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Posted: 10 years ago

Part : 15


savitri devi ( dadi) stepped out of the car , she had to park her car at a distance from mansion coz of long queue of car ahead , as she started walking , she stepped on a stone and ankle got twisted , " ahhh ," she held the car ...

geet was hiding behind the car , so that the coming person don't see her but hearing her plea she came out quickly ...

" what happened ?? are u alright ??" she came and asked in a concerned voice ... seeing her concern dadi didn't doubt her ..

" my ankle , it got twisted and paining .."

Ahh she knew it pains a lot ... in the beginning many times in jungle her ankle to got twisted

" tum , mera matlab hai aap , car main baithiye , main dekhti hun .." [sit in the car i will check ]

" hum yaheen se doctor ko call kar lete hain , I coldnt walk "

" nahi ,yeh abi theek ho jay ga , aap bethiye to sahi " .. [ no it will be alright .. just sit here]

Geet could see the royality in her persona and way of talking ... she insisted her to sit in the car .. as she sat on passenger seat , geet bent down to hold her feet , she moved away quickly ...

" arrey nahi aap aisay " [ no .. u may not hold my foot like this ?]

She smiled instantly thinking about maan , who also did same when she was about to apply balm on his leg .. dadi got confused seeing her smiling like this

" aisa kia keh dia hum ne ??" [ what made u smile ]

"kuch nahi , main kar deti hun .. thoda dard ho ga but phir bilkul theek ho jay ga " [ nothing .. i will check .. it will pain a bit then will be ok ]

She hold her foot and moved in a manner to get the twisted joint back in its position ..

" ahh , " dadi yelped in pain .but other moment ,she felt her foot all right .. .

" ziada dard hua ??" [ did it pain too much ?? ]

" hmm its allright now "

Dadi smiled and then she checked her out .. she was looking so gorgeous in black saaree , the same saree dadi asked ani to buy from boutique but she didn't buy , telling her that she cant carry it ...geet's innocent face had a smile now ..

dadi couldn't stop herself from complimenting her ...mentally wishing what if maan find her type of DIL ... but other moment ,she thought maan and pure Indian girl , no ways .

" u r so beautiful "

" hmm ,hero b yehi kehta ha " [ hero says the same ] she giggled ..

" hero ? aur wo kon hain ?? .. [ hero who is he ?]

" hai na , mera hero " [ he is my hero ] she loved calling him hers ...

" hmm ,to wo bilkul theek kehtay hain " [ hm he says truth ] dadi said , unknown of the fact that who the hero actually is ...

She smiled in return

"aap ka naam kia ha ??" [ whats ur name ?]

" sab yeh kiun poochtay hain ?? naam main kia rakha ha ??" [ y everyone asks name .. whats in name ?]

" nahi hum ne to waisay hi pooch lia , matlab aap k parents ap ko kuch to bulatay hon gay na ?" [ no .i just asked .. what ur parents call u ?]

Dadi noticed her face turning sad hearing about family ,so she decided to change the topic ... ...

" thank u so much .. now I can walk .." ..

She came out of the car and started walking , couldn't believe her foot was paining so badly few minutes back...

" aur aap kahaan ja rahi hain ?? .. [ where r u going ?]

" main hero se milne aai thi , but lagta ha wo busy ha , so main wapis ja rahi hun " [ i came to meet hero .. but i think he is busy ..so m going back ]

Geet actually didn't sleep whole night , then decided to meet him , to get the answers of her own insecurities , .. she knew its his birthday coz she checked it on his id .. so wore that saaree for him with all accessories he brought for her , as she loved the saree herself too ... after so many years she dressed herself to look beautiful ... today she wanted to look beautiful ... but wasnt aware of this party .. after coming here she got to know n now couldnt enter the party too , coz she didnt have invitation , or any other identity to show ..

As she turned dadi said again ..

