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Previous: PART : 12
Recap:After sometime she doze off on his lap due to the affect of medicines ... he brush his fingers in her hair .. she looks so innocent while sleeping ... he promise himself to give her life of a princess .. she deserves to b treated as a princess ... what she shared with him was too painful , but now she will surely get what she dreamt of ..


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Part : 13

She turns and gets more closer , placing her head more comfortably on his lap ... but strangely he never felt awkward .. never did she make him uncomfortable ... he recalled how close they have been , many times .. still he didn't regret any moment of their closeness ..

He don't know what she feels , what she want ., but he was surely satisfied by every moment he share with her ..

After almost 2 hours , she lazily opens her eyes and find him still looking at her same way , as he was looking when she slept ..

She gets up swiftly..

" itni der se aisay hi baitha ha, main so gai to pata hi nai laga"[ u r sitting in same position from too long .. i dont know when i dozed off ]

He tries to straighten his leg , and it pained coz of keeping in one position for long time .. she notices , and makes a sorry face ..

" sorry , meri wajah se , yeh ... " [ sorry .. its coz of me ?]

" hmm , its paining a lot " he says , n examine her expressions , she seemed sorry n concerned ..

She quickly gets up and brings oil ,

" yeh laga deti hun , shayad theek ho ga " [ let me apply this , u will feel better ] she hold his leg , while he catch her wrist .. takes the oil and place it at a distance ..

"mera itna sa dard nahi dekh sakti..??" [ cant u see this bit of my pain ?? ]

she has no words to answer , she wanted to say yes , but her words didnt reach her tongue .. his gaze was fixed on her .. " bolo na .." [ tell me ?]

she tears the gaze, looks here n there , and tries to get up but he don't let her .. he hold her chin and make her look towards him ...

" muje b aisa lagta ha jub tum khud ko dard deti ho " [ i also feel same when u hurt urself ]

" nahi , aisa nahi ha .. wo meri wajah se tuje dard hua to ... muje acha nahi laga yun ... " [ no , u r hurt coz of me and i dont feel good ] .. she was trying not to look into his eyes ..

"to wo sub kabi nahi karo gi jis se muje dard hota ha ???" [ so u will not do any such thing which will hurt me ? ]he asks in husky voice ...

" hmm ?? bolo ??" [ hmm ? tell me ?]

" nahi ,kabhi nai " . [ no , never ].. she had no option except saying truth when he was observing her so closely ..

" to aj k baad nahi kaho gi k main tum se nahi mil sakta ??" [ so u wont say that i cant meet u ?]

" muje bahar jaana ha " [ i have to go out ] she hardly managed to whisper ..

" yeh mere sawal ka jawaab nahi ha .." [ thats not the answer of my question ]

But she gets up and runs out , then sits near pond ... looks into water ... she need to answer him , but before that she herself wasn't sure if she should allow someone in her life or not ... what if something happen to him too ? what if he don't return ever like others ?? but its been too long she haven't given chance to anyone to come into her life

From too long she haven't shared her life with anyone .. she kept her fears , her pains , her memories to herself only .. but should she give one chance ?? the fear inside her was overpowering the point of giving one chance

He was sitting next to her , observing her keenly , what she must thinking .. is it that difficult for her to allow him in her life ..??? ...

" yeh sub kun ho raha ha mere saath ?? " [ y is it happening with me ? ]

she wanted to know if God is giving her some hint to move on ?? or wanted to test again , what she promised ... she promised not to let anyone in her life ever ...

" itna socho gi to , khud ko hi kho do gi " [ if u think this much , u will loose urself ]

" muje laga main ne pehlay hi sab kho dia " [ i thought i already lost everything ]

Her words were so deep , he didn't want her to get sad again .. but he have no words to console her ..

" agar life new chance de to usse use karna chaiye na ?" [ if life gives a new chance .. u must use it right ? ]

" aur agar haarnay ka dar ho to ?" [ and what if we have fear to loose ? ]

" then think something better is already planned for u "

She gets silent again .. may b its time to get something good for her too ...

"to theek ha , tu jab chahay yahaan aa sakta ha , mujh se milne " [ ok then u can come to meet me , whenever u want ]

He smiled whole heartedly ... hugging her side ways .finally he succeded in first step .. he knew its gonna b difficult but interesting too ... .

" thank u .."

" wo kis liye ?? pata ha tere ko hi problem ho gi , phir aik din tu na tang aa jay ga " [ for what ?? u will have problem urself and then one day u will get irked ]

" aisa kabhi nahi ho ga , I m sure .. " [ it will never happen , i m sure ]

They kept talking for long time, mostly he told her about his choices , some memories , and many other s , she felt he is happy ... she cant get his mood ... in a moment he is angry and other moment he is so concerned ...

checking the time he realized , in all this he forgot , that had a meeting in evening n then dinner party too ... he pulled his phone from pocket to make a call but no signals ...

" tu late ho gya na ? [ u got late ?]

" hmm , aik meeting attend karni thi " [ hm yes , had to attend a meeting ]

" ab to tu kabhi b aa sakta ha na , to ja meeting attend kar le .. hum baad main baat kar lain gay " [ now u can come anytime , so go right now ..n attend the meeting .. we can talk later ]

" hmm " ...

She comes at some distance with him , but then he tells her not to come to road , coz she wasn't fully well ...

...

Its been 2 weeks , he used to come to meet her sometimes daily and sometimes in 2 days , when he got stuck in work .. she was opening up .. not sharing her past but sometimes tellinghim about bj ... he never asked who is he .. he wanted to let her tell everything .. he didn't want to push her for anything , coz it always made her sad ...

She was also happy to have him in her life .. She loved his presence ...

His family was back and he became more busy , it was not so easy for him to come to meet her in jungle but he used to get uneasy if he don't talk to her or meet her .. So always found out a way or other to meet her ..

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As his plane landed , he let out a sight of relief ..finally he was back .. He didn't meet her from last whole week .. As he had to go out of country for an important project urgently n couldn't even meet her before going .. But it was late so he decided to meet her early morning only , unknown of what is planned for him ..

he entered his car from iron gates , he found his whole mansion decorated ... And what was the event ?he knew that ...

as soon as he entered his mansion , anni hugged him ..

"Happy birthday , bhaai.."

He reciprocated the hug ... every year anni will get the whole mansion decorated like this and he will have to give her gift .. and that must b unique

Dadi and rajesh too wish him , they cut the cake .

Anni : so mera gift ??? [ where is my gift ?]

Maan makes sorry face as he forgot to get gift for her .. he did bring few but those were not special n unique ones , as he gives her always on his birthday as a return gift , for all the preparations she do for him ...

Ani : ap mera gift bhool gay ??? [ u forgot my gift ?]

Maan : how about keeping it due for sometime ??

Raj : ani , un ko aaram to karnay dain , he just came . [ anni let him rest .. he just came ] .

Ani : but he never forgets my gift .. then y this year ??

Dadi : unhon ne bola na baad main .. [ but he said , later ]

Maan : no one say anything to my sweetu ... ok tell what do u want ??

Ani : hmm .. I was just kidding .. u take rest .. I know u must b tired ..

Maan : u r my best sis .. he winks ..

Anni : hmm , anni khurana is best .. she says ,lifting her eyebrows ..

Dadi : aap dono ka drama khatam ho gya ho to , maan ap araam kar lain ... [ if ur drama is finished , then maan plz take rest ]

Raj : yes maan , tomorrow u know ,birthday party like every year

Anni : and my gift is due ... ..

Maan nodes smilingly and goes to his room ...

As he lays on bed , he thinks about her , " oh party tomorrow , how will I meet her then ?? " ...

