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OK this was the unexpected maneet ff I came across. I be came so engrossed in it that I forgot all my tests assignments and was just reading it continuously from 4 days. You have done a great work the chapter you write are very big and literally I love reading long ones. It was such roller coaster story. At starting I found Maan to be very simple sober person and Geet cute but as the story progressed I love their bonding and Maan's maturity how easily he handle everything. Then loved how Geet formed the bond with Maan's family even when her bonding with Maan is so less.But loves it. Then further I felt Maan is cheating Geet, he is double crossing her, I so hated Maan there then slowly everything got cleared but still the bond he shares with Nidhi it was like he loves her I couldn't understand that but slowly when their being d spy part came it was a huge blow and I was just what is happening. At times I felt how many twist and turns are there in this story. but then I really loved all these. Then I loved how Maan always kept Geet first but when I came to know he knew Geet from starting and he was acting I didn't liked the fact it again made me think was he really cheating on her. How could he just analyse her when he don't know her as a person but slowly he fell in love with her. Loved his interview part. Then when Geet said no to him for the marriage just because if some random person's thinking I didn't liked it. If he always thinks about her then she should give it a chance but no she was not ready to acknowledged it. Loved how Nidhi made Geet understand. That was grt and literally Geet was comparing herself with Maan. Everyone has their own individuality. how could she???. But then the atmosphere we live just created this all non sense.
But finally she agreed to marry him. the final blow that Nidhi gave to Geet made her understand Maan's importance in her life.she understood how she means to him and when she called him up and he being very angry with her still picked her phone just because it was so late and that bothered him. I just loved how much she matters to him and I just love their talking it was so nice and finally she Geet said that she don't want to loose him. But at a point I also didn't liked Geet getting attracted to Maan becuse of his looks his living standard but it was nothing.
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CHAPTER 48
Lets Began


"Aaahhh!!!" Geet yelled out hysterically only to be silenced by him with his palm over her mouth and his push against the wall.. "Bhoot nahi hun!" He smirked at his wife's scared look.. She just returned from a tiring event and wants to go to sleep really hard.. It was known that Mr Husband is out of country and whole room is empty.. Instead of the tubelight, she switched on the lamp, threw her saree away on the bed and headed towards the washroom for a quick facewash and change to nightsuit But what was that?? Before she could open the bathroom door, it opened it self and there someone came out scaring the hell out of her.. She was half naked.




"Maaahhh..." The slow mourning sound of Aliya made both Rohail Dev turn their heads in surprise towards the main door.. Past 3 days were a blast!! The four partyed high, roamed around the amaizing scenic beauties of Mauritius.. The only thing that didn't happen was Maan and Aliya taking a leave from the office, it became impossible for them to even consider it keeping in mind that they need it long in future..
"Tum itni jaldi kese agayi??" Rohail got up and walked forward to help with the baggages she was stepping in with... "Hhh.. jaldi agayi??!" Keeping the shoppers over the table, Aliya took a deep breath and then looked at the clock.. it was 2:45 pm..
"Mat poocho meri dukh bhari daastaan.." Trying to wipe off her fake tears SHE FALL DOWN ON THE SOFA NEXT TO dev... "Steve! the biggest idiot in the world.." She gritted her teeth..
"Ab yeh steve kaun hai??" Rohail arched his brow..
"Bhai ka bosss!! gadha kahin ka.." Aliya made a yucky face and then said.. "Kisi stupid business meeting ko ussne dinner meeting bana k yahan rakh diya hai raat mein... Ab khana banaoon mein..." She yelled while throwing off one of her sandles..
"Huh??? Iss ghar mein business dinners bhi hote hain??" Dev find it unbelieveable..
"Nahi hote naa... i mean hone chahiye, itna lavish isiliye diya tha lekin...bhai to.. u know office, office mein khatam kar k ata hai.. ya phir agar aisa kuch hai bhi to bahar dinner pe le jata hai kyunki obviously ghar bhara hua hota hai.." Aliya explained.. "So asusual steve ko pata tha k bhai mana kar dega so ussne bhai se kuch poocha he nahi.. sab kuch decide kar k sirf inform kar diya!!"
"Awww..." Dev passed a poor look to Aliya.. "To bahar se order kar lo.. itni jaan maarne ki kya zaroorat hai??" Rohail asked from the back..
"Arre yaar!! tumhe kya lagta hai? unka boss kyun tulla hua hai yahan meeting k liye?? Kyunki huamara khana different aur bahar se to hatt k he hota hai... he finds it delicious!!" Aliya made a face.. "Phir wo faaltu mein bhai k reputation pe baat ajayegii!! Wese bhi yahan ka khana kum se kum humare taste buds ko to suit nahi karta!! bohat kum aisa kuch hai jisko khane k liye hum bahar jaate hain!!" She added..
"Oh ho ho!! To isliye tum ajj jaldi ayi ho??" Dev giggled.. "Bhai ka apna kaam hota haina? to saare links nikal atay hain... can u imagine? mera boss mujhe a ke bola hai.. Ell you look tired, you should take a break go home and relax!!" She gritted her teeth.. "Aur phir mera phone bajta hai aur mujhe yeh faaltu bakwas sunne ko milti hai!!"
"Hahahahaa!!" Both Dev Rohail burst out laughing... "Enjoy!!" Dev patted her back..
"Bakwaas nahi karo zyaada.." She shoved him off.. "Aur abhi 3 bajj raha hai! main sone ja rahi hoon.. Mujhe theek 4 baje utha dena warna jo hoga usske zimmedaar tum donow hoge phir khana bhai se ache se jhaar!!" She warned and got up to go..