" aap hmain kun nai join kar leti , party main , I mean aap k hero to waisay b busy hain " [ u can join me in party as ur hero is busy ]

She didn't know , who the lady is , so answered in her own tone

" mere paas invitation card nai ha " ? [ but i dont have invitation ]

she already tried to enter but guards didn't let her go in , as she didn't have card .. and she wasn't known personality too ...

Dadi got to know if she is someone from office or someone known she would have surely flattered her , but she don't know..so dadi also didn't tell her too ...

" hmaaray pass card hai , ap hmaaray sath aa sakti hain " [ i have invitation ..u can come with me ]

Geet wanted to meet maan so decided it will b ok , as she will b able to meet him and wish him too ... she nodded ..

" chaliye " [ lets go ]

As geet entered with dadi , no one stopped her ... she was amazed, with all the preparations n everything ... this was grand party ,she got busy in checking out all the preparations and dadi moved ahead , leaving her among all the guests

She looked around and found many people surrounding her .. she was afraid of seeing them . what if someone talk to her ? she just talks to hero and no one else .. she had a strange fear from people , as she spent 3 years all alone ... she was checking out everyone like other creatures ... after sometimes she realized what stupidity she is doing ...

maan was standing behind , seeing her long hair and saree , he thought its her , but then after morning incident he didn't want to do any stupidity again ..so got busy in another discussion ... he strongly felt she is here , near him ...

Geet was looking for him , but seeing all people she herself got confused , it wasn't easy for her to search , among all , and she don't know anyone too ... decided to go into his room , may b he will meet her there ... so silently went upstairs...

Maan was getting more restless , as he didn't see the figure again ... he wanted to leave the party soon but it wasn't easy to go

Naintara comes forward to take him to the dance floor , but do not see the waiter coming from other side n drinks spilled on maan ,.. he hated naintara , she is always clingy and then such mistakes ...he wanted to get her thrown out but she was rathod's daughter who r close to dadi ... he always had to bear her ...

" sorry , sorry ,... " she was sounding half drunk as always ..

" its ok " maan mutters ,pass an angry look to both naintara and waiter then goes to his room ... he mentally thanked her ,as now would be able to go out of this party for some time ...

As he comes to the door , find it a bit open .. no one visit his room in his absence then ?? he went inside checking everywhere .. found no one ... then thought may b he forgot to lock the door himself .. he remove the coat, plzce it on the bed

...

He goes to washroom and locks the door , as he turns someone hugs him ... first was shocked with the sudden hug , that too in his washroom and initiated by someone else ... but as he looks down ,he close his eyes , and inhale sharply

"uff , I gone mad , us ladki ne muje pagal bana dia , 1 week se itni baar usse imagine kar chuka hun , party main , room main ...har jagah wo... " [ uf this girl is making me crazy .. i m imagining her everywhere ]

But when he open his eyes , she was still there .. hugging him in the same way ...first time she initiated the hug ... he tried to feel her , brushing his fingers in her hairs , he could touch her ...,feel her ... .. yeah she is really here ... he smiled and hugged back , more tightly crushing her body with his rocky hard one,as if didn't meet her from ages...

Saanson ko jeene ka ishara mil gaya

Zindagi ka pata dobara mil gaya

Tu mila to Khuda ka sahaara mill gaya

Tu mila to Khuda ka sahaara mill gaya

Ghamzada ghamzada dil ye tha ghamzada

Bin tere, bin tere, dil ye tha ghamzada

" I missed u , I missed u , missed u so much " he says all in one go ...

He felt wetness on his shirt , wait , she was crying ... he tore the hug , making her look toward him .. she parted for a second n hugged again ..

Aaraam de tu mujhe, barson ka hun main thaka

Palkon pe raatein liye, tere waste main jaga

Mere har dard ki gehrai ko mehsoos karta hai tu

Teri aankhon se gham tera mujhe maaloom hone laga

" se... seven d..dayss , its been seven ...days " she said sniffing , hugging him tightly , pressing her face harder on his chest ...

He realized what she meant by that , she was counting days for him ?? was telling him indirectly,... that she equally missed him , but her feelings were triple then his , she felt all alone again , that day he promised himself , that will never let her feel alone but he did it again ...

