Short Story ~Hazaaron Khwahishein Aisi [Plz see Pg 1]

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hi Leena! Thank u so much for the fab wishes! I really appreciate it! 🤗

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Sudha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#322

Lovely lovely updates... I am officially addicted to this FFnow! Can't wait for 5th August!!

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xolfiya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#323

Yeahhh finally agaye dilli :P maxa aya pure safar me literally loved the whole update !!Ur line is right God has his own twisting way to complete our wishes :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#324

amazing update aww maan remembered titus word n gave her window seat looks like he likes to give order he didnt ask her just gave her coffee n finally they reached delhi lovely part thnx 4 update

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sanum23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#325

Nice ud

geet sitting remembering her parents

and listening small girl talk and she

request geet to exchange seat with

hr father she did but boy was sitting

beside maan he didn't move and maan

looking out side the window but wen

boy was removing geet hair from his

face and talk to her maan notice boy

than maan call geet to sit @ his place

and wen her hair comes to maan face

he told her y don't she tie them

and @ night all slept and morning

they reached Delhi adi's bro going

to receive them maan seem not

happy but knows his duties well

she's now his responsibility

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alfik

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Posted: 10 years ago

#326

Lovely story till now...Maan is different in here and that is more interesting...waiting very eagerly for the story to move ahead...

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latecomer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#327

Hey..yesterday hazaron khwainshe aisi caught my attention and when i read the intro i knew it , i won't stop till i read the last updated chapter., wow !!! So intricately knitted story. Have potential to left one desperately wait for the coming update..
So iam waiting for the next chapter..

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Akku

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Posted: 10 years ago

#328

nice update liked there silent journey to dilli waiting to see what will happen now so update soon

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Taahir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#329

Superb and Lovely Update

Geet sitting next to the teenager boy and it seems he was interested in her at the same time her hair flies on him and he eagerly tells her its not her fault and both smile bringing Maan back and he realizes that Titu wanted Geet to sit by the window so it seems either Maan did not like the other guy smiling and talking to wife or he just wanted Geet to sit at the window seat .
later again Geet's hair flies and this on Maan's face but it did look like he was annoyed with her hair and he tells her to tie it up .

I like how the little girl ask all those questions to her mother why Maan gives the window seat to Geet and not her it was so cute

the two brothers enjoying time together and forgot to do the house chores while Pinky is away .

I'm now looking forward to see how will actually treat and relate to Geet