th#2 Khawaish Season 2/TH#3 ADDED

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Today, two people bound in one relation, now society known as husband & wife...

She stands with him on door, for gharpravesh... Her mother - in -law welcomes her in new house... and gives responsibility of ... ????????????????

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PART 12

At night, after sleeping ruhani, maan try to talk with geet...

Maan : geet

Mujhe tumse kuch baat krni hai

Geet : hmm

Maan : tum kal se college join kr rhi ho

Geet : apne fasla liya hai

Mujhe toh manana hi honga na

Maan : geet tum asa kyun kh rhi ho

Geet : thik hai aange se ye bhi nhi kahungi

Maan held her hand and make sit on bed and own sit beside her...

Maan : geet sorry

Jo maine tumhe din mein kaha

.

Mein tumhe hurt nhi krna chahta tha

Par fir bhi kr diya

.

Geet : aapko asa kyun lagta hai

Maine aapse shaadi krke

Apni zindagi kharab kr li hai

Maan : geet

Wo isliye

Tumhe koi mujhse bhi better mil sakta tha

Jo tumhe smjhta

Tumhe pyaar krta

Par maine kya kiya

.

Tumhe shaadi ki phli raat

Maine jo behave kiya tumhare sath

Wo

Geet : mein wo baat bhul chuki hu

Aap bhi bhool jaaiye

Now am happy

Ab aapko ye nhi lagta

Maine ye marriage paiso ke liye ki hai

Na ki ruhani ke liye

Maan : wo galati thi meri geet

Jo maine asa socha

.

Now tell me

Tum kal college jaayongi na

Aur jo bhi maine kaha

Usse apne dil pe nhi longi

Geet : hmm

Maan : good night

Geet : good night

***********

Next morning

Early morning maan left to the gym, and geet is excited to go college back...but nervous too, what she tell to the friends...

But now she thinks what she wears...

Saari

Big no

Suit

But it's all have heavy work

.

Aur mere purane saare kapde toh dusre ghar mein hai

.

Soch geet soch

.

Yes I have one suit

.

After searching in all wardrobes, finally she gets one old suit.

********

Hey babaji

Ye kya ho gya

Babaji aapko pata tha na

Mujhe aaj college jaana hai

Fir bhi meri dress kharab krdi aapne

.

Oh gee tab tu kya phengi

Ye suit toh pura gila ho gya hai

.

She wear bathrobe and come outside...

********

Maan enter in room and geet dress directly falls on his face...

Maan (think) : ye kya halaat kr rkhi hai geet ne room ki

Saare kpde ase kyun bikhre huye hai

.

.

Geet

.

Geet

.

Now what happen to her?

.

One more dress welcomes him...

.

Now enough

.

He goes towards her, and at the same time she turns and collided with him... He held her by waist...her cute nose showing him, she anger on something...But on what think...water droplets falling on her cheek to neck...he tucked her curl behind her ear...then he placed his hand on her cheek, caressed her cheek, his hand slowly-slowly moving downward...she feel shiver in his hold ...

He come closer, then bends & drink water droplet form her collarbone, she feel current passed in her veins...first time she feels him so close...her hand automatically move towards his neck... His one hand squeezing her waist and another hand roaming on her body...

Note : next part going to post on blog soon

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Part 11

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Today is lohri, that's first function come after maan & geet marriage...

Geet : maan aapne bulaya

Kuch kaam tha

Maan : kuch kaam ho

Mein tbhi tumhe bulayu

Geet : nhi wo mera matlab nhi tha

Maan : relax

.

Actually

Ye mein tumhare liye laaya tha

He hands over gift pack to him...

Geet : mere liye

Maan : tumhare alawa aur koi hai

Is room mein

Geet : thanks

Par iski jaroorat nhi thi

Maan : jaroorat ho

Tbhi diya jaata hai gift

Geet : nhi

Par

Aapko ye sb pasand nhi hai

Fir bhi

Maan : aajkal meri pasand se kaha sb kuch chalta hai

Geet : kya kaha aapne

Maan : kuch nhi

.

Tum pooja ke liye koi kurta nikal do

Mein fresh hoke aata hu

Geet : hmm

********

After going him, she opened the packet and sees dark baby pink colours anarkali suit...

Beautiful

.

But why he buys this

.

Another side maan also thinking same, why he buy this

Today he gone for meeting in restaurant, and coming back time he sees one dress in nearest showroom and take it for geet ...

*********

With the passing time, maaneet share comfortable zone with each other, geet get her friend back... It's same happen with maan...now both carefully talk, share the thoughts...

******

Both do lohri pooja firstly, and then geet distribute lohri parsad in all...

***********

Next day, makarsakranti come, and specially ruhani so excited for kite fly...