He wanted to console her , tell her that he was not here , but no word came out .. how could he be careless .. how could he go without telling her ?

Main raaz tujhse kahun humraz ban ja zara

Karni hai kuch guftgu alfaaz ban ja zara (x2)

Juda jab se hua

Tere bina khamosh rehta hoon me

Labon ke paas aa

Ab tu aawaaz bann ja zara ...

when she looked at him , with her watery eyes n wet eyelashes , his world collapsed ... her eyes were saying everything loudly ... he didn't miss to notice

Tu mila to Khuda ka sahara mill gaya

Tu mila to Khuda ka sahara mill gaya

Ghamzada ghamzada dil ye tha ghamzada

Bin tere, bin tere, dil ye tha ghamzada

PART 16 CONTINUED BELOW ...

Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Part : 16


Anni : hello , finally u picked up my phone

" mmm ...was so busy ... just got free "

" oh !! so u rejected my invitation this year again "

" u know , how much I hate parties ... still ..." he wasn't rude but was serious ..

" I will wait for u this year again "

"don't push me I cant ... " he was saying helplessly ...

"plz brij ... this year only ,last time I will ask u , cant u do this for ur childhood friend ??"

she knew why he isn't coming to birthday party ... y he hated birthday parties ... from many years she was trying to get the same brij back ,which he was once but couldn't ... she coudnt bring him back ... as the reason of happiness was not there ...

" u know I cant refuse u but ... I don't want to , I cant ..."

" ok , don't come" ... she said in a fake angry tone

" when dora will come , I will tell her everything ... I know she will take my side ... " her own voice chocked saying this , and eyes got teary ...no , this was not the first time they talked about her ... she was the part of every conversation they had.. brij always said she will come back , and anni too started believing , with the faith brij said that ...both were waiting from last 14 years , for her to come and fill the life with happiness again ... all ways to get her back got blocked ,but the ray of hope was still bright ...

She remember how geet took always brij's side when they had small small fights , but didn't like brij teasing her , or saying no to anni ..she used to get angry on brij if he refuse anni , n till now brij don't refuse her ...she remember , how they used to cycle late night , because geet liked it , n the trio had their own good time

Anni was brij's class fellow , n geet too was in same school , she didn't make friends in her class as she considered brij as her only best friend com bro and then anni entered in her friendship gang , who was brij's friend , now trio had their own world , unaware of their own families , they met outside , they cycled late night ...played pranks together .. got punished together ... infact the trio kids shared every fun together... they enjoyed their childhood in their own beautiful way ... But one was missing from many years , that took away the source of happiness for other two... brij always blamed himself for that , while anni knew he is not the reason ...

After a long silence on both sides ,anni threw a last card ..

" plz come for our dora .. she gets angry if u refuse me ,, u know that right ??" she said in a teary sad voice ...

" don't get sad ... my dora dont like it.." he said n hung up the phone ...

Her eyes become watery .. she had the hope .. , may b she could bring ,the old brij back ... who is lost since he didn't meet geet .. she want him to get out of the mysery , that he is the reason ,they lost geet ... she want him to stop blaming himself ... but all her efforts were going vain ...

dadi realized she brought someone with her , n left her like this ... she started searching her everywhere in party , but didn't find ... then felt bad , coz she thought , she must have left ,,,as she didn't know anyone n she too didn't give her time , but maan too isn't found anywhere


Geet got her senses back , finding him gazing , in her eyes , actually she was doing the same , from long time both were sinking into each other's soul from eyes ,as if trying to get some answers ...

He was searching answer , did he read right in her eyes .. ?? was she actually asking him silently to promise , never to leave her alone again , not for a moment

And she was trying to find ,if he will really not leave her like others ??? will he always reciprocate the hug same way when she will hug him ??? ...

Geet took a step back , getting out of his embrace , , unable to stand the proximity with which he was looking at her ,.. she looked down , but then her cheeks turned pink., seeing her lips printed on his white shirt right above his heart ... n a bit kohl too..