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Tired, controlling his temper Vikas was trying the 7th sherwani shocking pink in color.. He came out of the trial room and Piya burst out laughing "Hahahahaha!!! Maan ne suicide kar leyna hai!!" She said between her laugh..
"Kyun itni hassi arahi hai tumhe?" Sid appeared from behind and too burst out laughing soon to be joined by Nidhi... "SHUT UP!!!" Vikas yelled at the three..
When it was Vikas's wedding time, He called Maan and almost ordered him, emotionally blackmailed him to be there for him atlease atleast a month before his wedding... Next all Vikas did that month was to attend his office and Maan on his place felt like a real donkey taking his parents to shop for his wedding, holding baggages, trying sherwanis for him like a dummy... Maan and Vikas has got almost same height and built which makes them eachother's body double..
If this was not enough, Maan was even responsible for all decorations and every little thing that Vikas should be doing on his own wedding but all Vikas did was to attend Office..

Now it was Vikas's time.. Maan was in Mauritius and here poor Vikas was taken out to shop along with ladies and try outfits for Maan.. He was unknown to the fact that it was Maan Khurrana's revenge.. After hearing alot of bhashan from Soha he asked her to take it easy and drag Vikas..
Time was less in Wedding and so first thing Soha and Neha(Sid's mother) decided to get rid off with was groom's sherwani and then bride's dress color accordingly.. Bad for Vikas, he was free with no office work plus Sid warned him he will anyway take him on gun point if he saw he is alone amongst the ladies...
Neha, Soha, Tanya, Smriti, Nidhi, Geet, Nandini, Piya, Vikas and Sid... According to Sid and Vikas this was not shopping, this was torture...
"Mujhe item samajh k rakha hai?? aur yeh thakka hua shiny broche!!" Piya enacted Maan.. "Trust me... main bhi bhaag jata!" Vikas gritted his teeth...
"Aur abhi chachi soch rahi hain k Maan ko phone karen aur poochen k usse kya lagta hai Geet k lehnge ka color kya hona chahiye so that uske accordingly wo sherwani ka color decide karen kyunki aise kuch samajh nahi araha.." Sid giggled..
"Main dulhan hun? mujhe pehna hai?? Phone patakh dena hai ussne.." Piya controlled her laugh.. "Actually lets tease him.." Nidhi jumped with with this idea.. Others were roaming around in search of their own stuff and colors..
"Khabardaar jo usko phone kar k tumne uska dimagh kharab kiya aur ussne mera!!" Vikas pointed a finger at Nidhi who was already pissed off too much.. "Usska reaction janne ka sab ko itna he shawk hai to main bata deta hun!! Shaadi pe black sherwani aur uske sath Geet ka white lehnga!! perfect combination!!" Vikas yelled out in complete Maan mode..
"Hahahaha!! i can expect that!!" Piya giggled whereas Sid and Nidhi completely agreed with her.. "Ajeeb tamasha hai!!" Nidhi shook her head..
"Chalo... niklo tum saare yahan se!! Main khud done karunga issko!!" Vikas clicked his fingers pointing at the door for all..

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"U R Back!" Dev giggled on watching Maan's pissed off look.. "Don't start!!" He pointed a finger at him.. "Aliya kahan hai??" He inquired taking a deep breath.. "Kitchen mein hai.. Bada khayal hai usko tumhari reputation ka.." Dev made fun of the two..
"Uffo... Ab isko kya naya rog lag gaya??" Maan shook his head on seeing Vikas's name on his phone..
"Phone pakar k rakho.. i am sending few pics, just select one and get done with this!!" Vikas blasted out as soon as Maan picked up the call.. "Please..." Maan noded ending the call..
In next five minutes a cream color sherwani was done!!



"R U Freaky out of your mind??" Maan felt like killing Aliya after witnessing the menu.. Chicken Biryani, Lasagna, Indian Salad and velvet cake with pineapple soffle.. "Yeh kis kism ka combination hai??" He yelled out..
"Arre par bechari ne banaya to naa.." Dev interrupted in Aliya's rescue..
"Tum chup raho!!" Maan threw daggers at him..
"Yeh mera banaya hua combination hai!! Aur jitna main teen din nahi khati utna to yeh log ek time pe kha jate hain!! Issiliye main sab heavy heavy banaya hai!! khaen aur jayen!!" Aliya gritted her teeth..
"Aur main isko bacha raha tha??" Dev mentally kicked himself for this..
"What do u mean khaen aur jaen??" Maan frowned..
"Kyun?? sulana hai apne yahan??" She raised her question innocently making Rohail fell off the sofa.. He was quiet this whole time but the way she was handling Maan was hilarious...
"Hahahha!!" Rohail burst out laughing.. "Yaar!! yeh bade maze ki bandi hogayi hai!!" Dev commented.. "Bhai tumhara to koi mujhe interest dikh nahi raha shaadi mein.. tum apni chor in donwo ki shaadi karwa do!! Mujhe yeh item chahiye ghar mein.." He openly demanded..
"Sir na phorr dun mein tumhara!!" Aliya glared at him.. "And bhai don't worry!! Bhale yeh combination humay suit nahi karta but its excellent for them!!" She passed a cute smile to Maan after which he just shook his head in agony and left it all on her..

