Short Story ~Hazaaron Khwahishein Aisi [Plz see Pg 1] - Page 17

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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 8 continues

Adi explains to Maan to gain experience in the company save money do a course and then grab an opportunity
Here Geet is surrendering to her fate as even pleading to her mother cannot change her destiny of getting married
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb part.. adi was encourging maan.. adi and maan bond was awesome.. geet was sad because of marriage issue.. waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 8
so Maan is from a middle class, not so rich background, and like any other common man struggling hard in his carrier..And at present also he is following Adi's advice and working day and night to get a better position, job and success..
Both are frustrated with the turns in their life which are out of their control at the moment..waiting to see how they will accept each other's presence in their life now.
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da awesome update! well written! adi advises Maan! he is a wonderful friend! So proposal 4 Maan! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update adi got the mechanic who once inspired to get educated but couldnt ye olx to kafi famous ho gaya hai bhai ab maan to apni darling ko echne se raha they went for dinner adi could tell maan was tense coz of the promotion he didnt get maan poured his frustration out as he knows he cant hide anything from adi where adi gave him advice that either leave the job or start his own buisness but its not possible so adi tod him to do something more than an architect geet is depressed and cursing her stars she dosent want to marry but apparently her destiny is to get married to maan as his family likes her although she dosent want to but she has no choice
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice ud
maan bike in garage adi gave him lift they went to hotel
bcoz both tried so skip cooking
adi gave him advice to try some wer else or do on work
maan need money so he denied but adi said do MBA
geet family deciding to marry geet to maan
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 9. Maa ka phone aaya

He was lost in a deep slumber when the shrill, deafening ringtone of his mobile roared through the room and jolted him out of his sleep. Rubbing his eyes he answered the call, "Hello"

"Hello Maan beta kaise hai aap? Sorry to call you this late. Are you busy?"

" I m fine Dadimaa and its okay. You can call me anytime. First tell me have are you?"

"I am not at all fine", he heard his dadi speak. "why dadimaa? What happened? Is your B.P normal? Heart palpitation?" he asked in a worried tone "yes. My health is good. It is your future that worries me my son. I heard you denied to marry. How can I be fine when you act like an obstinate."

"Dadimaa plz do not start again. Why don't you understand? I am not ready to settle down. There is so much I have to attain. I solely want to concentrate on my career now."

"I do understand beta. You have always been an ambitious child. And I did wait for two years. Now I feel restless. I am always scared that some or other day I'll get a stroke and leave this world even before seeing you settled."

"plz Dadimaa do not say such things. You are going to live for another hundred years. And as far as me being settled, I will marry but only after 2 - 3 years. Promise.

"keep your promises with yourself. I want you to reach Jalandhar by next possible train. We have got a very good proposal. I cannot overlook it. I like the girl and I want you to meet and like her as well."

"Dadimaa... Why are you being so adament? Whats wrong with you? He almost groaned onto the phone. "Nothing is wrong with me Maan. It is you who has been acting stubborn since 2 years. Its my turn now"

"I am not coming then."

"Fine. Then don't ever come to jalandhar again even if I am at my deathbed. He heard his Dadimaa say in a cold and stern voice before she disconnected the call. Frustrated, he threw the mobile on the bed.

Life is a bitch. He had often heard and now believed.

His Dadimaa was never the one to force her decisions on others. It was the first time that she had resorted to emotional blackmailing. It could only mean one thing.

His Dadimaa had already accepted the girl whoever she was as her daughter in law.

He very well understood the dangers of going to jalandhar but his Dadimaa had left no option. He had to go.

And so picked up his laptop and wait for it to boot up and than typed urgent leave application send a copy to his new boss and then to the chief .

He knew his leave would be sanctioned as he hadn't taken a leave in last one year. And after that he booked online train tickets in jalandhar express. He did not get tickets at such short notice which meant he had to travel in the general boggie. Another headache.

The train was scheduled for the next morning at 10. That would give him time to collect his bike from the garage.

After making all arrangements, he decided to call Sameera but a glance at the clock and he gave up on the idea. It was past midnight. Instead he sent a msg "urgent work. Going to jalandhar. Have mailed an application to chief. Still do inform them. Bye! take care."

Keeping his laptop and mobile aside he tried going off to sleep. But his mind was disturbed. So instead he switched on the TV and tuned in to one of the sports channel. A polo match was being broadcasted. He continued staring the TV screen, his eyes drooping after sometime unaware of the fact that his life would no longer be the same after the trip.

Edited by Commelina - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dear Readers
Thankyou for your likes and comments.
I am overwhelmed to see such love and understanding.
The next update will hopefully contain some Maaneet scenes. And so that i could do justice with the scene it might take time.
P.S : excuse me for the stupid heading of the chapter i tried hard to think of a name but could come up with only this. (disadvantages of writing each chapter with a title)
Apna Khayal Rakhna
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part... maan surly ur life gonna change... from BACHLORE TO MARRIED MAN... lolz... cant wait for next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous Update

Maan's Daadima tells him that she has waited for two years for him to decide on marriage and cannot wait for another two years so if he does not want to come to Jalandhar then he also must not come when she is on her death bed .
Maan now realizes that his Daadima must have already chosen and accepted a girl otherwise she would not have put pressure on him .
looking forward to see what will happen next

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