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beautiful start
loved it
do continue
thanks for pm

lovely upadte great start to a new story so geet was getting married to karan but he refused on the peak time 😡 idiot shaadi nahi karni thi to pehle bolta kitni bezaati hui geet ki poor her she is very heartbroken

Originally posted by: its_me

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">The first update was lovely n very nicely written...</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">Eagerly waiting for the further parts & the story to unfold...</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">All the best...</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">P.S. Don't make us wait long...😉</font>

Thanx dear...
Sure will update soon dear..

Originally posted by: Preeti_Maaneet

Congrats for new story .. Nice part .. Karan left Geet on the day of marriage .. so awful of him but why ?? if he loved her then why this step ?? chalo acha hai now way clear for Maan ..

Thanx..
Way clear for maan...😆...good one... 😆

Originally posted by: singh24

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<font color="#cc3366" size="4"> nice start ...</font>

<font color="#cc3366" size="4">waiting ...😊</font>

Thanx

Originally posted by: nakh5683

lovely upadte great start to a new story so geet was getting married to karan but he refused on the peak time 😡idiot shaadi nahi karni thi to pehle bolta kitni bezaati hui geet ki poor her she is very heartbroken

Thank you..

waiting 4 next part! Thanks

Well written

eager to read next

congo Dear

awesome start
first your english is not that bad but very good
how can some one ran away at the end time ? may be he had some diff. story or betrayed a poor girl