REVENGEFUL LOVE 2 UPDATED THREAD 2/ PT 6 on PAGE 107/ 13-8-2015 - Page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago


wow lovely superb update..te my maan ki intro was lovely rocking..te way he have pushed his love for his revenge ..his childhood have been tarnished coz of some cunning business mens..te way my maan waking with his nightmare which haunting him was lovely..but nothing can stop my msk to achieve his revenge..te way he descend down like sher was lovely ..i love te update so much yar
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful start ... Maan is haunted by his past.. Wondering what went wrong... Maans mom is very strict.. Even angad also scared of her... Shreya is such a cutie pie.. Can't wait for next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update maneet know each other shreya cute arpita strict
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Posted: 10 years ago
Congozz on new story sweets ...

RL season 2 ..👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 1

Nice part ...

maan is going with his 2 friends...

waiting for more

thanks for pm sweets
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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting start
i assume tht lil girl in past to b geet
ok so here is his mom
i thought tht would b dadi
sherya?? hw old is she
looks really small
ineresting precap

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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful... Start...the past .. Maan has suffered alot.. In his childhood.. ND the girl who tried to console him is geet.. Bcz of her family maan is suffering obviously it will reveal as the story will proceed..in present.. Maan's mother is a strict woman.. She is instructing maan for the deal... His friend also knows his mother nature that's why came late.. awww... Maan's sister is so cute and little... precap sounds interesting...update soon... Post the update where ever u want but plz give access to me to read it.. It's nice story
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Posted: 10 years ago
congs for new revenge love story. update soon...
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PART - 2



MAAN was ready to leave and Shreya,his 6 year old cuty pie sister giving him a list of her wish.



Maan kissed her and promised that he brought each and every thing she demands. He called Nakul and handover Shreya to him. He took Shreya inside and Maan left with Angad. Both reached air port and waiting in a parking area. Soon one familier car enterd and their wait overed. One of their best buddy just parked the car in next que near Maan's car. Adi,their another best friend come out of the car and run to both.


"sorry sorry guys. I know we are late but what to do,this traffic made us sucks." he apolozise and explain,while Maan's eyes are clearly found restless by both. Like he was searching for someone. Angad nudge Adi and both winked to each other. "Maan are you listening or not?" Adi called bit loud to grab his attention.


Maan focused again to him and hit him. "why are you screaming? I am not deaf." he was frustrated which was clear by his words.


Meantime one more girl come out from the car. She came and stood next to Adi. Maan glared both. "isi k chakkar me late hua hai na tu?" he gritted his teeth and got that girl's glare in return.

"Maan don't blame me ok? This all happen because of your..." Before she completes Angad jumped in the conversation.


"because of your packet..." he smile wide and enjoyed Maan's anger and frustration.



Maan glance all again carefully. Cars coming and moving but nothing seems as special which deserve his attention. He turned sad and turned to bring out his luggage. Angad moved to him. "why are you doing all this. Hum hai na you will enjoy with your chhota packet." Angad's word definitely testing his patience and rosed his anger. But he dont gave his reaction,so Angad hold him and swirled to another side,facing Adi and his girlfriend.


"Angad let me do my work. Why you showing me these owls?" he remarked and she opened her mouth wide.



"hww you called us owl? Fine from next time i don't do your any work." She to snap back briskly over his annoying remark.


"Maan you can named me anything but don't call my sherni an owl ok?" Adi to retorted back,to which he start fuming.


"why the hell you both glued to each other? This is air port ok." Maan yelled but not loud. He was pissed off right now and everything just irritating him. "and your Pinky koi kaam ki nahi hai ye." Maan's judgemental comments burst all three in laugh and Maan staring all 3 in confusion. He wasn't aware that all these three just enjoying his plights. They were intentionally teasing and provoking him,to which he reacts exactly they want.


"common guys lets stop. Don't irritate him more." Adi now don't want to mock his restlessness any more so he asked both as well to stop. "Geet come out." he called and one more girl appeared from the back side.