He noticed her expressions changing and along with the color of face which was turning pink...

"baby ???" he followed her eyes , n got the reason so clearly ... n grinned widely ..

Geet mentally chided herself " kia soch k itna tight hug kia ?? aur uper se yehh ...kia sochay ga wo" ... [ what did u think , while hugging him so tight ?? .. what will he think about u ]

He stepped closer ," oh , so my junglee baby blush too ... " she step back , without saying anything .. the hue on her face turned darker at his claim "" " my baby ""

She touched her cheek , as if wanted to confirm , if she is really blushing ...

" I like it , or should I say lov ..." he chewed his words ...

" wo .. main .. haan... Yeh... Yeh main ne nai kia " [ i didnt do this :P ] she said in express speed ...then mentally " yeh kia keh rahi ha ??" [ what r u saying ?]

" tum ne nai kia ?? to phir KISs ne kia ??" [ u didnt do then who did ? ] he stressed on kisss .. moving towards her ...

She turned more red... he was getting closer continuously and she was stepping back .. his eyes had an uncontrolled hidden desire , which was increasing with every step he took towards her ...

As she took another step back , slipped ... n closest thing to hold was his shirt .. she caught it , he wasn't ready for this n both fell into the bath tub with him above her ...

Splashhh !!

"Arghhh !! what the he** is ...

He got irritated , but as he scanned her face, all the irritation drained ... sight was to get traced in mind , the innocent beauty laying under him , with her eyes closed , getting wet , drops of water falling on her face n few making their place on her lips , making them way more kissable .. he kept his hand under her head , to keep it above water surface , as her rest of the body was fully in water due to his weight ...

She opened her eyes . taking sweet time , n found him , lost in her ... his eyes had a turmoil .. she shievered at the proximity ,the hungriness in his eyes, n their closeness ... her lips parted to say something , taking his all control away .. he had a sudden desire to touch them ,to taste them ... since morning he was thinking of the dream , which had awaken the demon in him .. ...

Before her lips move , he silenced her keeping finger on her lips , he didn't feel the need of any word ..

" I had a dream today morning , " he said in ever husky tone ... she was confused , y is he telling her .. what's the link of his dreams with her ???

" and u know maan singh khurana likes to get his dreams fulfilled " ... He rubbed his finger on her lips seductively , as if making her ready for next step ..., first she could feel his full body above her , with only thin cloth of his shirt and her saree separating them .. and then his touch .. she closed her eyes .. unable to keep up with the passion ..

Jaana maina najaane dil mein
Kya khwaaish jagi hai
Kyun aankhon ko bhi kuch hai
Jaagi jaagi rehti hai
Kahan neendein gayi hai
Kya hone laga hai tu bata...

" umm " , the moan was on the right moment , which escaped from her mouth.. ... that was it ,he got carried away fully ... n replaced the finger with his lips .she felt his lips touch hers , but with a small peck he moved back ,n scanned her face , is she ready ?? maan singh khurrana was asking for permission to kiss a girl , in his own way ...

" open ur eyes baby "he was merely half an inch away ... " I want u to feel the moment with open eyes" she obeyed, opened her eyes ...Answering him with eyes that she also want this ...

He once again pinned his lips with hers , slowly .. she too gave in , enjoying the first kiss of her life ,that too this way ... he was right " sometimes reality is more beautiful then dreams " ...

Tere labon pe hai mili, mere labon ko zindagi

Tere bina ab saans loon, mere liye mumkin nahi

Meshsoos yeh hota hai tu, mere liye hai laazmi

Saaya tera ab chhod kar lamhe chale mumkin nahi

Mumkin nahi... Mumkin nahi

He licked her lower lip , seeking permission to explore her mouth , she parted her lips , responding him ...

Mujhko chhipale tu, khud mein hi kahin pe

Main bhool jaaun yeh jahaan ..yeh jahaan

Faasla kabhi naa ho, dil chaahe yahi toh

Dhadkan tere bin hai kahaan

She moaned again , feeling his tongue in her mouth , and soon her own ,... started moving with the same rythem... exploring his mouth ..replying him with equal passion ... holding him tight , digging nails in his skin ... he nibbled her lips , n sucked to sooth... their soft ,tender kiss turned to passionate aggressive one , with excessive flow of harmones in their bodies ...