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"Hahahahahaa!!!" Sid fell off the bed after listening the whole story from Dev Rohail.. The were back and now narrating their Mauritius experience.. "Seriously!! tumhari shaadi nahi hoti naa? main ek maheene tak nahi hilna tha wahan se.. haha!!" Dev added..
"I mean u should have seen bhai! wo bass apne baal he nochne wala tha!!" Rohail chuckled..
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"Tum ghar par nahi ho! ok??" Maan turned around pointing a finger at Aliya..
"To apko kya laga? main un gadhon k saath beth k dinner karne wali hoon?? huhh..." Aliya huffed "App he ko mubarak ho wo sab kuch.." She made a face and before Maan would kill her marched upstairs.. "Yeh ladki!!!" Maan tighten his fist and jaws with frustration..

It was mutually decided that they all will have their dinner after guests will leave and Dev, Aliya and Rohail will remain upstairs and wouldn't show up to anyone..
The guests were down and RohailDev up in Aliya's room busy on a carrom board.. "Yeh tum kya kar rahi ho??" Rohail arched his brow over Aliya who was busy in trying to listen full conversation going downstairs through the slide..
"I don't trust bhai with those people.." She whispered out narrowing her eyes..
"Yeh poori satak gayi hai! Rohail tum soch lo.." Dev passed a horrified look to Rohail.. "Issko to theek karta hun main abhi.." Rohail got up from the bed and walked out through the door in front to pull Aliya back in the room..

"So?? what do you feel about this project??" Steve asked Maan about his opinion to which Maan cleared his throat."Ahhmm.. umm its brilliant but.. " Maan started.. "I need a month's leave before this.. i just cannot take any additional work!!" He stated..
"Oh no!! you are not going anywhere.. once we start and things settle down, u can take a leave then.." Steave argued..
"Oh wow!! shaadi postpone ho rahi hai!!" Aliya smirked at Rohail who was now more interested in listening to this conversation than Aliya.. "Shut up!!" He glared at her..
"Dude!! i have to go.. there is a wedding i need to attend in India.." He tried to explain..
"Oh please!! which wedding takes on earth a whole month?? plus i understand you have got a big fat family so there must be loads of weddings to take place.. One can happen without you in it.." Martha, the other college argued... "That won't be a problem!!" Steve added..
"Oh yes!! its hell of a problem!!" A voice boomed in the air and she was down.. "Urghh" Maan hit his head against his palm.. "Oh!! i thought you were not at home!!" Steve smiled at Aliya.. "Yeahh.. i just came back.." Aliya too showed her fake smile.. "On time!!" She narrowed her eyes at Maan.. "Look.. there is a minor problem!! that wedding cannot take place without him because is the poor groom!! plus the bride is Vikas Bhai's sister.." Aliya mocked at Steves face.. "Anddd u know me and and him right?? you really want more like us to come here and then kill you??" Aliya gave steve the most sweetest expressions ever..
"You are getting married to Vikas's sister??" Steve's eyes popped out.. "Why on earth do u wana spoil your life dude??" Steve felt like fainting..
"Hahh.." Rohail's jaw dropped down with the question and Dev was just too shocked to see how Aliya was dealing with Maan's boss.. "Abay isske boss se aise kese baat kar rahi hai??"

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"Hehehehe!!" Sid laughed out more.. "Arre tumhe pata nahi hai!! steve ka aliya aur vikas se special panga hai!! In logon ne bohat harkatein ki hain ek doosre k saath!! Infact steve ne haath jorre thai Maan k saamne.. kabhi to mujhe boss jesa feel karwaya karo hahah!!" He added..
"Arre wo Rohail ko mil k bola.. u seems like a nice, kind man! why did u got engaged to her then?? hahaha!! Aur Aliya ne phir nahi choda ussko!!" Dev held his stomach..




Few Days Later..

Except for Aliya and Maan, everyone was in hell.. So many things to do and decide in such a less amount of time.. "Ahmm mujhe shaadi mein jana hai!!" Aliya cried infront of Maan.. She was hearing so much from Rohail, Sid, Nidhi, Vikas and Piya that now it has become a torture to miss all the fun..
"Oho!! Beach Wedding the contract maine liya hai??" Maan arched his brows.. "Achaa!! jese k appka to koi masla he nahi hai!" She pouted..
"Huh!! mera kya hai? ek jugar lagaoonga and my work will shift to coorg!!" He raised his shoulders carelessly.. "Urghhh!!" She got irritated.. "Aur wese bhi, agar yeh contract tumne na liya hota tab he ek he shaadi attend kar paati.. Office se aise he to nai milne wali tumhe itni lumbhi chutti.."
"Haan!! Appke guests k liya khana banana hai to mere boss ko aise he mujhe chutti dene ka mann karta hai!!" She gritted her teeth.. "Hahahaha!!" Maan was enjoying this..
"India se phone hoga.. nahi uthaoongi!!" Aliya was so angry and this mobile ring was irritating her more.. "Hello???" She picked it up.. It was the bride of the beach wedding.. "Ww..what?? but how?? oh no no!! okay!!" Maan looked away from his book on hearing this weird oneside conversation..
"Kya hua??" He asked when Aliya was done with the call..
"They broke up!!" She gave Maan the most serious expressions ever..
"Huh??" His jaw dropped down..
"They broke up!!!" Aliya yelled out and started dancing!! "They broke up.." She started singing.. "Ab hum janege.. aur app jugaar lagao gay! apna mera donow kaa!!" She pulled away the book from Maan..
"No ways!! Tumhe pata hona chahiye k jiski shaadi hoti hai wo to hota he khatre mein hai lekin jiski hone wali hai wo aur zyaada khatre mein hota hai!!" He really passed some deadly expressions..
"Oho bhai!! busss ab koi faaltu baat nahi!! Chalein uthen!! arrangement karen.." She dragged him with herself.. it was party time for her..