A sweet round shaped face,brown hazled eyes with sharp nose. Skin like a butter smooth. In short an epitome of beauty for which any one can falls so easily. But above all which make her special was her eyes seemd so silent yet absorbing many thing at once in it. Seeing her Maan's stern face turn down to calm. His stretched muscles relaxed. Pinky hit his arm. "now tell who did this."


"here is your chhota packet. I told you Adi would brought her at any cost." Angad talking to him but now for him all world seemed vanished. If anything is getting his attention was his Geet only. Love of his life or can say his Life.


Maan opened his arms for her and she run to absorbed by him. Both hugged each other firmly. After whole two weeks both were able to see each other,and yet their sepration period is not overing. It increased for one more month as Maan was ready to leave India for a bussiness trip. Her eyes shed tears and damp his chest. Maan sense and tilted her head to glance her face. He palmed her face and wiped of the tears. "you ok?" his tone is serious.


"i am fine dont worry." Geet kissed on his palm while conforming but her face told otherwise.


Maan's heart squeezed hard and once again he engulfed her in him. "guys this place is still air port." Angad teased,reminding Maan about his words he passed few minutes before.

"and you call my sherni is useless. Its her magic that your packet is here. Or else who had a courage to bring her out of that haunted house and without guards." Adi to got a chance to show their effect. They still teasing both.


"guys.." Maan said sternly and all turn quite.


Angad caress Geet's head softly."hey chutki why are you crying? Dekh ye ek mahina kaise nikal jayega pata b nahi chalega." He tried to comfort her but no words are able to sooth her pain.




Inside all knows the situation but Geet is the one who had facing indeed. Already they met after two weeks and now they going to parted for whole month. Moreover he is going abroad so there is no chance to meet in between.


Maan parted her and framed her face. "Geet don't make me weak. You know i have to go. I can't disappoint my mom and family." he said in a firm voice. She nodded and tried to hold back her flowing tears but her heart sobbed badly.


"i know. Dont worry i will not cry." she said quarreling with her sobs.


"and why you scared? I am leaving these three na. They will be with you in every situation in my absence." He tried his level best to cheer her up. Maan kissed her and left to catch his flight.



Geet was so upset and gloomed. Something is bothering her. Angad took all of them to college. Already they missed their morning classes. Even in the class Geet behave subduded. Physically she was there but her mind was absent.


In break time all 4 reached to canteen. Angad and Adi moved to brought something they could eat. Pinky got time and she confronts her. "Geet what happened? I notice you since morning. You seemed scared? What happened? Did you father or brother again scold or threatened you?" Pinky was concerned and wants to know the reason of her aloof behaviour.


"no i try my level best to avoid them. Waise b unhe konsa time hai." she was disappointed with him clearly evident.



"then what? Ok i got it. You again saw that dream right?" Pinky guess and Geet nodded to confirm. "common Geet it was your past. 6 saal ho chuke hai us baat ko."


"i know but what to do. My heart never forgot his eyes carrying hatred for me and my family that time. Pinky i almost loosed him." Geet shared her fears with Pinky.


"Geet i think us baat ko to Maan b bhul chuka hoga tu kyu pakad k baithi hai? I agree that time he was angry on you but now things were change. He accept you in his life na. He forgive you 6 years back Geet."


"but only me. He accept me,not my family. Kuchh nahi bhula hai wo. He still burning in the fire of revenge. Pinky i don't want to loose him again. Par kya karu? I dont know what exactly happened and how my father involved in that. One thing which is sure is that Maan never forgive him. I am scared of his anger. Still his hate fills eyes haunted me in nights. The way he reacted that time...what if he do it again? Pinky if this happene again then this time i am surly die." Geet's heart thumping badly. Her mind was struggling with the consequences of this Revenge game.







HI GUYS,

i made a thread and those who are still not visit,pls go and read my note regarding "REVENGEFUL LOVE"


i updated second part here on IF as many new readers gave their respond on part one. But if this respond turn missing in further updates then Blog option is open for me no doubts. so pls visit this thread. Read, decide and tell me your opinion.


Thanks for reading and sorry for mistakes...

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Posted: 10 years ago
So, Maan and geet both are in love... he have hater and revenge only towards Geet's family...😊😊😊

His really forgiven geet year back... are waiting for right time to his revenge 💔💔💔


waiting for next...

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