" its been whole week now "

He knew she had a fear that he will also leave her someday and she will have to live all alone again ... he felt she is getting used too of his presence, even she told him indirectly too

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On the other side , geet was restless , he didn't come from whole week ... even she went to KC again , waited for him but he didn't come till late evening and she went back , she didn't ask anyone as last time too guard didn't tell truth ... .

She saw bj that day again , she cant mistake recognizing him , he have oddly different colour of his eyes greenish blue , and that mark on his forehead .. how much she cried for that .. he fell from cycle when they were playing together , and got injured

... but he is no more that chirpy bj now ... he is a young man now , but she didn't meet him coz she herself started thinking that she may be bad omen , that's y left all alone .. ...

She felt maan also left her like her parents , no not biological parents , but she considered them parents only

next : PART : 14

Precap

Geet's heart thumbed faster hearing the footsteps , near curtain ... and then fear encircled her , when he removed it ... her dignity was at stake ..

He tried to hold her .." n..nn nooo" .. she shrinked herself more ... the other man eyed her lustfully ...

" tere ghar se kuch nai mila but tu to mili na " [ we didnt find anything from ur home , but we got u ]

" kya baat ki ha re tu ne " [ wah !! what a dialog ] other one said ..


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what do u think about this part ?? and precap ?? what must have happened ?... in next part major portion of past will be revealed 😛 .. hit likes n post comments like u always do 😉

Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Previous ... PART : 3
Recap : He looks at the tree again , he knew where she is sitting ,she was smiling and a faint smile appears on his face , , Mr singhania saw him smiling .. really ?? maan is smiling at this time ?? ,... she waves at him and he waves back ... mr singhania follow his eyes and there was monkey on the opposite tree ,as geet was in leaves now ... he was confused ,is maan waving at monkey ??? but he didn't dare to ask from him ...and they go off ...sitting in car , maan once again looks back , he felt bad for leaving her here , she was still on the tree ...

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Part 4



Once they were out of sight , geet climbs down and goes back to her hut , the place in which she was living for past three years ... she also fell down ,when she was running to save herself from hounds , and as she had less injuries ,she succeeded in saving herself , but she didn't have anyone to go back , so started living there , in the jungle away from real world ... She built that small hut herself after working for many days ... now she got adjusted with the place ... she had nothing to eat or wear still never complained , she searched food for her in jungle, and once while walking and roaming for long time she fond out road , and after that she started going out of jungle some time , to see people and their life so that living in jungle she don't forget how people live

After applying some oil and balm on her feet she lays down on straws , it was turning dark and she was a bit tired too ... coz she went to leave him until road and then came back ...

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In his way ,maan orders his driver to go to mansion directly and not to the hospital ,he wanted to meet his family ,he reaches home , his family was so worried and all were waiting for him , he enters his huge mansion , still in same black kurta and torn jeans ,..

His father came and hugged him ," kahaan chalay gay the , kitna parehsaan kia hum ko " [ where have u been ?? we were so worried ]

Dadi : beta aap theek to hain ?[ r u ok ?]

Ani : bhai dekhain kya haalat ho gai aap ki [ look what is ur condition] ,she had tears in her eyes ...

Maan : ap sub parehsaan na hon , main bilkul theek hun , [ dont worry , i m all right ]

Dadi : hospital chaliye maan , ap ko itni chot lagi ha [ lets go to hospital , u r injured ]

Maan : is ki koi zarurat nahi ha dadi ,main ... [ its not needed .. i m ... ]

Raj [ father] :aap ki koi baat nahi sunain gay hum , fresh ho jayen doctor aap k checkup k liye aa rhay hain [we wont listen anything , go and fresh up .. doctor will come for check up ] ... his father calls the best doctors of dehli

Maan : its all ... his father cuts before he complete

Raj : kaha na nahi , u r my only son , main risk nahi lena chahta ...

Maan : hmm theek ha , main fresh ho jaata hun ... he knew his father will not leave till he is fully satisfied ...

Dadi : hmm aur sirf aram , is k ilawa hum kuch nahi sunain gay ... [ u will take rest only , we wont hear anything else ] he was so rich for world but for his family he was only son and they all had extra caring attitude towards him ...

He sights and go off to take bath , ... after long warm bath , he comes out his casual dress was already settled on bed , he wear it , while his father n dadi enters his room with a team of doctors ...,

Doctor : good evening mr khurana !

Maan : evening ! dad , dadi it was not needed ..

Dadi : we already told u . no arguments

Father : doctor check him properly n if we need to take him to the hospital do tell plz ..

Maan lays on his bed leisurely , doctor checks his leg first .

Doctor : mr khurana , its not normal injury , its deep wound ..u got fired ???

Maan : yes ! they fired and bullet hit my leg

Doctor checks fully again

" Mr khurana , bullet has been removed so cleanly , and what u applied on it that it healed this much so quickly ?? "

Maan remembers , how she was gonna apply balm and how she took his care all along ... her way of talking , he didn't even reply to doctor who was waiting for his words ...

Dadi : maan ,r u ok ??

Maan comes back to present ,"yes I m ok dadi"

Doctor : whatever u applied ,it was good , n we r prescribing these medicines ,u have to take them n rest as the injury isn't fully ok , and they all leave

Rajesh : ab btaiye kya hua tha maan ,yeh sab ?? [ ok now tell us what happened ]

Maan : some goons followed me ,n breaks of my car failed , they attacked and I fell into the pit ,wahaan se nikalne main der ho gai , [ it took time to come out ] , he skipped the major details , about his strange adventure ..

Dadi : aur yeh sab main ap ki help kis ne ki , doctor ne btaaya k goli nikaali gai ha , aur yeh dawa [ and whats all this ? doctor told that bullet has been removed .. and this medicine ?]

Maan : dadi wo sub , haan ! gaon k kuch logon ne help ki thi .. [ dadi , some villagers helped me ]

Rajesh : maan they helped u a lot then we must do something for them , I mean helping them financially , what village was that ??

Maan : I ... I don't know the name ...

what could he tell that it looks pit from above and down there , its her world ?never in his life he would tell anyone about her small carefree world ? no .. " leave it , I will manage everything later ..

Dadi : nahi bete ,raj sahi keh rhay hain , hum khud un logon se milain gay aur wo jo mangain gay hum de sakte hain beta [ no ... raj is right , we will meet those people n we can give them whatever they want ]

Maan remembers what she demanded on his offer " nahi dadi , kuch cheezain nahi de sakte .." [ no dadi we cant give few things ]

Rajesh thinks what happened to him , he believed to buy everything with money then what happened today : I think u r not fully well , u must take rest ...

Dadi : haan bte , he is right , aur raj ap apne team ko bhej kar wahan k logon ka pata laga li jiye .. [ yes he is right .. n raj u send ur men and search about those people '

Maan says instantly : ., nahin ! [ " no! " ]

Raj : maan ,u don't worry my team will find out in an hour .

Maan thinks in their life time they cant find her in that jungle " nahi dad ! main khud mil lun ga un se theek ho kar , un ko acha lagay ga .. [ no dad , i will meet them myself once i m ok .. they will feel good ]

Raj : haan yeh b theek hai , phir hum bhi chalain gay aap k sath [ thats fine .. we will also go with u ]

Dadi : hum bhi un logon se milna chahtey hain khud [ i also wanna meet those people ]

Maan : ji ... n thinks " impossible .. he remembers her words " hum aj k baad nahin milain gay , tu apni dunya main aur me yahaan " he so loved her accent and wanted to hear more but she was right they couldn't meet again ..

