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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Interesting... Maan is a loyal n luving but someone escaped frm him... It's really interesting

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

hi
wow the cs is superb
liked it
plz cont soon and pm me

Edited by ronojoy_ria - 10 years ago

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sanum23

@sanum23

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+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

seem interesting story

prologue and cs grt

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DreamyMadhu

@Dreamy30

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

congo 4 new story., nice start. plz pm me.

Edited by crazy-dd-fan - 10 years ago

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deepa111

@deepa111

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

congrats for new story dr 😊
cs nd prologue is really nice.
very curious to read update as prologue is really interesting .
maan with grey shade bt by cs don't seem like he torture geet bt after reading prologue seems like he is hero cum villian .
nd ne n geet together with pari.wpw...
so eager to rread further.
plz update soon nd ya pm me.

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singh24

@singh24

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

🥳 Congo dear for new start ...🤗

interesting CS...lil confusing too..😆

Maan is already married to someone nd has a son ...😲

Geet is also a mother but she is with Neil ...😕

her thought showed that she had suffered a lot coz of Maan ..

waiting ... plzz start soon..😃

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Krupa

@idunno

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Nice start but bit confusing about charecters portrayel.

1-maan and samara husband wife has 4 years old son

2-monologue of woman that she run away from maan many years ago and now she dont want to go back as he is devil and she is living with neil and daughter is 1 yr old name pari and sounds like maan's daughter as she said i will never go back to maan while introducing pari it indicats neil is not biological father of pari.

if pari is one year and she left him long ago how can pari be 1yr old?update soon

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

CS Is Interesting

Maan and Sameera already married
while Geet is doing her college

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deepa111

@deepa111

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

nice update.
how can mr. handa ask msk to marry her daughter.he don't even adk geet once.
nd what is msk motive behind this.
bt who is the man keepung eye on geet.
rager to read nxt part soon.
plz update soon...