Teri Meri Maaneet FF ~upd 15 /16 @ 138 ~ link thread 2 in index pg 1 - Page 42

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Snehal23

yayyy i read it amna😆.wow loved the characters sweet maan n bindas geet but shes looking more like muskaan😛 thankgod apple sir pe nai pada😆lagta hai geet ko pyaar hone laga hai😳waiting for next part ha😛

thanks for reading and for ue review dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank u very much guys .this part has got highest likes till now 😉 .. thanks for likes n comments .. those who dont comment and just hit likes , guys hope i get ur review one day 😉

Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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PREVIOUS : PART : 7
RECAP : she plucks a leaf and place it on her cut , in sometime it sticks to it and blood flow stops ..it was pitch dark now ... she starts walking quickly and in sometime she reaches her hut , she lits the fire outside n in its light she applies balm on her cut ... then go in and lays down , but sleep was no where near her eyes , she was restless , and didn't know the reason herself .

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PART : 08 ...

He drives back to his mansion , he was angry on himself , y he expected that much when she clearly told him that day ...

Servant come to ask if he need anything but he just shook his head and went into the room... ...

After changing he lays on bed , but couldn't sleep .. he kept rolling left n right ... for whole night he only thought about her , and finally he came to conclusion that something is wrong with his own self , which was still unknown to him ..

" Did I do wrong by leaving like this ? ? she wanted to say something but I left in anger "

" how stupid , meri galti thi aur us ki baat b nai suni " [ how stupid , i was at fault and didnt even listen to her ?]

" kia sochay gi mere baaray main ?" [ what will she think about me ?]

" wese kun sochay gi wo ? apni dunya main bht khush ha " [ why will she think about me ? she is happy in her own world ]

"mere liye aai thi road tak , kitni raat ho gai ho gi wapis jaanay tak ?? [ she came till road for me , it must have been late for her ?]

Now that was it ... how could he sleep if she is in trouble ? he quickly got up ,went to his car and started driving toward jungle again

"agar usse kuch ho gya to ?? itni raat ko akele jungle main ?" " meri wajah say "? [ what if something happened to her ?that late night in jungle ..coz of me ?] ... he couldn't imagine anything bad happening to her ...

In the early flush of morning he was near her hut , when he reached there ... cool morning breeze was blowing , he started liking this place , he went in , she was sleeping on the straws , first time he was seeing her sleeping she looked , so serene n young ..

He sits near her n trace his fingers on her face , she didn't move

" baby ... " he calls her , ... He was curious , she gets up early then y sleeping today ..

" baby ",... he calls lightly again ...no reply ...

" y aren't u waking up and answering me ?"

he caress his palm on her cheeks , trying to wake her up ... Then suddenly his eyes catch a glimpse of her leg , a line of dry blood was there and a deep cut too .. he got worried ...

" open ur eyes , what happened to u ?" no answer again ...

" open ur eyes , talk to me ?? get up ... get up for me ," he almost shouted , feeling terrible as she wasnt reponding .. ... she sits up n lazily open her eyes

" tu sach main mere sapnon main aanay laga ha " [ i really started dreaming about u ] .. she blabbered in half sleeping mode ..

he hugs her tightly , how the fear of loosing her made him crazy in past few minutes .. he hugged her as tight as he could ..

" ja na mere sapnay se ,muje sonay de , pehlay hi raat bhar neend nai aai " [ go away from my dreams , let me sleep ..i didnt sleep whole night already ]

she moves her face infront of him ,still in hugging position , his eyes were dark n he let her speak without saying anything ...

" aisay mat dekha kar , muje kuch hota ha " .. [ dont look at me like this .. i feel something ]

Her eyes were sleepy .. she was gonna close them once more .. " ab ja , muje neend aai ha," [ Now go .. i m sleepy ]

He kiss her eyes one by one "kabi mat band karna in aankon ko , meri jaan nikal jay gi " [ dont ever close these eyes , i will die ]

" to bina aankh band kiye main kaisay soun gi ??" [ then how will i sleep without closing my eyes ?] .. she asked innocently ..

" hamesha aisay hi bolti rehna , kabi chup mat rehna " [ keep speaking like this forever , dont keep silence ever ] he tightens his grip on her waist ... she keeps her head on his shoulder , silence prevails for few minutes , no one speaks ...