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To try out the lehnga, Geet and Nidhi both were called to botique and Right now they both were sitting and waiting.. "Itna thakane wala kaam hai yeh!! Isse achi to court marriage hoti hai!!" Nidhi sighed..
"Ek type ki shaadi kitni baar karogi?" Geet teased her making Nidhi's mouth open up.. "Thanks to your fiance!!" She made a face..
"Hahahaha!" Geet giggled..
"Mam!!" the two looked up where the sales girl was standing with a wedding dress in her hand.. "Agar yeh mera hai to i am flattered! Iske liye main zaroor shaadi karungi aur agar yeh tumhara hai to i am jealous!!" Nidhi commented while looking at such an amaizing dress..
"I love this!!!" Geet too drooled over..
"Umm who is Nidhi??" The girl asked and Geet's face flunk.."Uhhh.. she is.." She pointed at Nidhi while making a face whereas Nidhi happily got up and went ahead for the trial...
"Mam yours.." The girl again appeared after a while with Geet's dress in her hand s this time.. "Thanks!!" Geet's heart already fell for Nidhi's one and so her mood was also a bit off.. Her dress was wrapped in a brown sheet so she didn't even look at it, just took it and went inside the changing room..
Closing the door behind, she checked the trail room as per her habit and then started unwrapping it.. The dress was no doubt very pretty but what to do when heart was gone to some other...
With the non interested heart, she wore the dress which was heavy but handleable and when she turned around towards the mirror she just stopped!! "Its me?" She questioned herself with an absent mind.. With little of her own makeup of the dress she was wearing previously, her simple chain and open long hairs till waist, she was looking so gorgeous!
Almost perfect fitting plus the style and color combination was suiting her too well.. It was all Soha's choice for her one and only Bahu!! She drooled over herself from top to bottom and then stopped at a point.. "Yeh yahan se tight hai!!" She made a face running her fingers on the belly.. "Issko loose karne ko bolti hun!" She bit her lower lip and got out only to find Nidhi smiling and commenting over her own dress to the girl.. There was no doubt she was looking magnificent!! For the first time Nidhi was seen in such kind of attire and it was suiting her very much..
"Wow!! you look amaizing!!" Geet complimented her..
"Copy that!!" Nidhi blinked her eyes at Geet..
"Mam apko kahin fitting issue??" The girl asked Geet and Nidhi both..
"Nahi yaar!! mera to inch by inch perfect hai!! I just need to make sure i maintain it!!" Nidhi giggled and Geet took a second to think.. "Intead of altering, i should work on my figure.."
"Mam app??" The girl again called her..
"Ummm.. its perfect!!" Geet smiled inhaling a deep breath to hide the little belly bump if it was visible by any chance..
"To theek hai phir.. main lock karwa deti hun!!" The girl smiled and walked away whereas the two went back to change..

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"Hain?? to ab se tum strict dieting pe??" Nandini looked at Geet with hollow eyes.. "To phir aur kya karun main??" Geet questioned back..
"Daba k dieting karo.. aur kya karogi??" Piya interrupted between Geet, Nandini and Sapna's dieting planning.. "Lekin agar tumhare bhaiyun ko pata chala!! acha mazak banne gaa!!" she added..
"No ways!!" Geet gave a warning look to all..
"Aur vikram to tumhe jaan jaan k khilayega!!" Sapna giggled..
"Mazak nahi banaen mera!!"




"Here is the plan!!" Being aware with cornil's strategy, Maan Khurrana was finally ready for a final shut down plan.. "But we want him alive!!" One of the officers reminded him.. "Pata hai mujhe..." He rolled his eyes and started..
"So.. as we know tha cornil is planning big this time and as per my assessment, ussne bachon ko use karna hai!!" He pressed his lips togather.. There was an orphanage in Coorg which Maan and Nidhi usually visits whenever they go there.. It was just a simple accident that once Nidhi met an injured kid on the road and in order to help him and drop him his home she located that orphanage and then its inside story slowly.. The place was owned by Cornil's fake identity and their on face everything was okay but in real small kids were getting brain washed and trained for some big destruction...
Soon with the help of some little matches, help in study, Maan and Nidhi became friends and popular amongst kids.. To cornil this proved to be good as he checked Maan Nidhi's alibi and it was perfect! He was convinced that they are some mad crazy innocent people who are just into kids and that earns his orphanage a goodwill and he can play his game even safer...
The plan was to hide some dead body and speculation that the dead man was an important Army man will definitly bring Army officer's attention to coorg.. This will be the reason why officers will enter coorg and their investigation will lead them near orphanage and bring cornil back to coorg to takecare of his own safety..
Even though they were well aware that cornil work alone but still, for the safe side if there was a partner in crime then army near orphanage is the only thing will bring them all togather.. And this is where actual things will get done...
By the end of the session everyone was clear with the plan and their locations.. Few officers were also supposed to be disguised as the caretakers and workers of the area where Sid's wedding will take place and his family with reside.. In another words Maan was also making arrangements for the protection of Nidhi and his whole family from any fuss..
He already warned to Aliya that they will go direct to Coorg and so no one should be informed..