Raj : ab aap aram kar lain , hum chaltey hain .. [ now u take rest ... we r leaving ]

Maan nodes and they leave him in his room . he lays on his bed n remind the whole incident , how he woke up on grass straws , that torn kurta and her small poor world , he goes to washroom and take that kurta n place it safely in cupboard , he looks at his suits , his wardrobe was filled with best designer suits, every stuff n color, he thinks about her that she didn't have dress.. he comes to bed again n keep thinking ...

Her world was so different , she was beautiful he admitted , even living at that place she was pretty , how will she look if she wears some designer dresses ,makeup and accessories ... he starts imagining her looks ... then how will she react when she will know he lives here ?he imagine her in mansion ... He keeps imagining things till his mind get tired and he drifts off to sleep ...

Again the same dream which was taking his sleep away from many years disturbed him , he again hears a small girl begging him " plz save me , they will take me away " ...

He jerks her, who r u ? "

"geet , I m geet ... plz save me from them , I don't wanna go there "

he see a lady and a man looks like guard coming towards her ... " see ,they r coming ... plz take me with u , I will stay like a good girl "

" r u mad ? y will I take a mad girl like u with me ,"? he was himself so young probably 10 , he looks at his father , who was talking to someone on phone

The man and woman come towards them and take her away from him , she says again " pls ... plss.." she keeps begging until she was out of sight .. he didnt do anything ...they take her away ...

Then he see some people trying to kill a girl , she was same girl ... " Geet ! Geeet " he shouts and wakes up n find himself on bed

NEXT : .PART : 5 ..

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Thats it for now .. Thanks for the good response to previous parts ... Hope u enjoy reading this too ..ignore mistake 😊

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PREVIOUS : PART : 09
RECAP : He picks her up , and make her sit on his lap instead of passenger seat , n starts driving ... Her face was hidden in his chest , so none saw her face nor in pics it appeared...

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PART : 10 ..


He drives to his mansion , n takes her to his room n place her on his bed .. He already called the doctor .. Her shawl was not in place , making her upper body completely bare ...

" Uff , kya karun main is pagal ladki ka " ..

He goes to Ani's room and bring a dress for her ... Doctor was already outside the room , he let him in only when he made her wear that dress ...

Doctor checked her... N told him that she didn't eat anything that's y she fainted .. After giving her an injection n a drip , doctor goes off telling him she will feel ok in some time .. and needs more rest ...

Maan sits beside her , caressing her forehead .. ..

He felt bad .. How long she waited for him and she didn't make him wait ever ... Her forehead had a blue mark too , her eyes were puffy ...

" I didn't mean to hurt u baby "

He tucks the strands of her hairs behind her ear , n kiss her eyes . she was stirring a bit ...

" I already told u don't close ur eyes ever infront of me , I don't like this " now she was trying to open her eyes ,

" talk to me , u look so good while talking " he wanted to hear her sweet naughty talks ...

she slowly open her eyes , n see him sitting near her , her vision was blur .. but finding herself on bed in a big luxurious room was not acceptable reality for her ,,,

" hero ??"

He instantly looks at her , it was bliss for him to hear this,

He kiss her forehead" kun karti ho mere sath aisa ?.. kun baat karna band kar deti ho ? kun apni aankhain band kar leti ho ?" [ y u do this to me ? y u stop talking ? y u close ur eyes ?]

" tu yeh sab nahi kehta na to muje lagta main phir se sapna dekh rahi hun " .. [ hadnt u said all this , i would have thought i m dreaming ]

" sometimes reality is more beautiful then dreams "

" yeh sub philosophy na , meri samajh main nai aati " [ i dont understand all this philosophy ] she tries to get up .. while he hold her before she do

" koshish b mat karna uthne ki , kya haal bana lia ha apna??" [ dont even try to get up .. what have u done to urself ?]

"ab main ne kya kia ? sub teri galti ha " [ what did i do ?? its all ur fault ]

" meri galti ??" [ my fault ?]

" haan to ... 2 ghantay main tera wait karti rahi , tera wallet dene k liye " [ yes !! i waited two hours to return ur wallet ]

He feels a bit sad that she only came to return his wallet n not to meet him but right now her care was more important ...

"wese , hero yeh tera ghar ha ,?? " [ hero . is it ur house ?]

"nahi tumhain padosi k ghar le aaya hun " [ no i brought u to my neighbor's house] he mocks ...

" baday classy hain tere padosi " [ ur neighbors r very classy ]

They both share a naughty look and burst out laughing ...

" aur family kahaan ha ?" [ where is ur family ?]

" Canada gay hain , ani wanted to go " .. [ they went to canada , anni wanted to go ]

anni ?? after how long she heard this name ..

" haan meri sister ani [ yes my sister anni]

" hmmm "

someone knocks ,

" main abi aata hun , utna mat ok ," [ i m coming back ..dont get up ok ? ] but who will listen to him , once he turned she got up . n started exploring his room ...

Maan took the cereal from nakul , but he didn't let him in .

" tumhain bola tha uthna mat , ab lait jao " [ i asked u not to get up .. now lay down] she was standing near window ...

" hero , tu to aisay behave kar raha hai jaisay school main teacher kartay hain , yeh mat karo, wo karo " .. [ hero u r behaving like teacher , who say dont do this , do that ]

He knew she will not listen ,so after keeping the cereal on side table he picks her up and place her on bed again ... " ab chup chaap yeh kha lo " [ now have ur cereal ]

" tu to bada strong hai hero , muje aisay utha lia " [ hero u r very strong , u picked me up like this ] she pokes his biscep ,

" strong hai yaar ,kafi work out karta ha na ?" [ u do alot of work out ??]

He was continuously smiling at her antics , what is she ??

" haan ,ab kha lo , nahi to phir se behosh ho jao gi " [ now eat , else u will faint again ]

" yeh koi movie to nai ha k heroine baar baar behosh ho jay gi , aik baar ho gya utna kaafi ha " [ its not a movie where heroine will faint again and again ]

Pheww ! she will never listen to him , he picks the bowl , fills the spoon and feed her ,,

She makes cute yucky face " iss se to jungle main apple acha hota ha " [ apple in jungle is more tasty then this ]

" haan abi yeh kha lo ,baad main apple le aaon ga " [ ok now eat this , i will bring apple later ]

" le kun aay ga ? main khud le lun gi .. " [ y will u bring ? i will take myself]

"abhi jab tak yahaan ho tab tak nahi " [ untill u r here ]

" yahaan hun matlab ?? main na yeh kha k jaanay lagi hun " . [ what do y mean ? i will leave after having this ] .. he gives an angry glare ,

" pagal ho gai ho ? [ r u gone mad ?]

" ho nai gai ,pehay se pagal thi , BJ b muje pagal kehta tha " [ not gone mad , i was already mad ... bj used to call me mad ] she had a sad smile on her face , she had only faint memories of golden days..

He puts down the bowl, first time she was talking about someone , he wanted to know where is she from , whats her name ,her past .. he wanted to know everything ...

" Bj ?? "

" haan wo ... Kuch nai muje chalna chaiye .. " [ nothing , i think i have to go ] she tries to get up again , but he don't let her go ...

" kon ha wo ?kia muje is kabil b nai samjhti k apne baray main kuch share karo??" [ who is he ? m i that unimportant that u dont share about urself ? ] he was not letting her go , was holding her tightly ...

" muje jaanay de hero " . [ let me go ]. she struggles to free herself ...

" main jaanna chahta hun , tumhaaray baaray main " [ i want to know about u ]

He was holding her hand and it was paining coz of drip , her eyes were watery .