Girish ab bataiye

Mein kya galat thi

Is ghar mein geet ko laake

.

Girish : nhi avantika

Tum shi thi

.

Maan ko ab geet ke sath haste dekh, usse normally baat krte dekh bhut acha lagta hai

******

Geet : dekh rhe hai maan

Isse sbse jyada jaldi hai

Patang udane ki

Maan : geet ruhani bachi hai

Geet : par wo khel ke chakkar mein

Apna khana bhi nhi kha rhi shi se

.

Aap boliye na

Maan : ruhani

Beta

Pareshan mt kro

Chlo khana khayo araam se

Ruhani : kite

Maan : khaane khane ke baad

Hum dono chalenge

Ruhani held geet hand...

Geet : ha mein bhi chalungi

Ab phle khana khayo

.

Annie : geet tum college kbse join kr rhi ho

.

Geet stop in mid ...

Geet : wo

Annie : bhai

Aap geet ko bolo

She wasting own time in home...

.

Maan : geet ab sb thik ho gya hai

Now why you not joining the college

Geet : wo maan

Mein kr lungi na

Maan : geet I don't want to hear any excuse

Tum kal se join kr rhi ho

.

Ok

Geet : hmm

Maan : you trio come on terrace after breakfast

**********

Flashback in

Geetu ye tere liye

.

Di kya hai isme

.

Kal tera phla din hai college ka

Tu kya ye kapde phn ke jaayengi

.

Bilkul nhi

Ye dress laayi hu tere liye

Wo bhi apni phli salary se

.

Oh di

I love you

.

I love you too my cutie

*********

Flashback out

Her phone ring breaks her thoughts...without sees name, she picks the call...

Hello geet

Geet : abhi

Abhi : thank god

You remember my name

Mujhe toh laga tha

Tum mujhe bhool gyi ho

.

Khi tumhari zindagi mein koi aur toh nhi aa gya hai

Geet : wo abhi

Abhi : hey relax

Am joking baby

.

One good news hai

.

Puchongi nhi

.

Mein hi bta deti hu

Mein aa raha hu geet

My work is over

.

Ab hum humesha sath rahenge

.

Geet ab tumse aur door raha nhi jaata

I missing you so much

Geet : abhi

Abhi : kuch bolo na geet

Tumhe dekhne ke liye taras gya hu

.

I want to hug you

Kiss you

Geet : abhi mein tumse baad mein baat krti hu

Abhi kuch kaam hai

Abhi : jaldi apna kaam khatam krlo

Jb mein aayunga na

I want your full time

*********

Abhi here everything changed, I don't know, how I tell you all thing, and makes you understand my situation...

Ek di ke baad tumhi toh the

Jisne mujhe smjha

Pyaar kiya

.

Aur maine tumhara hi dil tod diya

.

Maaf kr dena mujhe abhi

Mein majboor thi

Maine jo kiya bs nitya di ke liye kiya

*******

Flashback in

Abhi : geet today is my final year here

After exam I left this college forever

But before going I want to confess something

Geet : khiye

Abhi : geet I love you

.

I know you not feel same for me

Par mein aaj tumse ye nhi khta

Toh sayad kbhi nhi kh paata

.

Appointment letter mere hath mein hai geet

I selected in interview

After exam mujhe Hyderabad jaana honga

Waha ek saal ke liye

.

Aur mein jaane se phle

Tumhe apne dil ki baat khehna chahta tha

.

Geet : abhi

Wo mein

Abhi : geet

Jb maine tumhe phli baar dekha tha

Na

Tbhi khud ko kho diya tha

.

Geet take your time

.

Geet kya tumse kuch maang sakta hai

Geet : hmm

Abhi : geet mere is confession ke baad

Tum meri dost toh rahongi na

Because I don't want to lose you

Geet : yes abhi

Hum humesha dost rahenge

He excitedly hugged her...

Flashback out

***********

Geet

Tum yaha akele room mein kya kr rhi ho

.

Geet

He placed her hand on her shoulder...

Geet : aap kb aaye

Maan : tum kya soch rhi ho geet

Geet : wo kuch nhi

Bs kal college jaana hai na

Maan : geet koi baat tumhe pareshaan kr rhi hai

Geet : wo

How I tell to my friends about this marriage

Now he realizes, for geet this all thing it's so difficult for facing...

Maan : geet tum chaho

Toh mein tumhare sath chalta hu

Geet : nhiii

Maan : ok

Nhi jaayunga

Bs

Geet : nhi

Wo

Maan : geet I understand

Tumhare liye ye sb asaan nhi hai

Mein kbhi is baat ko smjh hi nhi paaya

.

Tum chaho

Toh tumhe kissi ko is marriage ke baare mein batane ki jaroorat nhi hai

Tum waise hi sbse milo

Jaise phle milti thi

.

