts to see more of Geet coming out...The one biggest thing for me is TRUST in sameera and her writings...have loved all her stories so far and loving this one too...just takes me few reads to understand what her thinking is which I love doing...Waiting eagerly for updates...and Always look so eagerly for the updates of her stories...Thank you Sameera for such great writing...
The only thing I know is to read and enjoy I for sure cannot write so totally appreciate your beautiful writings bringing the characters to life...

Edited by Alamelu - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
shall be waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
any possibility of you updating this?
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Posted: 7 years ago
its more than 2 months
any chance of update
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Posted: 7 years ago

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Waiting for next chapter
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Posted: 7 years ago
Please update, maan and geet getting married...

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