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"O MY GOD!!" Aliya was unable to believe, place like this could actually exist.. First the location of the cottage was so odd that even if you cross the way you won't be able to guess there is something behind those wild trees. Then the whole roof was covered with green shallow plantation and that hidden waterfall behind the cottage.. "I can spend my whole life in this!!" She commented with wide open eyes...
"Shawk se... but first we need to clean the area!!" Maan groaned taking the whole look of the inside once again.. He was a cleaning freak and the whole cottage right now was covered with dust..
In next few minutes worst happened than Aliya's imagination.. They both were bringing a little whatever furniture was inside, out and slpashing water all over the place to clean it.. "Jharr poonch k nahi ho sakta tha!!" Aliya gritted her teeth looking at Maan..
"Nahiii!!" A stern answer came from Maan who was spalshing water through pipe towards the door and just turned around.. "Ahhh bhaiii!!!" Aliya yelled out.. He was keeping his finger at the pipe end to controll pressure and now it was all going over Aliya.. "Oopps!!" He took his tongue between his teeth.. "You are so dead now.." She threw her sandles away and the water fight started between both..
Walls, ceiling, kitchen and each and every room witnessed their fight and got washed off in between.. "Huhhh!!" And at last after the hectic waterplay, they changed and got seated outside the cottage on the bare grass to have something to eat.. "Maggie was my favorite!! ban hogayi!!" She cried..
"Shukar karo tumhe India mein ban nahi kiya.. Ab chup chaap khao!!" They both were enjoying fruits at the moment.. "Uhhh!!! aur kapron ka kya?? Hum yehi jeans shirt pehne gay Sid ki shaadi pe??" She raised her question.. She had a heated argument with Maan when they decided to reach coorg and Maan strictly warned her not to tell anyone about it.. Her question was that if she won't do that then who is going to arrange wedding dresses for her?? Why can't she just inform her mom and let her takecare of all that?? But Maan had his own reasons and so he kept arguing and atlast ended it by saying that he will takecare of it..
"Ufffoo!!" He shook his head.. "Andar ka sab sookh jaye, yeh sara samaan anadar rakh lein!! phir baat karna iss baare mein!!" He really needed some peace to think for a while.. His plan needs Aliya's antics...
"Aur shaadi ki kum apne kaam ki zyaada socho!!" He tried to remind Aliya how she got this long holiday... Yes!! Maan had his office to attend but Aliya was also not officially free.. She was only allowed for this long holiday only at the cost of taking a huge amount of work with herself which se will do from there and will also appear for any online conversation at any point of time as per need..

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"Don't you dare tell me that!! i wil kill you!!" Sid almost got a heart attack when it came out that weather is unpredictable in coorg and so his wedding planner is already backing out.. All the cards were sent, like Bank holidays and school holidays after mid term exams were in pipeline and so it was clear that people have already started their planning and everone is so excited for thie destination wedding..
"Bahar ki to baad mein... yeh ghar pe he sab coorg ki information nikal k itne excited hogaye hain!! Inke liye to picnic hogayi hai, ab kisko ja k kya bolun??" He scratched his head.. Change of plans were impossible..

"Oye!! baaki atay rahenge baad mein!! Tum donow to mere saath he chalogay warne bandook ki nok pe bhi le k jaoonga!!" Sid tried to threaten Vikas and Piya..
"Arre tumhe pata nahi hai meri behn ki shaadi hai?? Kitne kaam hote hain!!" Vikas dramatically reasoned..
"Tumhe pata haina tumhari behn ki kis k saath shaadi hai?? Meri shaadi nahi hui to uski bhi nahi hogi!!" Sid retorted back..
"Hahahaha!!! Kyun tension le raha hai yaar?? sab ho jayega!! Aur Nidhi ko kyun nahi bataya hai?? wo to kitna coorg jati rehti hai?usko wahan ka poora idea hoga.." Vikas inquired and suggested at the same time..
"Nidhi se meri baat ho chuki hai!! Ussne bohat simple way mein kaha k wahan ja k dekh lenge naa.. abhi se panic create karne ki zaroorat nahi hai!! Bol to aise rahi thi jese magically sab ho jana hai!!" He gritted his teeth...
"Well!! i trust her.. " Vikas chuckled..
"And i don't!! Khair.. the point is k tum donow ko to main saath he le k jaoonga baaki sab jab bhi aen.. i don't care!!" He stated clearly..
"Jese main yahan rukne wala tha!! pagal samjha hai mere ko?" Vikas shook his head and continued with their banter..




"OMG!!" Aliya had her jaw drop when Maan took her to a factory of his one associate/friend 'Rajeev' in coorg.. Rajeev's business was of clothing and in coorg, he had this factory where he recruited almost all the willing women from coorg to come and work for him.. Later, it turned out that Rajeev's out products were so in demand that work just grew.. He now had outlets in Mumbai and several other places..
When Maan entered with Aliya, he took a promise from her that she will keep her mouth shut and won't tell a thing about this to anyone or else she knew he would be in trouble and his name would be used to gather discount and all and he was in no mood of letting anyone take advantage of it..
"Whatever you want..." Rajeev was also in factory for some work and so he himself took Aliya inside.. There Aliya saw several women working and the outfits were just Aaamaizing!!! "Infact! Tum chaho, to tum apne ideas ko le kar bhi kuch design karwa sakti ho! Tumhare liye jaldi he ho jayega!" He smiled..
"Koi faaltu fund advantage dene ki zaroorat nahi hai! Ek paisa oppar nahi dunga bata raha hun!" Maan made a face and warned Rajeev.. He knew Aliya was getting pampered because of him...
"Tumse kaun baat kar raha hai?? hatto side pe.." Rajeev made a face and kicked maan aside.. "Pata hai! Nidhi ka order sunn k to mujhe chakkar agaye thai! I was like.. yeh pehanti to hai nahi! Order ku de rahi hai itna sab.." Rajeev smiled and told maan...
"Usske Order k bhi paise main nahi dunga!!" Maan pointed a finger getting allert..
"Hahahaha!! Filhaal to sab k paise tum he doge.. Phir deal karte rehna tum!!" Rajeev winked at him..
"Huh!! You wish.." Maan made a face.. "Aur tum!! jaldi karo.. poora din nahi hai mere pass.." He showed his eyes to Aliya..
"Bhai!! App to rehne he dein.. Khud kya pehne gay??" Aliya questioned..
"Yeh dega naa mujhe!! Ek din k liye udhaar pe kapre!" Maan slapped Rajeev's shoulder tight..
"Haan haan!! Tum khareedo gay thodi ek baar pehnne k liye.." Rajeev rolled his eyes at maan..

