REVENGEFUL LOVE 2 UPDATED THREAD 2/ PT 6 on PAGE 107/ 13-8-2015 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
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for the RL 2 dear👏👏👏 👏👏👏
Awesome Prologue and CS👏👏👏
Eagerly waiting for the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART - 1


IN Past:

Bell rangs of school and all students rushed outside. A boy having a lean body,pulled up his bag on his shoulders ran outside in full pace. Ignoring everyone coming in his way. He was in hurry,may be running from some one.


One feeble figure following him. She was making her way to him. After so much hudles she managed to reached near him. She just placed her hand onto his shoulders,carrying so much weight then a normal student, to made him realize about her presence. He flinched off her hand and finally swirled to her side. She glance in his swalloed eyes,in which rage,frustration,agony,anxiety all are evidet very clearly. "hey you okay? I was trying to talk but you ignored me. I know..." her voice is soft but carried a string of pain along with it.


"yeh.. Why not? You and your family knows everything. Because it was your father who destroyed me and my world. But dont think that you won. I will make sure you all pay back..." his voice is hoarse with the anger he kept inside him since his major lost.


Her brown eyes welled up the way he treating her. She was so naive to understand his all alligations. She raised her hand which Maan shove away. "JUST STAY AWAY." he glared and command her before leaving.

***



IN Present:

HE was wriggling on his bed in dream. His muscles was tensed and he wake up with a jerk. He was panting heavily. Sweat beads shines on his musculine body. Revenge he reminded himself daily. His every step was to achieve his desire.


He come out from his bed and moved toward window. Sun shines playing hide and seek with curtains. He slipped them aside and welcome the beams inside. His eyes roamed in room and struck at the clock. Made him aware about the time. He spend some time in toning his body and fresh n up he walked toward the main hall of the mansion.



Hall equipped with furniture and other expensive statues at the corners,explaining the taste of Khurana's. Well known bussiness family of Delhi. In the center a middle aged woman was sitting on the large couch,engrossed in reading some papers.


He reached to her an greeted her morning. She tilted her head to glance his face. "have you done Maan?" she asked with smile and he nodded. "good. Maan there is no need to tell you how important this bussiness trip for us. So not to dissappoint me." She was strict and hard in her tone.


"never mom." he assured.


"come for breakfast." she invite him to discuss some more matters,before he leave for air-port. "Maan i think you should leave now. Dont miss your flight." she instruct him.


"mom i am waiting for Angad. He will be here soon." He told her. She nodded and left the mansion with driver.


Meantime Angad,one of his best friend having same heavy built like Maan,arrived in the mansion. "Angad you are late. And where is Adi?",He asked strongly.


"i was already here,just waiting for your mom to leave." he explained. "hey dont gave me this look. You know how strict she is and i dont want to become her prey early morning." he cleared and Maan stared him but he was mute as Angad was right. Maan's mom Arpita is strict both at office and as well in house.


"bhaiyya.." when both were busy in talking a sweet voice chimmed in both's ears. Both's gaze turned towards the direction voice is coming. A small girl,in her night suit coming very fast,clenching her teddy in one arm. She still rubbing her eyes. She ran towards both and Angad quickly took her in his arms.

"good morning princess. How are you?" he kissed on her round cheeks.


"Angad bhaiya where is my chocolate?" she asked with authority.


Angad show tantrum and she pouts. He quickly put hand in the pocket of loose jeans and brought out two chocolates. Her glittering eyes gleamed brighten. "wow my fav. Thank you bhaiya." she said in a excited tone.


"now where is my chocolate?" Angad demands and she kissed him back.


Maan smiled and took her from his arms. She kissed him too. "bhaiya i want lots of toys. Aap laoge na?" She demands from Maan and he gave his approval by kissing her. "Where is Adi bhaiya?" suddenly she asked and reminded Maan about his absence.


"where is he?" he asked again.



"you know him. Mr. Majnu will reach directly to air port. He text me.", Angad show his message. "dont worry he will be there with your packet." Angad chuckled and Maan glared him.



Both was ready to leave. Maan dropped his baby sister down. "Shreya sweetheart be a good girl and dont irritate mom with your mischiefs ok." he cautioned and she nodded.


One servant came and informed that his luggage loaded in car. Both left the KM.




PRECAP: He took her face in his palms. she whishpered she was better but her face said otherwise.



NOTE: HERE IS FIRST EPI OF RL2. NEXT WILL BE ON BLOG LIKE DT.


AND SORRY FOR MY MISTAKES. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
yeyy me 1st.. 🥳
poor maan.. he saw many things right from his childhood which shouldn't be seen.. but at the same time geet also was naive n innocent who cared about maan even when they were children..
arpita, maan's strict mother.. but there must b some more secretes behind her such nature..
richa, there is no dadi? haven't you planed or she would come later on?
shreya, sweet little girl, pampered by all...
waiting for more richa..😃
Edited by mauaa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
Interesting start is that gal is geet
maan sis shreya sounds sweet n mom strict
precap interesting is it past or present
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
Nice starting

Maaneet knew each other from School

Now he is going back.

Cant wait for Next

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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Nice start
So maan mom is Hitler type all r scared of her
Lovely update
Please add me to up pm list
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
superb start n waiting for the next
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
Oh Good start. waiting for the next update. Looking forward to how this will move forward.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's really very interesting starting of this story. In past.maan is very angry on a girl as her family destroyed his family. Now he wanted to take revenge. Who was that girl. Was she geet. In present maan'snmother is a strict woman who wants.all work with perfection. Maan is leaving for important work. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
very interesting first part😊maan and geet know each other from school days and he is blaming her family for destroying his family and in present maan gets disturbed in his sleep with some dreams...his mom is a very strict woman and wants everything perfect but I am confused with maan's sister's age😕she is so small...is maan's mother his step mom...eagerly waiting for more and maan and geet meeting again 😊
Edited by ns.1 - 10 years ago

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