Geet : ruhani kaha hai

Maan : wo upar annie ke sath hai

Geet tum baat ko badlo mt

.

I don't want you spoil your carrier like your life

Phle hi tumne meri beti ke liye

Mujhse shaadi ki

Aur ab

Geet : bs kriye aap

.

Ruhani meri kuch nhi lagati

.

Jaanti hu

Aap mujhe uski maa nhi maante

Par mein uski maa jaisi toh hu na

.

Maan : geet

Geet : mujhe kuch nhi sunana aapka

.

She left to terrace...

.

Maan : ye sb nhi khehna chaiye tha mujhe

Phle hi wo pareshaan thi

And I spoil all things.

.

Wo abhi toh firse phle jaise behave krne lagi thi

Aur mein

Firse

***********

On terrace, maan try from past 15 minutes flying the kite, but always failed...

Annie : bhai

Aap kya kr rhe ho

.

Geet tum kyun help nhi kr deti bhai ki

Maan : wo nhi karengi

Avantika : kyun maan

Tumne kuch kaha usse

Geet : nhi mummy

Maan ne kuch nhi kaha

.

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She picks the kite and flies the kite above her head, and dor held by maan ...

*********

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PART 13

Maan enter in room and geet dress directly falls on his face...

Maan (think) : ye kya halaat kr rkhi hai geet ne room ki

Saare kpde ase kyun bikhre huye hai

.

.

Geet

.

Geet

.

Now what happen to her?

.

One more dress welcomes him...

.

Now enough

.

He goes towards her, and at the same time she turns and collided with him... He held her by waist...her cute nose showing him, she anger on something...But on what think...water droplets falling on her cheek to neck...he tucked her curl behind her ear...then he placed his hand on her cheek, caressed her cheek, his hand slowly-slowly moving downward...she feel shiver in his hold ...

He come closer, then bends & drink water droplet form her collarbone, she feel current passed in her veins...first time she feels him so close...her hand automatically move towards his neck... His one hand squeezing her waist and another hand roaming on her body... he sucked her skin, and another hand want to remove this barrier between us... Before he go beyond this sudden knock on door parted both...

He take step back and feel shame own self... how he do it ...he ran his hand in his hair, as if he trying to control this sudden desire... he not getting how he think about geet like this... Another side geet feel sudden chill pass through in her veins. She opened her eyes and sees his back...another knock on door break the thoughts...

Geet mein dekhta hu

Kaun hu

Tum thoda side mein ho jaayo

Geet : ji

.

.

Avni : bhai

Wo geet ko

.

I mean bhabhi ko maa niche bula rhi hai

Maan : tum chalo

Wo aa rhi hai

Avni : ji

********

He sees all around her dress in this room and then sees towards her...

Both says sorry together...

Maan : wo mein

.

Geet : mein ye sb dresses wapas apni jagah rakh dungi

.

She start picking all dresses in hurriedly, sometime one dress fall, then she pick first , another fall down...

Maan : geet tum ruko

.

Mein tumhari help kr deta hu

.

Geet : mein kr lungi

.

Maan : tum ready ho jaayo

Mein ye tb tak fold kr deta hu

Tum baad mein rkh dena

.

.

Geet now why you standing like this

.

Go

Tum jaldi ready ho jaayo

Aaj tum dono ko mein college drop kr raha hu

.

Geet : mein nhi jaa sakti

Maan : geet

Humne kal hi baat kr chuke hai

You are going

That's final

Geet : maine kaha na

Nhi jaa sakti

.

He come near to her and held her by shoulder...

Geet

Tum kyun nhi smjh rhi ho

Geet : aap kyun nhi smjh rhe hai

Mein in sb dresses mein nhi jaa sakti hu

Bs

Maan : dress

.

Geet : hmmm

She go and sit on bed, then he come and sit beside her...

Maan : mujhe batayongi

Geet : how can I wear this heavy dresses

.

Apne hi kaha tha na

Abhi mein kissi ko na batayu humari shaadi ke baare mein

.

Maan : hmm

Geet : ek hi simple dress tha mere pass wo bhi pani mein gir gya

.

Ab batayo

Mein kaise jaayu

Maan : hum aaj evening mein shopping pe challenge

Tb tum

Apni pasand ki dresses le lena

.

Aur abke liye

tum kyun na wo dress phen lo

jo mein laaya tha

tumhare liye

her sad face turn into cute smile hearing this...

geet : are ha

mein kaise bhool gyi

.

Thanks

.

Thank you so much

***********

Dining table

Avantika : geet beta

Aaj aap bhut pyaari lag rhi hai

Geet : thanks mummy ji

Avantika : ye dress apne kaha se li

.