" muje dard ho raha ha " [ u r hurting me ]

he realize that it was too much , its her life , and she hasn't given any right to him may b not now , but later he will surely get to know everything ...

" sorry , tum araam kar lo ,raat boht ho gai ha " [ sorry , u have to take rest ..its late]

" par muje wapis ..." [ but i have to ..]

" bilkul b nahi," [ no ..not at all]

" hero tu ne khana nahi khaya na ?" [ did u have ur meal ?] he could feel the concern in her voice .. ..

" haan tum so jao main kha lun ga " [ u sleep ! i will have my food ]

" nahi pehlay kha le na " [ no first eat ] he calls nakul and order him to bring his meal , which he brought within few minutes ...

she liked his presence , his care for her but she didn't want anything bad happen to him , so wanted to go back... but knew its not that easy to escape

he covers her with spread and sit beside her ..

" ab so jaao , doctor recommended rest " [ ok now sleep , doctor recommended rest]

" tu kahaan soy ga ?" [ where will u sleep ]

" dusray room main " [in other room]

"to ja na " [then go ]

He knew something is wrong , y she is acting weird

" nahi jab tak tum so nahi jaati tab tak nahi " [ i wont go till u sleep]

" main so jaon gi , tu thak gaya ho ga na ?? ja k so ja " [ i will sleep , u must be tired.. go and sleep ]

He thought its right to let her sleep , may b she isn't comfortable in his presence , after what just happened ..

"theek ha , tum so jao , agar koi cheez chaiye ho to main sath waalay room main hun " [ ok , if u need anything , i will be in adjacent room ]

" hmm ,good night "

He went to his room , after laying comfortably he again think about her , how his life is changing , the turn of events and everything .. he never felt like this before , his own concern for her make him wonder , he wanted to know why she asked him not to meet her that day .. .. in the pool of his own thoughts he drifts off to sleep


Next : PART : 11 .

Precap : geet back to jungle 😆.


Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Previous : PART : 5

RECAP : As they leave maan goes to his car and tell the driver that he will drive himself .. he drives toward jungle , since when he came back , he see her reflection in everything ... he knew he will not be able to enjoy in Canada too ,so he decided to meet her , to finish this story

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Part 6

Parking his car at some distance, he went out with the bottle , and goes into the jungle ,

" hope I don't loose the track , else according to her, will keep wondering in this jungle for rest of my life , how much she knows about this place .."

He reach her hut finally , walking for whole 3 hours after loosing the path sometime n then guessing the right one .. he looks at the place , this time properly .. she was not in her hut ..

He comes out to see where is she .. and there she sat , at the edge of pond ,digging her head in her knees ... he could see her back which was fully covered with her thick long hairs .. he goes toward her n sit beside her ,

"ahemm ,ahemm" he coughs lightly to get her attention

She looks up instantly , blink her eyes twice ..

Tu ??? [ U ??]

" haan !" [ yes]

" tu sach main yahaan ha ??" [ r u really here ?] she touch his biscep

" kun tumhain main sapnon main b dikhne laga hun ?" [ y ?? u started dreaming about me ?]

" pehlay to nai dikhta tha ,par ab ka pata nai " [ didnt dream earlier but dont know about now ] she was looking at him as if he is some other specie .. as no one comes to jungle , last time it was some other scenario ..

He hold her shoulders ...

" main such main yahaan hun " [ i m really here ]

" wohi main soch rahi hun tu yahaan kaisay aa gya " [ thats what i m thinking , how u came here ?] she was still staring at him , he so wanted to hug her .. how beautiful she looked checking him like this...

It was perfect evening , sitting near water , no disturbance .. natural beauty and then she , the unique piece ..,

" tum theek kehti ho ,yeh jaga itni buri b nai ha " [ u were right ..this place isnt that bad ]

she wasn't answering , still considering him illusion , as she couldn't even imagine , a rich man like him will ever pay her a visit , she guessed his status a bit high from the cars that day ...

" Stop staring at me now , muje pata ha main hot hun , but aisay dekho gi to ..." [ i know i m hot , but if u see me like this ... then .. ] she cuts him

" yaar tu to sach main ha ,matlab yahaan ha " [ oh !! u r really here ]

She stands up instantly ... he also gets up

" kahaan ja rahi ho ?" [ where r u going ?]

" tujhe kuch chaiye ?? teri koi cheez reh gai jungle main ? tu yahaan kun lota ?? " [ what do u want ? did u loose something in jungle ? y u came back ? ]

ohhh ! he is here only to meet her and here she is saying if he lost something .. by the way what will he say y he came here ??

" bata na ? kun aaya ha ?? kuch kho gya tera "? [tell me ? y u came ? did u loose something ? ] He looks at her intently , her innocent face looked more cute in confusion ...

" haan ! kho gya kuch yahaan .. us din is jungle main " [ yes i lost something in jungle that day ]

" koi keemti cheez thi ?? ... yahaan jungle main dhoondna to bht mushkil ha , kya kho gya ?? " [ was it something precious ? its difficult to find it in jungle .. what have u lost ? ]

" main khud nahi janta kya kho gya , ya phir main khud..." [ i dont know what it was .. or may be , i lost myself here ]

" arrey pata b nai kya cheez thi ?? phir kun aaya? [ u dont even know what was that .. then y did u come here ?]

" pata nahi kun aa gya main yahaan " [ i dont know y i came here ] there was no excuse ,,,he didn't know y he actually came here .. just to see her ???


" tu to boht confusing ha yaar " [ u r very confusing ]

" may b "

" may b nai re , pakka confirm" [ not may be .. its confirm ] she started moving towards the hut ,

" cant we sit near the pond for some more time ?" don't know y he liked to sit beside her near pond ..

She goes toward the pond and sit there , he kept checking her

" ab aa b ja na , muje bol k khud wahaan khada ho gya " [ now come .. u asked me to sit and now standing there urself ]

Maan sits on her left side

" can I ask u something ? ..."

" haan bol " [ yes ask]

" tumhaari family aur ghar... ??" [ where is ur family and home ?]

"main achi nai hun is liye unhon ne ghar se nikal dia " [ i m not good thats y they threw me out ] he looks at her , clear answer , there was no story building ..he noticed she isn't looking at him ...

" kab ?" [ when ] he thought may b coz of affair with someone ...

" 14 saal pehlay " ... [ 14 years ago ]

" tum ... Really ??? 14 saal ?" he didn't know what to say .. he was speechless ,...

She looked at him , her big beautiful eyes were watery ...

" yeh sub kun janna chahta ha ?" [ y u wanna know all this ? ]

" pata nai , m sorry ... wo ..."

", ab yeh sab ka koi matlab nai " [ all this dont mean anything now ] there was silence for few minutes , no one spoke ... the killing silence ...

" un ki yaad aati ha ?" [ do u miss them ? ]

" pehlay aati thi , ab nai.. " [ i used to miss them before ..but not now ]

she tried to show a strong face but her words left her , she gulped the lump formed due to sadness ..yes she missed her family , she remember every minute of her childhood spent with them, her father , world best mother and bro ...

" tum jhoot bol rahi ho ??? tumhain ab b un ki yaad aati ha na ?" [ u r lying ?? u still miss them right ?]

" haan ! nahi bhula paati , 14 saal ki koshish k baad b nai bhula paati " [ yes ..i cant forget them .. even after trying for 14 years , i cant forget them ]

this was the only thing she failed in ... she dig her head in knees and remove her tears which were unable to control now , he did notice this ... how she was trying hard not to cry ..