Both were confessing by their kiss , ... how much they missed each other . .. how much they mean to each other... she didn't care for the promises she has made to herself , and he didn't care for his status ,his ego , his name ,just kissed the girl who made him loose his senses ... whose name is yet to b known ??? ...both just wanted this moment to last forever ...

Everyone was enjoying the royal party thrown by maan singh khurana and here he was enjoying the sweetest thing tasting every corner of her mouth ... their moment was private , like their meeting , their longing , like every other moment ... this was also private ..

he parted when both were out of breath ...he examined her face she was crimson red , he loved the affect , n the passionate response , his heart was jumping in ribs... , this could be the best birthday gift he ever received ...

Meri nazar kehne lagi tu saamne ho har ghadi

Bas ik tere chehre bina duniya meri mumkin nahi

Paaya tujhe toh hai laga poori huyi koi kami

Tujhse judaa main ab rahoon khwaabon mein bhi

Mumkin nahi..

Mumkin nahi.. Mumkin nahi

He could feel her abnormal breaths, her erotic loud heartbeats under him ... she was still under the spell of the moment they just shared .. her lips were swallon , he started licking them , sooting them again ... he wasn't getting enough .. he just wanted to continue ..

" u know , it was far too good then my dream " ... he murmured close to her lips ..

" mmm " she just managed to make this sound ...

" don't do this , or else I will..." before he could complete , she was back to her senses .. n started wriggling under him .. n realized what just happened , what they shared , n where they r ...she got more uncomfortable with his gaze ..

" wo ... mmm ... uth na" [get up ]

" Hmm ??" he sounded confused ..

" hum bheeg gay hain " [ we r wet ]

" bath tub main girain gay to bheegain gay na ??" [ obviously if we fall in bath tub , we will b wet ]

" haan , wo , ... Ab uth na " [ haan ..now get up ] she started struggling to get up ... she had no words to say , neither she looked at him ...

" wait , .. " he said and got up , went out of the tub .. n gave her hand ... she held it and came out ... wet saare was clinging with her thin body , ...

Both were still so close , n she was looking everywhere except him ..

" that was the best birthday gift ," he said in a low whispering voice , holding her chin ...making her look towards him ...

" ... I ... I have to go " she pushed him slightly , getting out of his embrace .. n ran out, before he could catch her ... he smiled at her shyness ,followed her till room door ...but then let her go .. thinking she also need the time to relish their moment of closeness ...


NEXT : Part 17


I have no personal experience 🤣 is liye chappal mat phekna 😉... waisay kaisa laga 😆 hit likes and post reviews 😉.. long update jaisay long long review chaiye 😉😉


Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update..
so anie and brij and DORA friends...so cute...update next fast...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vandy28

Frst commnt on update...lol

haha 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
No personal experience...idhr sab aise hi likhte h...v also dnt hv exprnce so v also dnt know...haha
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Originally posted by: vandy28

No personal experience...idhr sab aise hi likhte h...v also dnt hv exprnce so v also dnt know...haha

agar personal expreriance hota to likti na .. with a lot of experience 🤣
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u dont knw how much of hardwork it is to stalk... 😆
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Originally posted by: vandy28

u dont knw how much of hardwork it is to stalk... 😆

who would know better 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing. Geet helped dadinwhen her ankle twisted. Dadi was surprised when geet cured her so soon. she took her in the party . geet got the chance to meet maan so she secretly entered in maan's room. Maan was also feeling like geet is somewhere near her . maan went to his room to change n when suddenly geet hiffed maan. At first he was shocked than seeing her in reality, he was very happy. Geet was crying as he didn't met for seven days. Maan also felt bad. Maneet intimate part was amazing. Brij and annie's conversation shows how much they are missing geet. Waiting for next dear.

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