Hum soch rhe hai

Kyun na avni bhi aapke sath whi se dresses le aaye

.

Kafi waqt se hume apne sath chalne ke liye kh rhi hai

Aur mujhe toh time hi nhi mil raha hai

.

Geet : ji

Wo

Girish : any problem beta

Geet : wo ye dress maine nhi khridi hai apne liye

Avantika : Sheila ji laayi thi kya

Geet : nhi

Wo

Maan sees this all thing, and said : mom ye dress mein laaya tha geet ke liye

Aur aaj hum dono

Sham ko shopping pe jaa rhe hai

Mein geet ko directly college se pick kr lunga

Avni bhi humare sath chal lengi

Avantika : nhi beta

Avni

Aur kuch kaam hai

.

Hai na avni beta

Avni : ji

Avantika : maan

Geet

Aap dono hi avni ke liye kuch dress le aana

Maan : ok

Avni

Geet breakfast ho jaaye

Toh jaldi bahar aa jaana

Tum dono ko aaj mein college drop kr raha hu

Avni : ji bhai

****************

Avantika : girish

Aaj ke scene ke liya aapko kuch nhi khehna

Girish : am surprised

And happy too

Maan aange bd raha hai

.

.

Avantika : ek sch kahu aapse

Girish : hmm

Avantika : meri maan ke liye phli choice humesha se geet hi rhi hai

Girish : kya

Avantika : ji ha

.

Yaad hai aapko

Jb hum phli baar jb nitya ko dekhne gye the

.

Girish : ha

Avantika : aur geet kis tarah chilati huye bahar aayi thi

Hum sbke saamne

.

Wo bhi ek chuhe se darke

.

*************

Di

.

Di

Bachao

.

Bachao

She run all around ...

Nitya : geet

Geet

Stop

Kya huya

Geet hugged her di tightly...

Avantika : ye kaun hai

Sheila : ji ye geet hai

.

Nitya : meri choti behn hai

Aunty ji

Avantika : beta aapko kya huya

Nitya : geet

See me

Geet : di wo chuha

Nitya : chuha

Kaha

Geet : mere room mein

Pata nhi kaha se aa gya

.

Mein aapni painting kr rhi thi

Aur wo idiot rat aa gya

.

Di sorry

Nitya : it's ok bacha

*************

I see my maan smile from heart first time after that's incident girish

Isliye maine Sheila ji uski education

Age bhi puchi

Par tb wo 12th mein hi thi

.

Aur kismat ka khel dekhiye

Meri wo khawaish puri krdi isne

Par ase hongi

Ye kbhi nhi chaha tha

Girish : avantika

Sb humare hath mein nhi hota

Avantika : hmm

************

Maan drop both to college...

Geet little fearing to go inside... her phone buzzed...

Geet : hello

Maan : geet

Tum abhi tak bahar kyun khadi ho

Andher jaayo

Geet : aapko kaise pata

Maan : geet I know

Bs

Tumhe kis cheez ka itna darr hai

.

Humari shaadi ka

Khi kissi ko pta lga

Toh sb kya kahenge

.

You feeling shamed to marry with me

Geet : ji nhi

Maan : fir

Geet : bye

Am going inside

She cut the call and enters in college...

.

Maan watching her from far and happy she goes back in her life...

*********

Geetuu

Tu

Aa gyi

Geet : pooja

Pooja : call mein poo babes

.

Phle ye bta

Tu kaha gayab thi

.

I know

Nitya di ki death ke baad tu tut se gyi hongi

Par yaar fir bhi

Its above 45 days

.

Ruchi : geet tu aa gyi yaar

Poo : nhi ruche

Abhi geet rashte mein hi hai

Ruchi : you just shut up

Geetu

Yaar mein tere ghar pe bhi aayi thi

Par wo lock hai

Kaha the tum sb

Geet : wo badi maa

Tirth yatra pe gyi hai

Ruchi : oh

Toh tu fir ghar mein akeli rh rhi hai

Geet : nhi

Wo ghar toh band hai na

Poo : fir tu kaha rhti hai ab

Geet : maan ke ghar mein

Ruchi : maan

You mean

Nitya di husband

Geet (think) nitya di husband

Yhi toh sch hai na geet

.

Poo : tu waha kyun rh rhi hai

Aur tu toh humehsa

Unhe jiju bulati thi na

Ye achanak maan

.

Geet : ha

Wo badi maa

Mujhe akela nhi chod skati thi na

Isliyw abhi waha rh rhi hu

.

Aur tum dono kitne swal kr rhe ho

Class ke liye late ho rha hai

.

Aur ha

Mujhe aapne notes de dena

Ruche : of course geet

**********

Precap : shopping

And

Past entry again

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