He wanted to divert her and she was also not the one who will keep shedding tears infront of him

" I feel proud of u "

" kun main ne America discover kia ha ??" [ y ? did i discover america ? ] she was back to her mode ..he chuckled

" kun hass raha hai ? main koi joker dikhti hun ?" [ y r u laughing ? do i look like a joker ?]

" haan ,mera matlab ha nai " [ yes , i mean no ]

" haan bolay ga to maar nai dalun gi , joker b insaan hotay hain " [ if u will say yes i wont kill u .. jokers r also humans ]

"acha sun sham honay waali hai ,tujhe chalna chaiye , tu jo b dhondne aaya hai wo nai milay ga , jungle main nai mil sakta " [ listen !! its evening . u have to leave now .. whatever u r searching for , u cant find it in jungle ]

" theek kehti ho ,shayad nai milay ga " [ u r right .. i cant find it ] he lost his own self here , in her world or in her..

" mere sath chalo gi ?" [ will u come with me ?]

" hann ! chal " [ yes ..lets go ] he felt strangely very happy ,she was coming with him , in his world ,he checked her expressions ,is she serious ??

" abbey chal na , raat ho jay gi " [ lets go , it will turn dark ]

" tum sach main chal rahi ho ?" [ r u really coming ?]

" hero ! mere khayal main , haan ka matlab haan hota ha , English main yes " " ab chal " [ i think yes means yes ... now lets go ] she started moving ahead ...

" suno , apne sath kuch le kar nai jao gi yahaan se ?" [ listen !! wont u take something with u from here ?] he thought she must take some memory with her ...

" nahi kisi cheez ki zarurat nai ha " [ no i dont need anything ] she just took a knife with her , they started walking , again the same path .. it was too long for maan but with her , it wasn't that long, she don't even know who is he , only she talks to him like a normal person , not as maan singh khurana ...

" apna naam tum ne nahi bataaya ?" [ u didnt tell ur name ]

" kya karay ga jaan k , wese b naam main kya rakha ha ?" [ what will u do with name ?]

" main tumhain kya bulaon ???" [ what should i call u ?]

"main ne poocha tera naam ?" [ did i ask ur name ? ]

" nahi ,but main janna chahta hun " [ no but i want to know ]

"pehlay b bola tha ,phir bol rahi hun , jo chahay bula le " [ i told u already , now telling again .. u can call me whatever u want ] ... she didn't want to tell , she like her name from her mother only , only she could call her " geet " .. she kept her name ,.

they kept walking ... he was happy that she is finally going out of this place towards his world .

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Recap : she goes and apply oil on her body and then lay down a meter away from him as the place wasn't too large , " subh tak uth jay ga ! abi raat ho gai ha kahin ja b nai sakta yahaan se , mere b sone ka time ha , so hi jaati hun " ,.. within few minutes she falls off to sleep ...
.After sometime she feels the moment on straws , she gets up quickly , nothing visible ... she says a bit loudly " uth gya kya ?? " [ r u awake ] no reply ... she comes to check is he ok, touching his body she gets to know he is cold ... " abbey yeh to sardi se kanp rha ha , kya karun is ka main " [ohh !! he is shivering with cold ,what should i do ?] he was shivering as she already removed his shirt and his jeans was also not dry ,,, " koi garam kapda nai ha , aur yahaan aag b nai laga sakti , sub kuch jal jay ga , " [ nothing warm available .. cant heat the fire too , as it would burn everything ]

she gets up and pulls the kurta which was hanging on the opposite wall , " yeh pehna deti hun shayad better ho ga " [ should make him wear this , it would be better ] after struggle she succeeded in making him wear that and then she removes his wet jeans , and cuddles beside him, to make him a bit comfortable n warm , she felt strange , as used to cuddle in her mom's arms when she was 6 and now after whole 14 years she was in someone's arms ... " ab iss se ziada kuch nai kar sakti tere liye , tu b na utne ka naam nai le rha " [ cant do any thing more , u r nowhere near waking up 🤔 ]

He wakes up with the chirping of birds and sunrays which were falling on his face ... He opens his eyes and tries to adjust with light ... He gets up , body was paining badly .. n found himself in some other world , a hut . no proper ceiling , no floor , he looked at himself ,clad in dirty black kurta ,no pants , only inner and was laying on hay stack ... never in his life he even dreamt of such place ... his father being rich man provided him more then what he needed before he join business ...n then after joining business there was no looking back , where his big air conditioned rooms with king size beds and where grass straws ... Looking here and there he find no one ... " how I reached here?" he looks at himself injured , n few parts of body tied with pieces of cloth ... his servants used to come running towards him with the minor injury and morning coffee was brought as soon as he gets up but today nothing like that happened ...

... he didn't understand which world is it ? he has been in world's best hotels , clubs ,cinemas ,parks but not in such place ... y should he ? he always had luxurious life ... he looks at his shirt and jeans which a there on floor , both torn and blood spots were prominent ... his mind gets flashbacks of attack , bullet in his leg and falling in water ..he remember someone called him , but after that there was nothing in his mind ...

" no if I m not wrong , I did feel someone besides me ?" who can he be ??" he thinks ... " and who brought me here ?" .. may b some poor villager , if its so then he will not live here anymore, maan singh khurana will pay him enough to feed even his offsprings too " he could never imagine it could be a girl "but first I have to check where I m ?" he takes his jeans to check if his valet n phone is in , and to his luck it was in , phone was behind the valet so less water reached it but it was off "oh please ! it must work now .. how will I go out in this condition " .. he turns it on n tries to dial number ... no signals ... " arghhh ! where the hell I m ?" he was irritated ...he put his jeans on ... n tries to stand up , but injury in his leg makes him tremble , still he drags himself out of the hut , coming out he checks the place...

There was pond few meters away , looking up he could only see thick bushes and creepers ... Only from small portion sun rays were entering ... " where is the person now " ... and then he saw her ,she was coming out of water towards edge ... only in her inners ... long thick black hairs till her hips as if scissor never touched them ... and her curvy thin white body , she can beat any girl of his society ... she comes toward him ... " oye ! uth gya tu ... Boht sota ha yaar " [ oyee!! finally u r awake , u sleep too much ] ... he was surprised by her tone , first time someone was talking like this to him ,that too a girl n here in this forest ... " u here ?"..

" u here ? yeh to muje poochna chaiye .. but chor ,pata hai upper se gira ha ... main b giri thi " [ i should be the one who ask this , but i know u too fell into pit like me ] he looks at her, is she also someone like him who fell into pit yesterday ...

"aur khada kun ha ? aram se baith ja .. pata ha na tang pe goli lagi ha ,itni mushkil se nikali main ne " [ and y r u standing ?? sit down .. i pulled the bullet out with so much difficulty ] .. he gets another shock ... " tum ne goli nikali ?" [ u did that ??]

" nahin ! khud nikal gai " [ no , came out itself ] she mocks ...

" sach main yeh sub tum ne kia , I mean ..." [ really ?? u did this ?]

" I mean , u mean kuch nai ... koi aur dikha tere ko yahaan ? tera uper ka hissa khali ha kya ??" [ no i mean u mean , can u see anyone here ?? or ur upper portion is empty ?? ] he was measuring her words which were so heavy for maan singh khurrana to digest ... first girl on earth has guts to talk like this to MSK ...

" 2 mint bahar ruk main aati hun " [ stay here , i m coming in 2 minutes ]ohhh ! now someone was giving him orders ... she goes into the hut and comes out within a minute after changing her inners ...coming towards him she makes him sit forcefully on a block n place some apples and other wild fruits in front of him ...

" yeh kha le .. kal se kuch nai khaaya ha , tere liye ja k jungle se fresh laai hun " [ eat these , u didnt eat anything since yesterday .. i brought fresh from jungle for u ] ... maan looks at fruits and then toward her ... " will I eat this ?"

