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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: annirogc
nice part ..loved it

Thanks for reading! 😃

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#502

Originally posted by: doll.12
So its not a end?? Right naa?? Or I will cry... Uuaaahh uauuuaahh.. U know I love to read arrange marriages story on maameet.. And its one of my favorite too.. U should know

I'm very well aware of the fact that its the "ARRANGRD MARRIAGE" concept that interests this story n it has very little to do with me writing it!😛

Thanks for letting me know. .. but I do know😃

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#503

Originally posted by: Alamelu
good update...geet is so happy to have maan as a husband inspite of him not having studied too much...she would prefer him to an NRI...maan too missing her so much that he went to pick her up...and he shows his feelings to her..wnats her with him...looks like he wanted her to wear the sari and she too pleases him...nice

Thanks for reading! 😊

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#504

Originally posted by: crazydream

Nooo...😡

Don't think in those terms. Abhi to kahani start hua hai. Mei chodungi nahi if u ended here.
We want to see Maaneet chemistry n building their relationship

😊

Thanks for reading!

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#505

Originally posted by: Drashtilove
lovely update really like geets point of view about maan may be he is not much educated n NRI but he is better then those finally after one month of their marriage n they became one nice part thnx 4 update

The NRI part was actually for the next update

In somehow it fitted in here

I actually thought I deleted it😆

Thanks for reading!

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 10 years ago

#506

so the story is coming to an end, and my comment(s) are still left for this one..😲
I was taking the experience of being a silent reader that time 😆

but then I read some comments from the readers, and they have already given such a good analysis, review and comments, that I am thinking what should I write more than to agree with their comments..

so I am going to write the things I loved the most in the story, (that does not mean the rest I did not)

(I was thinking whether I should be dramatically serious or seriously dramatic with the comments..aah these are confusing words..😆 so I will switch between these two as necessary)

First of all, I loved the whole narration specially the way Maaneet feelings were written..his perspective..her perspective..they have come a long way in their understanding and relation..

Part 1 - 3

of course the misunderstanding..and the more n more misunderstanding between Maaneet..😈
misunderstanding toh mera favorite hai for this Maaneet..
with hurt of broken dreams and expectations from each other was fabulously written..
but between all this I loved the most the way Maan is a caring person at heart..taking care of everyone is naturally in him though his outer look is that of a short tempered, aggressive and rough person..

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 10 years ago

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#507

Part 4 - 6

when he turned back to Geet, this was the best scene which I liked the most in the whole story..
both with confusions and misunderstanding about their relation in the back of their mind, but during the emergency he stood up to help the villagers and while leaving he turned back...as if asking for her support, some forgiveness for leaving her alone in the middle of night, waiting for her reaction and then leaving after getting her silent support..whatever may be the reasons from her side..but there was something unspoken understanding that was transpired between the two that moment..

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#508

Part 7 - 9

the SLAP !!
wo bhi itna jor ka tha, ki you do not need to tell that she hit him..
mujhe toh yaha tak aawaz sunai di..
(ye ek PJ aka poor joke tha, jo main second time mar rahi hoon 😆)

if you are thinking it is the Geet hitting Maan I liked the most, then no, of course not..itni bhi evil nahi hoon main..
What I liked was the way he reacted even after getting the slap..
he felt happy that there is no one else and trying to support her for his hurtful words in her crying state..

I loved the ending punching lines in the last few updates..umm kya thi woh, haan..sunshine is far away and bless my love..love, for the threads between are still so weak..and aur bhi thi.

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#509

Part 10 - 12

Aahha..Maan Babu phisala 😆
but seriously, the way he got fascinated and went behind Aanchal..
may be his unconscious mind wanted Geet to be as carefree as Aanchal with him..since what he saw her as only awkward and not so open with him..
but this thread is still open a bit and needs a closure before the end..

Part 13 - 15

so slowly the inhibitions within Geet have started to fade away..
she is eagerly waiting for him..his ignorance affects her..
she wants to go back to her home with him..
the jealousy also played the cupid in developing the possessiveness in her..

Part 16 - 18

Ye Geet na..confusion and understanding nature mein switch hoti rehati hai..
sometimes confusion and possessiveness overpowers her understanding behavior..and sometimes vice versa..but all scenes showed they both do care for each other irrespective of the issues..