Short Story ~Hazaaron Khwahishein Aisi [Plz see Pg 1] - Page 31

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Posted: 10 years ago
Adi muttered a few curses under his breath while picking up his empty plate and walking to the kitchen. When he came back to the room temporarily occupied by his brother, he found him still eating. He kept the keys on the table.
'Ye le tu bhi kya yaad rakhega.'
Ayush grinned while keeping his plate on the table and looked at two of the keys. 'Bhai I asked for the bike keys. You can keep your car keys with you.'
'Actually you'll need them tomorrow. Maan had gone to Jalandhar and he'll be coming back tomorrow. So you'll be picking him up.' , Adi spoke while keeping his legs on the table and flipping the channels.
' I knew you wouldn't be giving the keys without any purpose. But i can do that with the bike as well.'
'Yeah you could if he wasn't coming with his wife.'
'Maan bhai got married ! I had no idea about it.'
'Even i did not until a few hours ago. Anyways the train is Delhi Kranti and it will reach Delhi by 7 am.', Adi replied while typing away something on his mobile.
'Okay.. So i need to go off to sleep. I have an early morning flight to catch.' Adi said while walking towards the door. He stopped at the door and turned around saying,'when I return back with Pinky the place should look habitable. And that reminds me i forgot to water the plants. She is gonna kill me now. I just wish plants haven't dried up.'
Ayush looked at his brother rushing out of the rooms. He did not understand why Bhai was so sacred of Pinky Bhabhi. She was the sweetest person he had ever come across. He switched off the TV and jumped to his bed checking his mobile for some fb notifications. Adarsh must have reached Rajasthan by now, he thought while dialing his number.
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Geet felt someone shaking her vigorously. She opened her eyes to find a familiar person staring down at her. Why was Maan here in her room? And why was her bed shaking? She got up lazily and hit her head against the upper seat in the process and then it dawned on her . She was in the train going to Delhi with Maan. 'Aa gyi Dilli?' ,she asked him.
'Haan ...we are about to reach. Get down .'


Maan's hair had tousled up and the black full sleeve shirt that had been tucked in his jeans had come out from corners. And eyes looked as if he had just woken up. Adjusting her dupatta around her neck, she climbed down and then pulled the bag down and sat on the lower seat where he had slept all night.
The man and the woman had woken up too and were pulling out their luggage. The little girl sat straight, her eyes locked outside. Geet looked out to see the orange tinted sky. There were large stretches of uninhabitated land filled up with metal scraps here and there. She felt Maan sit beside her. The train had finally entered Delhi. The man stood up to wake his son.
Maan started pulling out their luggage that ad been kept under the seats. She looked at him and realized he had freshened up. The tousled hair had been swept away from his forehead again and the shirt had tucked in once again.
The train came to a halt on a large and crowded platform. Her plummeted with excitement and she caught the little girl's eyes and whispered .'Aa gyi Dilli.' The girl clapped and stood up to do down the train. Geet smiled feeling as excited as the girl. She felt rejuvenated . New city . New life.
She had always wanted to live in one of the metro cities. Often she woyld pray to god to give her strength to work hard so that she could crack AIIMS or MAMC so that she could enjoy the life of a metro.
God had a way of fullfilling ones wish in His own twisted way.
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A long update indeed ! I just hope you all aren't bored.
Thankyou to all for being patient and also for being such wonderful readers.
New readers , Welcome ! I am glad you are liking the story.

Ayush Kashyap , a new entry. 21 yrs old, younger brother of Aditya. Rest you'll come to know in future.

My real world does not allow me to send pms so plz bookmark the thread if you are interested in the story.
The next update will be on 5th of August.

Happy Birth day to you Khwaishfan !
Thankyou for giving every writer a chance ! May you have a rocking year ahead!
~
Leena
Edited by Commelina - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


very interesting story...

u very well described how failures of life lead to downfall in person's self-confidence...

waiting for next part...


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Commelina

Hello friends !
I sincerely apologize for keeping you waiting for so long.
I have started writing the chapter and will most probably update tonight or tomorrow.
~Leena


U better give a long update di this ur punishment😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

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Updated chapter 12 Part 1.
Part 2 will updated before morning.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: xolfiya



U better give a long update di this ur punishment😆😆


updates are going to be long behna but I just hope it is upto all of yours expectations.
Edited by Commelina - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous Updates

Daadima tells Maan that she is so happy and that he must have a happy life and treat his wife well but Maan retaliates and tell his Daadima that he had now repaid her debt by marrying and she must not tell him how to treat his wife now I'm scared for what will happen will Maan treat Geet fairly or will he ignore her will he accept her as his wife or not .
Tara tells her mother to rather tell Geet that she must wash her clothes as Maan will not do all that and she must bath every day
but surely Geet is matured enough to understand that her husband cannot go to work and also do the household chores and surely she must at least know that she has to bath every day .

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Commelina


updates are going to be long behna but I just hope it is upto all of yours expectations.


Ary don't worry di I know u gonna Rock in each n every update
❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
REALLY understand geets situation this how every girl feels when she bids adieu to her parents !!How we feel protective n secure in our parents house n than all pf a sudden life changes taking a 360 turn where u cannot get the warmth of ur mother n scolding yet the protective love of ur father !!Life change n future seems a BIG question mark thats what geet feels every girl can relate to it !u have written this part superbly !!
In second half why maan is beinh so rude to dadima Yes he wasn't ready for marriage but still one should not talk to their elders like that !!she was saying to treat ur wife well n in prologue we can see how is he treating his wife !!he is completely ignoring her feels bad for maan n geet both !!More for geet because she is leaving everything of her life n still ready to give a chance to her husband n this marriage !!But maan is on complete denial well its seems so with his monologue !!Awesome update waiting for more🥳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Small Small intricate moments r really making this story more realistic nd intriguing . Dont we see more common scenes in our life ,railway station nd constant maa ki hidayatein ,beta aisa rehna ,apni pati ki baat maanna etc ...
.lovely update ,agree with maan indeed a long journey for both of them .
Continue soon,
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 12

So sweet Tito calling out her Geet di and she can't hear
Geet is getting emotional thinking about her parents

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