" haan to ? tuje kia lagta ha is jungle main tere liye roast aay ga ?" "ab kha le , phir se behosh hua na to yehin marte rehna , main kuch nai karney waali " [ so ?? u think there will roast for u in jungle ?? now eat , if u faint again , i wont do anything ] she hands him apple and goes in again ...

... he looks at the apple , greenish yellow , " I think she is right , I will not get anything else , issi pe kam chalao "she comes out with balm in hand and sits right in his feet n pulls his jeans a bit up from injured part . without permission or warning ... he jerks back ,n she looks up ... " what are u doing ??"

"abbey yaar ,tu ne ab tak khaaya b nai aur haan kuch nai karney lagi tere sath , abi tak koi insaan nai khaaya hai main ne , mai insaan nai khati " [ u didnt eat yet ?? and yeah i wont do anything with u .. i didnt eat any human yet , i dont eat humans ] ..

He takes a bite of apple ,n she puts his leg on her lap, which was fully naked and start removing the cloth bandaged on it ... he looks at her , big beautiful hazel eyes , and soft pure skin ... So carefully she removed the cloth, he feels odd seeing her sitting infront of him only in inners .. offcourse he is a man not saint ...she was about to put balm when he stop her hand midway and says " wait ! main khud kar lun ga ... tum dress pehn lo " .. [ wait !! i will do it myself ... u go n wear the dress ]

" haan ! le khud kar le ... aur haan dress nai ha mere pass , yeh b 3 din pehlay chori kiye ,naheen to bina dress k hoti yahaan " [ hmm !! do it urself .. and i dont have dress , i stole these 3 days back .. else i would have been without it here ] ... Shock after shock ... what is this girl ? is she from real world ? ... there was no hesitation ,no fear , no pitch of sadness while telling that she don't have dress...

" Dress nai ha matlab ??" [ no dress means ?? ]

" yeh to simple sentence ha , kesay explain karun ,, dress nai ha matlab nai ha " [ what !! this is simple sentence , no dress means no dress , how should i explain ?? ] she says in irking tone ... "tera uper ka portion sach main khali ha , asan si baat samajh nai aati " [ now m sure ur upper portion is empty thats y u dont understand simple things 😆]... he couldn't say a word just kept listening to her , and finish applying balm ... she stands up ...

. he pulls his phone from his pocket , no signals again ...she looks at his phone " hmm ! acha phone ha , but yahaan signal nai aatay " [ good phone , but no singnals here ]

" tum yahaan rehti ho ?" [ u really live here ?] he asks again not believing she really lives here ...

.. " haan ! ajeeb laga tere ko ?" [ hmm , do u find it strange ??]

" hmm very strange " he says matter of fact ..

" acha chod , muje yeh jagah pasand ha , yeh bta kahaan se ha ?" [ ok leave !! i like this place ,.. where r u from ?? ]

" dehli se " he replies ,still thinking how can someone like this place , " yeh btao , yahaan se nikalne main kitna time lagay ga aur signals kahaan aatay hain ?" [ tell me how much time will it take to get outta here , and where will my phone catch the signals]

" aur agar main kahun k yahaan se bahar nai ja sakte ?aur jo yahaan aata ha use yaheen rehna padta ha meri tarah to ?" [ what if i say , one who comes here , has to stay like me ??] .. he looks at her with weirdest expressions

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Part 3

Recap :" aur agar main kahun k yahaan se bahar nai ja sakte ?aur jo yahaan aata ha use yaheen rehna padta ha meri tarah to ?" .. he looks at her with weirdest expressions

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" what ?? no ways ... " she starts laughing, " ahah ! tera muh dekhne waala tha . wese yeh jagah itni buri b nai ,jitni tune shakal bnaai ha .." [ ahah !! ur face was worth watching , but this place isnt as bad as u made the face ] how will she know where maan singh khurana and where this place

" whatever .. tell me what I asked "

" teri taang pe chot lagi ha is liye chalna mushkil ho ga , jungle se road tak kaafi raasta ha , aur road k pass tak signals aa jaatay hain , tu aisa kar kal chalay jana " [ ur leg is injured , and its a long way till road , it will b difficult for u to walk , u could go tomorrow ] she told him...

" nahin ,mujhe abi jaana ho ga ," [ no i have to go today]

" abbey yaar tu kon sa president ha k mulk ka nizaam ruk jay ga , aik din ruk ja kal chalay jaana , wese be malam lagaya ha ,iss se jaldi theek ho ga " [ u r not the president that country will not run without u , i applied balm it wll cure soon and u can go tomorrow ] he looks at his injuries ,she was right but his family n everyone will b worried ,and no one will even think of this place ,he has to go out himself , he cant stay here anymore ...

" nahin , main ne kaha na muje aaj hi lotna ha " [ no i said i have to go today ] ..he starts walking ,which was gr8 difficulty for him ..

." abbey ruk , ziddi to bht ha , but aisay janay nai dun gi ... Itni chot main kuch ho gya to ?" [ stop !! u r too stubborn , what if something happened ?? i will not let u go like this ]

" kuch b nai ho ga , main chala jaon ga " [ noting gonna happen , i will go ] he puts his shoes on ...

" acha ruk , main sath chalti hun road tak , warna teri agli zindagi jungle main bhataktay beet jay gi " [ ok , i will also go with u till road , else u will keep wondering in jungle for rest of ur life ]

" she starts moving along with him , ... bare footed ... " ok ! but sandal to pehn lo " [ wear ur sandals ] .

" nahin hain , " [ i dont have ] uff ! she don't even have sandals ...

" but tumhaaray pair " [ but ur feet ??" ]

" kuch nai ho ga , main jaati rehti hun , ab chal tuje lagi ha aur road tak jaanay main time lagay ga , muje wapas b aana ha " [ its ok , i stay here and used to it .. now lets go , u r injured ..it will take time to reach the road ]

They start moving slowly from thin path and then into the bushes and trees , he was looking at her , how she knew every path and was walking bare footed so effortlessly ,as she knew where to put step or not

" at some distance he start feeling thirsty , but don't ask her , as she will again say , " khali dimag , yahaan pani kahaan se aaya "

She looks back to his face and come quickly toward him , " arrey , kuch chaiye kya ? dard ho rha ha ? bola tha wait kar le , ab yahaan baith main aati hun " [ do u need something ?? is it paining ?? sit here i will b back ] saying so she moves into the opposite bush and comes back after sometime , and hands him the clay glass full of water ...

" pee le , or thori der main aagay chalain gay ,,, " [ drink it !! will move ahead after some time ] .. strange ! she guessed right what he needed exactly ...

" tumhain kaisay pata muje pani chaiye tha?" [ how do u know i needed water ?]

" mere sath b yehi hota tha , jab main shuru main jaati thi " [ it happened with me too when i came here ]

He felt bad , but there was no sadness on her face ... they start moving again ...

" tum yahaan kaisay aai ?" [ how did u come here ?]

" 3 saal pehlay teri tarah yahaan giri thi paani main , upper se yeh deep dikhta ha aur bushes b but wo paani itna deep nai ha ,aur muje chot b kam lagi thi iss liye bach gai " [ i too fell into this pit 3 years ago , this looks deep from above but its not that deep , i wasnt injured much so survived ]

" tum 3 saal se yaahan ho ??" [ u r here from 3 years ?] he got another shock...