" pata ha main dar gya tha , tum jawaab nai de rahi thi to , aisay dobara kabi mat karna mere sath " [ u know how terrible i felt , when u were not answering ?] she don't reply ,

" tum boltay hue boht achi lagti ho " [ u look too good when u talk ] he moves his head a bit to see if she is listening and she was sleeping peacefully keeping her head on his shoulder .. he smiles , she just told him that she also couldn't sleep whole night , it made him somewhat happy that same things happen with him too ... ( the above portion of this part is my fav 😛😉)

he made her lay so carefully ,like she is a glass doll .. he also settles keeping his head on his arm , yes , the great maan singh khurana settles on hay stack willingly ... she was in deep sleep n he was ogling her ... life was never like this for him.he never even sat on the floor before .. but change is the mystery .. . after sometimes he also falls asleep beside her , as even he didnt sleep whole night ..

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Bright rays of sun fall on her face , she gets up , it was noon

" oyee ,main itna late jaagi " [ oh !! i woke up too late ] she looks at right side and and find him there , sleeping peacefully ...

" had ho gai geet , pehlay sotay hue usse sapne main dekha aur ab jag k b , tu na pagal ho gai ha , , ab kabi nai lotay ga wo " [ its the height geet , first u dream about him n u r seeing him with open eyes too .. r u gone mad ?? he will never come back now ]

She went out without waking him up ... after taking bath in pond ,she went to jungle n get some fresh fruits for her ... ignoring his mere presence ..considering him her illusion ..

After long time she comes back ...

He was sitting near water , waiting for her ... she sat beside him , considering herself mad ..

" pata ha tu muje har jaga dikhne laga ha " [ u know .. i see u everywhere ]

" matlab ?"

" matlab yeh k pehlay tu mere sapne main aaya phir tuje ander sotay hue dekha ab yahaan b " [ means first i saw u in my dream , then i saw u sleeping inside and now here too ]

.. he got to know she is considering him illusion .. he don't make her realize ..

"tumhain acha nai lagta main tumhaaray samnay rahun ?" [ dont u like if i stay in front of u ?]

" acha lagta ha na , boht acha lagta ha jab akeli dunya main achanak koi aa jay , par ..." [ it feels good when someone step into ur lonely world , but ... ]

" par kya ?" [ but ?...?]

" yeh sub sapna hota ha na , jab koi eyes per kiss kar k bolta ha inhain band mat karna " [ but isnt it dream when someone kiss ur eyes and say never close them ?]

{ i m obsessed with her eyes 😆}

He smiles sadly , how tough life has she spent , that now she couldn't even differentiate between dream and reality ..

She takes a bite of peer ,

" muje b bhook lagi ha " [ i m also hungry ]

He takes the bite again from where she had one , she looks at him ,then at peer surprisingly , finally she got he is really there ...

Tu ??"

" haan ..."

" tu kab aaya ?" [ when did u come ?]

" subah aaya tha , tum so rahi thi " [ in the morning , when u were asleep ]

" tu sach main wahaan , mere paas .. wo .. main... " [ so u were really there .. i .. umm ..]

" bus b karo " [ stop it now ]

" aj kun aaya ?" [ y did u come today ?]

" haan wo kal gusse main chala gya to muje laga tum bura maan gai , is liye ... " [ hmm , yesterday i went off in anger so i thought u will mind ..] she cuts him ...

" chal ab phir se sorry mat bolna , har baar tu yehi bolta rehta ha " [ ok now dont say sorry .. u say too much sorry ] he just smiles at her words ...

"pata ha muje laga tu kabi nai aay ga " .. [ u know i thought , u will never come back ]

" kun aisa laga tumhain ?" [ y did u think so ?]

" tere paas sub kuch ha , phir meri kia zarurat ha .. tujhe aur b boht se important kaam hon gay na ?? " [ u have everything , then why would u need me .. u must have many important works ??]

