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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

awesome cs and lovely prologue so maan is villian maybe there is a reason for that as cs is saying something else

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Interesting updt ... Waitingg fo nxt prt :)

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

lovely update so confused with the cs though prologue suggested geet went through hell how can a father just sell off his daughter to the preson who is already married and maan also expected as a deal geet felt someone was watching her she got scared but maan who was watching her has full intention of ruining her wonder what happened to make him agree and destroy an innocent girls life

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singh24

@singh24

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Awesome Part 😊

well start . interesting 😊

Maan is doing everything for revenge ..

he wanted to set his score with Mr Handa for his lose ..

an innocent life is going to ruin for greed ..

waiting ...😊

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

nice update... i really like the starting... good work as a new writer👏

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aglaeca9

@aglaeca9

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Neeju
nice update... i really like the starting... good work as a new writer👏

Aww thank you.. 😃

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aglaeca9

@aglaeca9

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: --mittu--
Interesting
Poor geet
maan us in full revenge mode i think
mr.handa...is his daughters an object? Making deal..grrr
Whats gonna happen now!!

So maan is that arroganent villan...who made geet's life HELL and neil helped geet
Me Can't stop assuming haha;)

Keep on assuming.. no tax required.. 😆 😆

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! well written! Maan agrees 2 the deal with Mr. Handa! its all abt business! wt loss did he suffer? business or personal? He agrees 2 marry Geet! her dad warns him! bt Mr. Handa didn't ask Geet? Bt isn't Maan married? Geet at college! she feels something is watching her! she informs her BG! it ws Maan! wt is he up 2? seems like this is the past! cos in the prologue Geet suffered so much cos of Maan! bt cs portrays him different! update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 10 years ago

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aglaeca9

@aglaeca9

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

NOTE:

Heyyy people!!!
It seems that everyone is confused about the prologue, CS and part-1.So let me clear it,the prologue is an excerpt from the story which will come later in the story.Pari will come later in the story.I thought that writing stuffs in flashback will cause more confusion so started with the deal, minimizing the flashbacks.And it's an intense story with grey characters. Everyone having their own reasons for their action.
Hope you all will like it.
😊

P.S.- Should I change the name of the story,if yes then plz suggest.

Edited by ms.impulsive - 10 years ago