" haan , issi liye yahan ki har cheez pata ha .." [ hmm , that y i know everything here ]

" tum bilkul akeli yahaan rehti ho 3 saal se ?" [ r u staying here alone for 3 years ]

" haan ! " [ yes]

"aur tum apni cheezain , matlab food and everything kahaan se arrange karti ho ?"[ and from where u arrange ur food and everything ?]

" khana , jungle main boht hotay hain fruits and vegetables ,aur baaki har cheez ha yahaan ... kabi kabi shehr jaati hun , logon ko dekhne , sirf dekhne k wo kaisay rehte hain ... " [ there r alot of fruits and vegetables in jungle .. and i go to city sometimes to see how people live ] she was telling as if its nothing for her , yes it was nothing for her now ..

Talking about few things , they reach near the road after whole 2 n half hours ... " chal dekh ab tere phone main signal aa jaen gay " [ now check ur phone .. it will have signals now ]

" he looks at his phone , it was catching few signals , and started ringing ,there were voice messages ,calls ,few mails ... he calls someone

" XYZ road near jungle within 5 minutes ," " yes sir was the reply and he hangs up

" bht gusse se baat karta ha hero ,haan " [ hero , u talk with so much attitude haan ]

" hmm , wo log kuch der main aa jaen gay " [ they will come in few minutes]

" wese , tum ne meri itni help ki , tumhain kya chahiye badlay main ?" [ u helped me alot , what do u need as a reward ]

" kya de sakta ha ?"[ what can u give ? ]

" whatever u say " .. MSK thinks he could buy anything with money

" muje mera happy waala bachpan wapis la de ga ?" [ can u bring back my happy childhood ? ]he looks at her instantly , there was a bit sadness on her face ,

" sorry ! I didn't mean to hurt u "

"koi baat nai , tu ja tere log aatay hon gay , aur muje kuch nai chaiye tere se , wese b iss jagah aaj tak tere ilawa koi dusra insaan nai aaya " . [ its ok !! ur people must be coming , i dont need anything from u .. no one came here except u ]

" tum mere sath chal sakti ho hamesha k liye , matlab I can provide u a better life style" [ u can go with me forever , i can provide u better life style ]

" tu meri dunya main 1 din nai ruk saka aur main teri dunya main hamesha k liye aa jaon ?? hero ! tu ajeeb hi ha " [ u didnt stay on my world for one day , but i go with u forever ?? u r too strange ]she was calling him weird but , she was out of senses for him ,

He receives call again ..

" wo log bht kareeb hain ,tum yaheen raho gi ?" [ they r near , will u stay here ?] he didn't want her to go infront of them in her inners ...

" haan ! jab tak tu chala nai jaata , main nai jaon gi wapas " [ hmm , untill u leave i will stay here ]

" dekho , aik baar phir keh rha hun merey sath chalo , yahaan yeh sab ..." [ i m saying again , lets go with me ... here its ...] She cuts him ,

" kaha na wo meri dunya nai ha ,muje aadat ho gai ha is dunya ki . tu ja , main tere logon k samne nahi jaon gi aisay , muje pata ha nai ja sakti " [ i said its my world and i m used to it , i will not go in front of ur people like this .. i know cant go ]

" naam kya ha tumhara ? [ whats ur name ?]

" naam main kya rakha ha hero , tu jo chahay bula le , wese b hum phir nai milain gay ,tu apni dunya main aur main yahaan , aur haan idhr kabhi mat lotna ",.. [ whats there in name ? u can call me whatever u want ... infact we will not meet after this .. u will b in ur world and i will b in mine ... and yes !! never come back here ] he blankly looks at her ...

" they hear horns of cars ,... his team was near .. " tu ja , or apne zakhm ko ache se dekhna ,main wahaan uper se dekhun gi ,tu jay ga to main b wapis chali jaon gi " [ u go now , and take care of ur wounds ,i will see from top and will go when u leave ] least she knew maan singh khurana have enough people to take care , saying so she start climbing the tree and within a minute , was on the top most branch ... He looks at her , didn't want to leave her here ... he can provide her everything but she refused ...still he didn't want to leave ... how can someone b so selfless ...

He comes on the road ,.. 5 cars one after the other stop on the road , his people along with police officers come out , looking at him they already guessed he was attacked and now they have to bear maan singh khuranas wrath police officer was telling him " sir , we will find out soon "

" Mr singhania , I think I need a better team for my security , these guys r of no use "

" yes , yes sir , I will..."

" now move " ,,, , driver open the door for him ," here sir "

He looks at the tree again , he knew where she is sitting ,she was smiling and a faint smile appears on his face , , Mr singhania saw him smiling .. really ?? maan is smiling at this time ?? ,... she waves at him and he waves back ... mr singhania follow his eyes and there was monkey on the opposite tree ,as geet was in leaves now ... he was confused ,is maan waving at monkey ??? but he didn't dare to ask from him ...and they go off ...sitting in car , maan once again looks back , he felt bad for leaving her here , she was still on the tree ...

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savitri devi ( dadi) stepped out of the car , she had to park her car at a distance from mansion coz of long queue of car ahead , as she started walking , she stepped on a stone and ankle got twisted , " ahhh ," she held the car ...

geet was hiding behind the car , so that the coming person don't see her but hearing her plea she came out quickly ...

" what happened ?? are u alright ??" she came and asked in a concerned voice ... seeing her concern dadi didn't doubt her ..

" my ankle , it got twisted and paining .."

Ahh she knew it pains a lot ... in the beginning many times in jungle her ankle to got twisted

" tum , mera matlab hai aap , car main baithiye , main dekhti hun .." [sit in the car i will check ]

" hum yaheen se doctor ko call kar lete hain , I coldnt walk "

" nahi ,yeh abi theek ho jay ga , aap bethiye to sahi " .. [ no it will be alright .. just sit here]

Geet could see the royality in her persona and way of talking ... she insisted her to sit in the car .. as she sat on passenger seat , geet bent down to hold her feet , she moved away quickly ...

" arrey nahi aap aisay " [ no .. u may not hold my foot like this ?]

She smiled instantly thinking about maan , who also did same when she was about to apply balm on his leg .. dadi got confused seeing her smiling like this

" aisa kia keh dia hum ne ??" [ what made u smile ]

"kuch nahi , main kar deti hun .. thoda dard ho ga but phir bilkul theek ho jay ga " [ nothing .. i will check .. it will pain a bit then will be ok ]

She hold her foot and moved in a manner to get the twisted joint back in its position ..

" ahh , " dadi yelped in pain .but other moment ,she felt her foot all right .. .

" ziada dard hua ??" [ did it pain too much ?? ]

" hmm its allright now "

Dadi smiled and then she checked her out .. she was looking so gorgeous in black saaree , the same saree dadi asked ani to buy from boutique but she didn't buy , telling her that she cant carry it ...geet's innocent face had a smile now ..

dadi couldn't stop herself from complimenting her ...mentally wishing what if maan find her type of DIL ... but other moment ,she thought maan and pure Indian girl , no ways .

" u r so beautiful "

" hmm ,hero b yehi kehta ha " [ hero says the same ] she giggled ..

" hero ? aur wo kon hain ?? .. [ hero who is he ?]

" hai na , mera hero " [ he is my hero ] she loved calling him hers ...

" hmm ,to wo bilkul theek kehtay hain " [ hm he says truth ] dadi said , unknown of the fact that who the hero actually is ...

She smiled in return

"aap ka naam kia ha ??" [ whats ur name ?]

" sab yeh kiun poochtay hain ?? naam main kia rakha ha ??" [ y everyone asks name .. whats in name ?]

" nahi hum ne to waisay hi pooch lia , matlab aap k parents ap ko kuch to bulatay hon gay na ?" [ no .i just asked .. what ur parents call u ?]