" tum un se ziada important ho " [ u r important then those works ] his tone was serious

" haan phir se dialog "[ dialog once again ]

" yeh dialog nahi tha " [ this was not a dialog ]

" haan haan theek ha ,ab kal ki tarah gussa mat karna " [ ok ok now dont get angry like yesterday ]

" tum bhi wo kabi mat karna jo subah kia " [ u also never do that , what u did in the morning ]

" yaar tu to boht emotional type ha " [ man !! u r too emotional ]

" jaisay tum kaho " [ whatever u say ] he don't even want to disagree ...

" tu yahaan mat aaya kar " [ u must not come here ] he snaps and examine her face then looks into her eyes , trying to find out y she said so ..?

" kun , abi tum ne bola k mera aana acha lagta hai phir ? " [ y ? u just said u like my presence then ?]

" kaha na , mat aaya kar , bus itna kafi hai tere liye " [ i said dont come here , that enough for u ] he was feeling bad , how easily she told him that don't come here

"muje yahaan aanay se koi nai rok sakta , khud tum b nai " [ no one can stop me from coming here ..not even u ]


" theek ha phir main yeh jagah chor k , kaheen aur chali jaon gi , hamesha k liye , phir tu muje kabi nahi dhoond paay ga " [ ok ,then i will go somewhere and u will never be able to search me ]

he was angry , and her words were pinching him like needles

" pata ha tuje bura lagay ga par yehi tere liye acha ha " [ i know u will feel bad but still its good for u ]

He grip her arms harshly ,

" tum kaheen nahi jao gi , kaheen b nahi " [ u will not go anywhere ]

" to theek ha , tu yahan mat aana, main nahi jaon gi , aur agar kabi laut k aaya to main kabi nai milun gi " [ then dont come back ..i will not go ,but if u ever came back u will not find me ever ]

" yeh kaisay shart ha ?" [ what type condition is it ?]

" bol ,mazur ha ya nahi ?" [ say yes aur no ?]

" wajah janna chahta hun " [ i want to know the reason ]

"Wo Sab zaruri nai ha " [ thats not necessary ]

" mere liye zaruri ha " [ its necessary for me ]

She was trying too hard to control her tears .. It was so difficult for her ..first people used leave her life but today she is asking herself .. But she can't let anything happen to him ...

"Main nai btaun gi tu bass chala ja " [ i wont tell , u just go off] he was feeling as if someone is stabbing his heart , but he was helpless once again ...

" aj mere sath road tak b nai aao gai " ??? [ will u not even come to the road with me ? ] He was hopeful yet ...

" nahi tu ja .. Aur kabi mat aana , nahin to muje nahi dhoond paay ga ... " [ no go urself , n dont come back ever ..wlse u wont be able to find me ]

He sadly gets up and start going away , again to his contrary world , which is too different from this one ... she was still as statue ... How hard it was for her too...

He looks at her for one last time ... His own eyes get watery ... He didn't want to leave her specially now , n this way , when he was sure that he can't live peacefully in his own world without her ,he went of to never come back again

next : PART : 09

Maan phir chala gya 😆 .. but he will not come back now 😆.. so who will go then 😳😉😛 .. imagine geet in KC 😛😉

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..Uff again it got big ... hope didnt pakao u 😆.. but this is my favorite part 😉 .. post ur reviews plz 😛...

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Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awee. Awesome update
Why Geet said that
Hope they meet again
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Posted: 10 years ago
suprb agay kaya ho ga.next updt soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 8 why did she speak like that ? It was good had she thought he was her dream only she was speaking nicely with him ❤️
Maan came there as he could not sleep he fell off sleep with her😳😳
But Geet took asked him never to come back and Maan went away 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic update.. Maan returnd back to jungle as he couldn't stay peaceful in KM.. Geet is reluctant to divulge any details about her and asked him not to meet her again.. He went back hurt.. Loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
geet asked him to leave..
Hope they meet again soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
maan went to geet's place
aww...maaneet moments were beautiful di!!
And the illusion part was too good
:o geet ko kya ho gaya
why dhe is asking maan to go :(
Wiww...geet in KC!!
Wohoo it will dhamakedar ;)
Loved the update di :)
thanku for the pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan tried so much to be with Geet ...
but she declined everything ... she was left alone and she want Maan to leave her...
huh ...
What will Maan do...
sorry .. I did read the last line...
waiting for next part...

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