The two friends then went inside the office to chat for a while whereas Aliya wondered around, making designs in her mind and loving each and every piece of work so much that wants to buy all..
She was still wondering around after explaining what she wants and for which event to the women dealing with her, when she stopped in a room where an old lady had come to give lunch to her daughter.. While the daughter was having her food, the old lady was busy netting something..
"Appko kuch chahiye tha?" The girl asked..
"Nahi.." Aliya shook her head in a no..
"Ae achi lagay hai?" The old lady, unfolded the whole thing she was netting and asked her daughter which made Aliya's heart stop for a while.. Everyone knew that Aliya was a shopoholic.. she likes something and have money, she buys it atonce..
That old lady had netted a whole lehnga choli by her very own hands and the colors and work she has done was unbelieveable! Aliya sharma had seen nothing like this before in her entire life till date.. Netting can be so beautiful?
"Yeh appne haathon se banaya hai???" She couldn't help but ask with her popped open eyes..
"Hehh!! Meri maa ko shawk hai sweater bunne ka.. Wo kuch alag karti rehti hai oon k dhaagon se.." The girl smiled at Aliya..
"Aur phir iska kya karti hain??" Aliya was so wishing to but this..
"Hum kya karenge? ya to rakh leyte hain! ya bech dete hain!" The girl said as if it was nothing.. "Aap khareede gii yeh?" The girl asked the question Aliya was so wishing..
"Kkkyun nahi.." Aliya stammered for a moment..
"Maa ko aj kal inn bhaari lehngon ko banane ka shawk hua wa hai.." The girl told Aliya and Aliya can vouch for the fact that no machine can make what this old lady had made.. The combo, design and colors.. And yes! Even though these were woolen lehngas, they were heavy ones which could only be used for big occassions which hardly will happen in coorg and between people who live ther but in Aliya's life.. Its like occassions come every month..
Soon, Aliya was out giving info to maan about what just happened.. "You know its worth right??" He asked her..
"Ofcorse bhai!! " Aliya gave a stern look to Maan.. Who better than her can know it, in the recent past days for the wedding she has done a full research over lehngas and everything.. "Phir usse ussi hisaab se paise dena, chahe wo demand kare ya nahi kare.. Yahan mat discount k chakkaron mein parr jana!" He warned..



A WEEK LATER...

Before Vikas announced about him and Piya leaving with Khurranas, it was decided between Handas that they will only go to attend the wedding since they has alot to do for Geet's wedding aswell but as soon as Vikas announced about him and Piya leaving providing his own reasons and bonding, slowly and gradually everyone agreed to leave with them however, it was just a 5 day trip and a good vacation!!


Aliya and Maan on the other end, not just were busy in their office work plus they found out about Sid's wedding planner backing off and so Aliya took the charge.. It was a smart move by Maan to involve Orphanage kids with Aliya in preparations.. His whole point was the keep kids off the hook so that no more brainwashing take place.. First step was already done and Cornil was in Coorg and Maan was very much sure that he will easily let kids help and play with Aliya since she developed a good bond with them in just few days..
She used to play along with them in the evenings; sometimes badminton, sometimes some other stuff.. And as far as Aliya's alibi was concerned, it was obviously very clear and pure for cornil to trust and make him think and it is his safest play...

At the age of 10-15, kids are always attracted to creativity and so it was easy and on board!! To collect flowers or make artificial one, shopping and what not.. Aliya herself has so much to admire and see all the over the coorg and she knew Maan won't be able to give her that time and so kids were her travelling buds and tour guids..
To run inside the corn maize fields, to witness the coffee farm or to enjoy the thrill of desi river rafting!! It was so much fun for her..


...


"R U Serious??" Piya jumped up with joy while looking infront at the wedding house in the middle of woods.. "What else u were expecting??" Sid asked while pushing her forward along with him.. "Matlab... main to moinjo darro xpect kar rahi thi!!" She giggled only to receive a light hit at the back on her head by Sid!..






Vikas felt like laughing so hard, through out this whole journey in the bus and now here he can see his nani fainting.. Piya looks new to everyone of his family!! They never saw her this loud and free with anyone.. The moment, Vikas, Piya, Nidhi and Sid sat down, the never ending commentary and bakwaas started..

It was so much fun and took nearly 2 maxi buses with all the relatives and friends to travel togather, due to the coming bank holiday and then just one friday and weekend, it was convinient for all to travel along and enjoy the wedding stay..

Like a viral people spreaded all over the place, feeling excited and full of joy! "Uncle ji!! Arrangements ka kya hai??" Dev pulled Sid back by his shirt and asked.. He can see hell coming for him and all other boys with this stupid last minute backout of wedding planner..
"Tum sab kis liye aye ho phir??" Sid raised his own question only to get smacked by Vikas from the back.. "Saale! Yeh itni badi jagah hai.. kaunsi cheez kahan milegi kuch ata pata hai, tumne superman samjha hai humko??" Vikas was done sight seeing and Yelling at Sid...