Dadi noticed her face turning sad hearing about family ,so she decided to change the topic ... ...

" thank u so much .. now I can walk .." ..

She came out of the car and started walking , couldn't believe her foot was paining so badly few minutes back...

" aur aap kahaan ja rahi hain ?? .. [ where r u going ?]

" main hero se milne aai thi , but lagta ha wo busy ha , so main wapis ja rahi hun " [ i came to meet hero .. but i think he is busy ..so m going back ]

Geet actually didn't sleep whole night , then decided to meet him , to get the answers of her own insecurities , .. she knew its his birthday coz she checked it on his id .. so wore that saaree for him with all accessories he brought for her , as she loved the saree herself too ... after so many years she dressed herself to look beautiful ... today she wanted to look beautiful ... but wasnt aware of this party .. after coming here she got to know n now couldnt enter the party too , coz she didnt have invitation , or any other identity to show ..

As she turned dadi said again ..

" aap hmain kun nai join kar leti , party main , I mean aap k hero to waisay b busy hain " [ u can join me in party as ur hero is busy ]

She didn't know , who the lady is , so answered in her own tone

" mere paas invitation card nai ha " ? [ but i dont have invitation ]

she already tried to enter but guards didn't let her go in , as she didn't have card .. and she wasn't known personality too ...

Dadi got to know if she is someone from office or someone known she would have surely flattered her , but she don't know..so dadi also didn't tell her too ...

" hmaaray pass card hai , ap hmaaray sath aa sakti hain " [ i have invitation ..u can come with me ]

Geet wanted to meet maan so decided it will b ok , as she will b able to meet him and wish him too ... she nodded ..

" chaliye " [ lets go ]

As geet entered with dadi , no one stopped her ... she was amazed, with all the preparations n everything ... this was grand party ,she got busy in checking out all the preparations and dadi moved ahead , leaving her among all the guests

She looked around and found many people surrounding her .. she was afraid of seeing them . what if someone talk to her ? she just talks to hero and no one else .. she had a strange fear from people , as she spent 3 years all alone ... she was checking out everyone like other creatures ... after sometimes she realized what stupidity she is doing ...

maan was standing behind , seeing her long hair and saree , he thought its her , but then after morning incident he didn't want to do any stupidity again ..so got busy in another discussion ... he strongly felt she is here , near him ...

Geet was looking for him , but seeing all people she herself got confused , it wasn't easy for her to search , among all , and she don't know anyone too ... decided to go into his room , may b he will meet her there ... so silently went upstairs...

Maan was getting more restless , as he didn't see the figure again ... he wanted to leave the party soon but it wasn't easy to go

Naintara comes forward to take him to the dance floor , but do not see the waiter coming from other side n drinks spilled on maan ,.. he hated naintara , she is always clingy and then such mistakes ...he wanted to get her thrown out but she was rathod's daughter who r close to dadi ... he always had to bear her ...

" sorry , sorry ,... " she was sounding half drunk as always ..

" its ok " maan mutters ,pass an angry look to both naintara and waiter then goes to his room ... he mentally thanked her ,as now would be able to go out of this party for some time ...

As he comes to the door , find it a bit open .. no one visit his room in his absence then ?? he went inside checking everywhere .. found no one ... then thought may b he forgot to lock the door himself .. he remove the coat, plzce it on the bed

...

He goes to washroom and locks the door , as he turns someone hugs him ... first was shocked with the sudden hug , that too in his washroom and initiated by someone else ... but as he looks down ,he close his eyes , and inhale sharply

"uff , I gone mad , us ladki ne muje pagal bana dia , 1 week se itni baar usse imagine kar chuka hun , party main , room main ...har jagah wo... " [ uf this girl is making me crazy .. i m imagining her everywhere ]

But when he open his eyes , she was still there .. hugging him in the same way ...first time she initiated the hug ... he tried to feel her , brushing his fingers in her hairs , he could touch her ...,feel her ... .. yeah she is really here ... he smiled and hugged back , more tightly crushing her body with his rocky hard one,as if didn't meet her from ages...

Saanson ko jeene ka ishara mil gaya

Zindagi ka pata dobara mil gaya

Tu mila to Khuda ka sahaara mill gaya

Tu mila to Khuda ka sahaara mill gaya

Ghamzada ghamzada dil ye tha ghamzada

Bin tere, bin tere, dil ye tha ghamzada

" I missed u , I missed u , missed u so much " he says all in one go ...

He felt wetness on his shirt , wait , she was crying ... he tore the hug , making her look toward him .. she parted for a second n hugged again ..

Aaraam de tu mujhe, barson ka hun main thaka

Palkon pe raatein liye, tere waste main jaga

Mere har dard ki gehrai ko mehsoos karta hai tu

Teri aankhon se gham tera mujhe maaloom hone laga

" se... seven d..dayss , its been seven ...days " she said sniffing , hugging him tightly , pressing her face harder on his chest ...

He realized what she meant by that , she was counting days for him ?? was telling him indirectly,... that she equally missed him , but her feelings were triple then his , she felt all alone again , that day he promised himself , that will never let her feel alone but he did it again ...

He wanted to console her , tell her that he was not here , but no word came out .. how could he be careless .. how could he go without telling her ?

Main raaz tujhse kahun humraz ban ja zara

Karni hai kuch guftgu alfaaz ban ja zara (x2)

Juda jab se hua

Tere bina khamosh rehta hoon me

Labon ke paas aa

Ab tu aawaaz bann ja zara ...

when she looked at him , with her watery eyes n wet eyelashes , his world collapsed ... her eyes were saying everything loudly ... he didn't miss to notice

Tu mila to Khuda ka sahara mill gaya

Tu mila to Khuda ka sahara mill gaya

Ghamzada ghamzada dil ye tha ghamzada

Bin tere, bin tere, dil ye tha ghamzada

PART 16 CONTINUED BELOW ...

Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Aaraam de tu mujhe, barson ka hun main thaka

Palkon pe raatein liye, tere waste main jaga

Aaraam de tu mujhe, barson ka hun main thaka

Palkon pe raatein liye, tere waste main jaga

Mere har dard ki gehrai ko mehsoos karta hai tu

Teri aankhon se gham tera mujhe maaloom hone laga

" se... seven d..dayss , its been seven ...days " she said sniffing , hugging him tightly , pressing her face harder on his chest ...

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Its treat as the story thread completed 100 pages

Cont from last part 😊 n teaser 😆

She turns and gets more closer , placing her head more comfortably on his lap ... but strangely he never felt awkward .. never did she make him uncomfortable ... he recalled how close they have been , many times .. still he didn't regret any moment of their closeness ..


As he lays on bed , he thinks about her , " oh party tomorrow , how will I meet her then ?? " ... " its been whole week now "

He knew she had a fear that he will also leave her someday and she will have to live all alone again ... he felt she is getting used too of his presence, even she told him indirectly too


I mentioned in previous page ..I think no one read
the readers of this story r ulta 😆... reading the reviews of this and last part 😆

in all FF hero undress heroine , yahan dress up honay pe khushi mana rhay hain 🤣 .. isnt it fantastic 😆... all shareef bachas n baday log too 😆😆 u guys r awesome
Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Uhuu. Teaser 2 ..

" hero , yeh to band hi nahi ho rahi mere se , " he comes more close .. " tu nikal de ga ?" he don't say anything , just pull her toward him , she hit his body , he unzips the half that was done ... she feels his hand roaming on her back


Yeh raha Eid 2nd day treat 😛 .. agar kal b update nai mila to teaser se kam chala lena 😆
Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago

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