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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ketki61

Loved the drooling session from Geet's home.

Maan planning to move.
Great start up
Waiting
All the best

thank you😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ketki61

Geet stored Maan's nos

Dadi ma llikes Geet
But
Maan moving towards Sam?
Waiting

wait for 2-3 more updates ur confusion will be cleared...

thank you for ur comment😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
thank you
hope u enjoy further updates too...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arorasurbhi

Nice updates... 😊

thank you...
hope u like further updates too...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 6
SAME NIGHT AROUND 11PM
Maan returned back from office, he just entered inside the hall when he was welcome by the sweet voice of his dadima..
Dadima- is this the time to return back ?
Maan- dadima i was bit busy in office, u know na how many projects we are handling and all requires my attention too plus i don't have that much detailed imformation regarding all projects so...
but dadima cuts him in between
Dadima- i know maan how much busy U can get while working so stop giving me excuses and learn to get back at right time, i don't want u to develop these stupid habits as i'm worried about my grand daughter-in-law and my grandchildren, if in future too u behave like this then what will happen...
but this time maan cuts her in between...
Maan- Please dadima, where is this granddaughter-in-law and grandchildrens came from...
Dadima- from u only one day u will marry so its obvious ...
Maan- please dadima i'm really tried i don't want to argue on this topic now...
Dadima- okay, now go fresh up come down we will have dinner together
Maan- dadima u didn't had ur dinner till now,why r u ignoring ur health?
Dadima-for this blame urself beta because of u i'm straving till now, if u had come on time i have eaten on time and went to sleep till now, but u don't have any worry regarding me, all u r worried is for ur work only nothing else!
Maan-please dadima last time i'm telling u please don't wait for me at dinner as i'm likely to get late because of work...
Dadima- same applies to u too without u i will not touch my food at night, now its on u what u want?and if anything happens to me the only person to be blamed will be u!
Maan- but dadi...
Dadima- maan u agree or not?
Maan- okay i agree!

after having dinner with dadima , maan moved towards his study room to read a file which contained the important details about tomorrow's meeting though he have read it three times before today but
he thought why to leave any loop holes revising it one more time will not do any harm , he prefer perfection in everything he do. while going through file his mobile vibrated indicating him that he received some message...
maan thought message at this time? he opened the inbox and read the content in it...


The moment I saw you
I could barely contain
All the butterflies jumping
It's hard to explain.

My coolest persona
Just melted away
And my words came out jumbled
I forgot what to say.

I felt rather foolish
And thought you would leave
But the smile that you gave me
I still can't believe.

The first time I saw you
You blew me away
But your smile still disarms me till today...

maan was confused after reading the poem , he has not excepted anything like this to receive, he checked the number,it was unknown to him
Maan(st)-looks like someone by mistake send this to me, maybe someone is recently fallen in love and telling all this to his/her beloved but looks like in the excitment he/she have forgotten to check number, hope this person gets to know his/her mistake soon...
the words of the poem were still roaming in his mind and they attracted him to read it again, he was not able to resist that sensation to glance the poem again so accepting his deafeat , he again read it...
after staring at the words for few minutes , maan shrugged the unwanted thoughts that recently occupied his brain and cursed himself for lossing his concentration and again concentrated on his file...

NEXT MORNING IN HANDA'S HOUSE
Naina-Nishi,i have prepared gajar ka halwa would u please take it to khurana's house?, u know sativirji loves gajar ka halwa and vicky too, last time when we met she told me that whenever i prepare this i should parcel it to her too...
Nishi- no, maa, i don't have time, ask geet or rajji to do this...
Naina- geet will never go and rajji is taking bath right now so only u r left...
Nishi- maa for all ur this kind of works u require me, why don't u by ourself give them...
Naina- i would love to do that but who will do all this house chores?
Nishi-ahhh ok! give it...
Sam too came there hearing Nishi
Sam- What happened nishi , why u look so frustrated right now???
Nishi- don't ask me??
naina came from kitchen along with a covered bowl of halwa, here take it, she gaved it to nishi...
Sam- wow , what an aroma, what is it???
Naina- sam beta, its gajar ka halwa...
Sam- wow, i want too have it....
Naina- sure dear, i have kept it for u too...
Nishi what are u thinking now go
sam- wait a minute where are u going?
Nishi- to khurana's!
Sam- khurana's?
Naina- u don't know them, havn't u heard of khurana constructions?
Sam(while thinking)- mmm, i don't know...
Nishi- mom how will she know she is not related to business world from anywhere, leave it...sam they are our neighbors..
Naina(ignored her)- they are big name in business world dear!
sam- oh, i too want to meet them, can i come with u nishi???
Nishi- i'm not going to meet them , i'm just going give this(see showed the bowl)
Sam- SO what! take me with you please!
Nishi-ahh, why is everyone hell bent on irritating me today.. ok let's go!

