~A Twist of Tale- Vandy's birthday gift~~LAST PART@5 on 1.6.15 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Welcome Vandy.🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Fab story and fab gift Sweta.👏
Its so different and unique,i loved the idea dear.⭐️
Enjoyed reading it so much.😳
Aww Vandy,😳she met Maan Singh,wowww😛and ofcourse Geet too.😛
And Mann attracted towards our Vandy.😉 ❤️
What a updates you have written,loved it so much.😃
Awesome, awesome.⭐️
Now what goes to happen, i am curious to know.😛

Update soon.🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Wow ...awesome update ...
if Maan loves Geet and Adi knew about it then didn't he said anything to Maan ...
hope Adi sir will help.. Geet to sneak into palace ..
..waiting for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Happy Be lated birthday vandy am late
and sweety aewsome story

your unique concept give me ideas

of writting 😃

well maan love with vandy 😲

mein ro ya haso

happy for vandy 😃 maan singh khurna love vandy 😳 😳

crying for geet 😭 he forget geet 😡



NOTE in this story you talking about fairy tales please give me link of those story 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

PART 3

" vandy what do u mean by kissing??" geet gasped loudly with her eyes popping out..

Vandy stopped in her tracks and sighed

" geet,...the effect of love portion cn be reversed only by true love's kiss..gosh haven't u heard sleeping beauty's story?" vandy uttered making her eyes big..

Geet started her for sometime and then checked her forehead

" u knw..i have meaning to ask u this..plz don't mind..u r very sweet but...little weird too...I don't get ur talks and then..ur dress I mean...this what u r wearing..hmm" she ran her eyes all over vandy...making her pout

" its..weird..umm"

" heloo...this is called fashion and I m always the best..." vandy said proudly

" ahh..okay.." geet muttered

" well we shall discuss that later...right now we have to get inside the castle..while prince maan is sleeping...and u have to kISS him"

" while sleeping???umm" and then she blushed thinking of the kiss...and turned crimson..

" awww" vandy giggled and pinched geet's cheeks.. " I always wanted to see this blush in real" she commented

" what?" geet spoke little confused..

" ah nothing...chalo lets go"

A while later the were on the back side of the castle..thinking of how to get in there..

And then...

" geet we can to climb this.. see this is the rope I have left we can use this to get in there"

" ah..okay..."

They both somehow climbed up after lots of efforts... Vandy in her mind cursed her gang to wish such a adventure for her..it was over dose of adventure !!

" phewww" geet huffed when they both reached the balcony safely..

" lets gooo "

" noo..wait geet I don't think the prince is asleep...we should go when he s sleeping" vandy responded slumping on the soft cozy bed..

Geet narrowed her brows and folded her hands " vandy will u plz tell me y?"

" uh...u really want me to say?" vandy muttered pepping out and resting on her elbows..

Geet nodded in positive..making a curious face

" well if I go in there with u...or u go alone he wont llet u kiss him..and..gosh if he sees me... I just don't like the way he looks at me.. that's meant for u..."

And vandy all of a sudden started laughing..

Geet frowned... " vandy y are u laughing..vandy"

Vandy controlled her laughs..and smiled shaking her head " nothings just thought about amna and sweta omg they would be soo jealous of me...after all MAAN SINGH KHURANA is crazy about me..ah maybe because of love portion stil...and deepti radsa and my CC gang members...they'll go crazy when they'll come to knw I met u geet" Vandy said holding geet's hand

Geet smiled a little " I m sorry vandy I dint understand a word u said" she uttered innocently...

Vandy giggled" hahaha oaky..lets go now.."

They both got up and tiptoed to prince's room...vigilantly after skipping adi and other mens..

As soon as they entered prince's room..vandy locked the door...

" go geeet..get ur love" vandy said smiling..

Geet nodded with tears..and began walking towards maan's bed where he was asleep..

Tears spilled out of her eyes...she was gazing him after a long time... she wiped her tear and sat besides him..

" aap hume chod k kisi aur se kaise?? Geet gasped...slowly..

" lekin hum humare pyar ko nai jane denge..maan hum..aapse bohot pyar karte hai.." she held the ring she had wored as a chaing around her neck..

" yaad kijiye us din..aap humse kuch kehne ki koshsih kar rahe the...par keh nai paye..."

" yeh anguti aap shayad hume dena chahate the..maan.." She brushed his forehead..

As if sensing her touch he woke up..

Opening his eyes he met two honey brown eyes..

Geet looked deep in her eyes..trying to search her love.. But his eyes were mysteriously confusing..

" who are u and what are u doing here..." maan spoke in hassled ...

" uff geet kiss him..." Vandy uttered she was hiding behind the curtain so that maan cant spots her

" gaurds...gaurds..." maan yelled...climbing out of bed...and startling geet

" maaan mai..geet aap..aap ko hum yaad nai.." she replied in teary voice...

" don't u knw I m the prince only my wife and family has the right to call me by my first name...gaurds..." he grunted

" gaurds...someone..." His lips got sealed with hers..when he pressed her lips on his..making him shut

Automatically his eyes closed down...and hers too..

She just kissed him with all her love...wanting him to come back to her..

Maan dint respond he was froze... slowly her hope was dying...and she was about to pull back when..she felt his hand draping her waist..

He kissed her upper lip..and pulled in deepening the kiss...

Vandy had her eeys closed..when she saw geet kissing him...she was waiting for maan's trance to break..

Geet smiled into their kiss with tears ...and maan kissed those tears after he pulled back..

" geeet" he smiled cupping her face and engulfed her in his arms..

" mujhe laga..aap mujhe bhool gaye..maan" she wept lowering her face

" mai aapko kaise bhoolunga geet...aap kya bol rahe ho..." he sounded surprise...

"maan who..." geet paused when she saw vandy shaking her heading asking her not to say anything...

Geet nodded..in response..and gestured a thank u through her eyes..

" awww" vandy said and gave her a kiss...

" all's well that ends's well.."she uttered unknowingly...

And then in the next sec she found herself...in her room in her bed..

" mai yaha kaise prince maan aur geet kaha"

" lagta hai mai wapas aa gayi..itne jaldi lekin " she pouted...

" I wish I could have stayed there for a while..." she sighed..

" but this was sooo cool" she uttered smiling..

" hey I should tell this to my cc gang...yepiieee they'll be soo happy..and jealous tooo" she clasped her hands together in excitement .. and grabbed her laptop...

ONCE AGAIN A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U MY SWEETHEART

This os is written just for u...

To make u feel special..!!

p.s- the mood fairies exists or not... I leave upto ur imagination guys!

Edited by crazy_sweta - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
hey itna din k bad first akr mujko acha felt hora hai
i am j with vandy mumy i want to meet maaneet 😭😆

awesome written

so sleeping beauty is wron u can say sleeping handsum 😉

maaneet kiss infront of vandy 😳 nono no she closed her eyes ☺️


once again HAPPY Birthday vandy

tum jeo hazaro sal 🥳
Edited by fariya20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
aww...i loved it sweety...
its so special...me on stry wd maneet n above tht its fairytl...my fav...
feeling bleesed to hv u as frnd...

it was
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Posted: 10 years ago
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m gone offically😃😃
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