"I feel instead of shouting, we should work!!" Sid made a face and walked forward..

"Outstanding!!" Nidhi commented rolling her eyes.. She was standing along with Vikas outside sticking with a pillar looking at all dispersing to search and make the necessary arrangements.. Its been an hour they all reached here after travelling almost for about 7 hours and now after taking the rest for an hour, they were back on their feet to search and make arrangements needed..

"Tum kis khushi mein chup khadi ho?? You know better whats where and i bet you can make arranegements in a click!" Vikas clicked his fingers infront of Nidhi.. He was holding Aadi in his arms..
"Mujhse kisi ne kuch poocha?? Main dulhan hun bhae!!" Nidhi replied back innocently hiding the glint of tease in her voice.. "Oho!! ghoongat nikaal k beth jao!!" He taunted..
"Hahaha!!" She giggled completely turning to him...
"Chalo naa yaar... kitni khubsoorat jagah hai! Mujhe ghumaao bhi aur beech mein kuch arrangement hogaya to kya kehne!" Vikas held Nidhi's hand from his one and dragged her along..
"Purse to leyne do.." She said pulling herself away and then taking her purse started walking along with him.. "Piya ko to bata do..." She shot a mischevious look to him..
"Tumhe tourist guide banne ka itna he shawk hai to bula lo.." He smirked at Nidhi looking back at the open door from where it can be seen where Piya is sitting.. She was with alot of ladies and girls and it was impossible to drag her out alone..
"Wapas ja k itna peete gii na tumhe.. nani yaad ajayegi!" Nidhi shook her head walking forward..
"Haahhh!! Trust me.. wo na nani ko yaad karna chahegi na mujhe karwana chahe gii!!" He laughed making Nidhi laugh too...
The two walked a long way, crossed the ladder river splashing a bit of water at eachother.. "Hahahaha!! Ye meri favorite jagah hai!! Raat ko yahan betho, chand taaron k saath!! Aaamazing!!!" Nidhi went in her dream land..
"Thud!!" A light slap on her head brought her out of her dreamland only to witness a frowning Vikas.. Pehle batana tha naa k yeh sab bhi hai.. main issko chor k ata!!" He looked at Aadi who was shouting in his own language enjoying the sight, water play and everything... He was so loud that Vikas felt like he will go deaf in sometime..
"Acha!! taake main enjoy nahi karta??" Nidhi took Aadi in her arms and said on his behalf!! "Taaa..." He held Nidhi's earring and tried to pull that out.. "Ahhh.. she scowled..
"Haan!! ab aya maza.." Vikas taunted..
The two walked a bit more and now Aadi was not ready to leave Nidhi since she was more fun than the father in terms of letting him touch thing and laugh.. She makes his face brush against the flowers and also by now Nidhi's necklace and earring and bracelet all were out and in Vikas's pocket now..

...