Both sam and Nishi entered inside khurana's house nakul warmly welcomed them both.
Both entered inside the hall where dadima was setting the table for breakfast(she loves to do these small small things for her children)
dadima saw both Nishi! welcome dear, both handa daughters are nowdays remembering me yesterday geet and today you...and who is this beautiful girl with you,( sam slightly blushed at her comment) come both of u have a seat...
Nishi- no no dadima actually we just came here because maa asked me to give u this and she passed the bowl towards her..
Dadima uncovered the bowl and was delighted to see her fav gajar ka halwa)-wow! naina is such a sweet lady she always fulfills my demands, convey my regards to her !
Nishi-ya sure dadima! ok we should go...but dadima cut her in between
Dadima- nishi beta, what's the hurry , have a seat , today u both had to have a breakfast with us.. wait let me call Maan and vicky...MAAN , ViICKY both of you come down breakfast is ready and we have guests too today...
Nishi- but dadima there is no need of all this...but dadima again cut her in between
Dadima- uff nishi, y r u always in so much hurry
in the meantime vicky to came down and was surprised to see the guests in his house...
Vicky- my my m i dreaming or its reality look who has given her precious darshan to us miss nerdy and that too along with her sister vicky looked towards sam and stopped in the middle, who r u????, miss nerdy where is geet?? have u left her????
Nishi- shut up! vicky and stop calling me nerdy and i can never leave geet, okay!
Vicky- okay! why are u getting hyper, u can answer me in calm voice too right! and by the way who is beautiful young lady beside you, would u not introduce her to me...
Nishi-u... but he again cut her in between leave it i will introduce myself... hello beautiful i'm vicky singh khurana and u????
Sam- hello vicky, myself Sameera khanna, but u can call me sam, nice to meet u( both shaked hand)
Vicky- Sam! so how come u are here that too with this miss nerdy..(he eyed nishi who glared him back)
Sam- i'm her distant cousin !
Vicky- oh! so what do u do???? i mean studying or working...
Sam- still studying i'm medical student
Nakul came there to call dadima to check some dishes which he was preparing
Dadima- ok guys!u all carry on i'm coming in a while and she left ...
Vicky- oh miss doc!, so what are ur hobbies and... but he stopped seeing maan who was coming towards hall busy in his cellphone as usual...
Sam too followed the direction of eyes and was stunned to see a handsome man walking towards them, lost in his phone... nishi who was sitting with irritated look and glancing here and there was surprised when see didn't heard anything from two most talkative individuals, their silence attracted her to have a glance on them and her eyes too followed the same direction as their's...
Nishi- Maan(she said it loud and clear)
Maan who was till now busy in his cellophone was distracted by the girl's voice who was addressing him...
Maan looked towards the girl who called him looking carefully at her face he remembered something and said NISHI, right?????


(Above Poem credit goes to-Charles Wiles)

updated part 6
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Edited by GurTi123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
geet sent poem to maan but he thought it came mistakenly although he couldnt forget the poem sam nishi went to maans house n shocked to see handsome man nice part thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update dear
Maan is such a workaholic
The msg...it is geet ri8 ;)
Loved the poem
nishi and sam gonna give halwa to Khuranas
geet missed a good opportunity coz of her chachi
Sam stunned to see Maan :(
Maan identified Nishi...
Par Maaneet ki mulakat aamne saamne ab tak nahi hui?!?!
Loved it!!
Thank u for updating :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
NICE UPDATE
PAR SAM KO KYU MILAYA MAAN SE

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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh now im confused how will the story lead to tats okey
poem was nice
nishi and maan know each other already
and wat about geet
nice part

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