"Ooo " Aliya was in Maan's office doing her work because she was facing some internet issues for the time being.. When she got tired, she got up and just roamed around in Maan's cabin.. No one can enter the building or leave without scanning their hands as fed in the database which allows the rectified ones to come in and go out.. That building was too too secured.
"Vikas bhai aur Nidhi!!" She pointed outside from the window getting excited.. "Agaye yeh log ajj!!" She smiled..
"Khabardaar jo khud ko show kiya tumne.." Maan gritted his teeth and warned her.. He had his reasons for not showing up at the moment..
"Phir river rafting!!!" She tried to blackmail..
"Fine... Tum jao inke saath! Aur phir mere pass mat ana coz i wont be taking u anywhere!!" He counter blackmailed..
"Tchh!!! bhae kyun???" She whined..
"Har baat ka jawab nahi hota hai!!" He frowned.. He had some serious work to do this evening and no interruption is needed..
...
Nidhi showed Vikas the office building and then the cottage area after which Vikas was officially convinced that both Maan and Nidhi are either criminals or detectives!!
"Shut up!!" She frowned at him..
"Tum jagah to dekho... Kaun dhoonde gaa yahan?? " He was highly surprised of the location and view..
"Adventurous people!!" Nidhi mocked at his face..
"Ooo to kya phir tum adventure se bore hogayi ho?" He eyed her suspiciously...
"Excuse me??" She rolled her eyes..
"Partnership toot rahi hai! Ab saath mein Maan nahi Sid hoga!" He spoke out softly.."Mujhe ajj tak samajh nahi aya... Kyun??" he smiled.. He has no intention to make it awkward but he just wanted to ask..
silence...
"He is my best friend! Usse jitna chahe pyaar kar sakti hoon!! Lekin usse shaadi kar k usse kho nahi sakti!!" She took a deep breath and said looking all around at the trees.. "Aur wese bhi.. kuch cheezein hoti hain jo sirf ladkon k mu se he sunna suit karti hai.. Ussne kabhi meri taraf kadam nahi badhaya! to main kyun faaltu mein dill mein fuzul khwahishein paal k usske saath apni dosti kharab karun??" She asked..
silence..
Vikas took some time to absorbe it...
"Tumhe nahi lagta? shaadi ek bandhan hai? bandh deta hai?? Dosti... dosti to kabhi bhi bandhan nahi thi!" Nidhi shared her thoughts.. She knew someday this will be asked and she had to answer because Vikas was the one who was so on to make Nidhi Maan a couple..
"Hmmm... Sahi bhi ho!" He could do nothing but to agree with her.. They both started walking back and this is exactly when it started raining and so they sat down in a nearer cafe for a while..
"To... Geet k liye Maan kyun?? Main bhi pooch sakti hoon!" Nidhi played a little with Vikas.. Aadi became tired and was now sleeping over Vikas's shoulder..
"Geet he nahi... kisi k liye bhi!! If u two are not together then whats the point?? Kisi se o akhir usse bhi shaadi karni he hai naa?? Aur wese bhi..Wo judta hai to nibhata hai!!" Vikas stated as a matter of fact..
"Taane bhi bohat maarta hai!!" Nidhi giggled comfortably crossing her legs up on the large seat she was sitting on..
"To?? insaan hai! Khuda nahi hai jo perfect hoga!! Flaws kis mein nahi hote?" He said while putting Aadi in Nidhi's lap where he can sleep more peacefully.. "Hum sab har cheez mein shuru mein dama doll hote hain! but then eventually we learn it!" He smiled.. "Aur jitna tumhe jaanta hoon keh sakta hoon!!" He arched his eyebrow giving her the expressions as if he is going to say something sharp about her.. "You'll be great at everything you'll become!!" He smiled as he actually praised her.. "Buss badalna nahi!"
"hehhh.. mood to nahi hai mera.." Nidhi smiled..
silence..
"Wese Vikas.. " She sipped her coffee and asked.. "Tumhe sach mein lagta hai k Geet Maan k saath khush rahe gii?? Mera matlab hai... kaafi alag hain wo ek doosre se!! Aur maan ka attitude to tum jaante he ho!! Especially the fact k wo kuch bhi kahe.. Wo apne aur Geet k rishte ko zara bhi waqt nahi deta.." Nidhi pointed out few things..
"Hehh... Shaadi ache achon k dimagh thikaane laga deti hai!! Aur Maan aur Geet ki shaadi Geet se zyaada Maan k liye zaroori hai... " He said and then went silent..
"Kya hua?" Nidhi asked..
"I just realised... Maan aur Geet ek doosre ki taraf ek doosre k liye jhukte hain!! Isse pehle na maine Maan ko aise dekha hai na Geet ko!!" He passed a light smile making Nidhi confuse.. "Matlab??" she asked..
"Matlab!! Hum wajah aur source ban sakte hain!! Lekin hum rishte nahi jorr sakte kisi ke.. wo oppar se jurr k atay hain!! To busss... jinhe milna hai, ek hona hai, wo ho jate hain!!" He raised his shoulders in the air...
"Hmmm Aur wo jo toot jaate hain??" She arched her brow..
"Yaar... mera aisa manna hai, k final destination tak hum fully ready ho k pohunchte hain!! Begair ready hue pohunch jaenge to... shayad sab be matlab ho jayega!! Wo khushi, wo satisfaction nahi mile ga! U knw its like u dnt deserve it.." pause "To ready hone k liye oppar wala hume tarah tarah k raaston se guzaarta hai.. Ache, bure.. Heart breaking maybe!!" He added..
"Hmmm... logic to hai!!" Nidhi first gave it a thought and then agreed..
"Uss din main soch raha tha... k bhale jo bhi bura scene hua mera family k saath!! Piya aur main... we had a rough patch!! but that changed us!! Made us ready for something big.. Mujhe nahi lagta k mera aur Piya k rishta normal circumstances mein itna mazboot! itna pyaara ho sakta tha!!" He tried to explain..
"Ya phir.. Agar mere saath wo stupid incident nahi hua hota.. to shayad mein kuch aur hota! life ka purpose bhi kuch aur hota meri.. shayad main Piya ko pasand nahi ata shaadi k liye.." He tried to reason which made some sense to Nidhi...
"Hmmm... Baat to hai!!" She nodded in a yes.. "For sure agar main Maan se nahi milti to ajj kuch aur hoti.. Tum log meri zindagii mein nahi atay! Sid ko shayad pasand nahi ati.." She said giving it a thought.. "Aisa kaha ja sakta hai k... Maan made me ready for Sid!" He stated..
"Wow!! We should turn philosophers now!!" Vikas said out loud making Nidhi and him both laugh... The beginning of New life was just at the corner for all..



Sameera😊

Edited by sameera_12 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow you're back 😃
So happy to see u online 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome Update Sameera 👏
Whole update was too good but one thing I couldn't understand what was the first half.. I mean geet and her husband.. was that a dream or reality or something else 😕
Missed MG scenes together... ab tou kuch romance dikhao yar.. shadi hone wali hai 😲😳
Maan along with Aliya reached coorg but didn't tel anyone about his being in there.. ab kia karne wali ho yr 😭
Khatre ki ghanti bajti dikhai de rahi hai mujhe.. and one more thing does Nidhi feel something for maan or felt? She n Maan both are so unpredictable 😉
Waiting for next update

Maaneet Romance yaad rakhna please 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Was missing this story, happy that you are back.Is Maan and Geet married? Loved the scenes between Aaliya, Dev and Rohail and of course Maan. Though they argue and fight, they care for each other too. Vikas trying sherwani was funny. Sid & Nidhi's wedding to take place in Coorg and it seems Aaliya would be the wedding planner. Maan finally decided to help the police force to nab the culprit keeping everything undercover. Loved it. So beautifully written. Will wait for next.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome and just Fantastic Chapter

The first part is that a dream or at present , Maan and Geet already married

Its seems like there is no time for Maan to have fun as he is busy with work new projects
and then the orphanage too
while poor Vikas has to stand in for Maan go wedding shopping and do all the stuff that Maan had to do
Geet also had to her bridal selection
though Maan and Geet are getting married he is so involved in other stuff they don't even have a phone conversation between them

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