~A Twist of Tale- Vandy's birthday gift~~LAST PART@5 on 1.6.15

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This poem is about a girl

Who used to be lost in her world..

Lost in her world, she met few frnds

And then chatting with them became her trend..

Their frndship grew so fast and they gelled up so well

That she never felt wrong and would always kiss and tell

The girl would share everything with them

Be it amna, radsa sanjh sweta or dolly

Her craziness adding her fandom radiated her charm

Which made all the girls feel soo warm..

Today is her birthday, the day she was born

But we call it VANDAY coz she is soo special and we are unable to bourne...

Leaving all the craziness apart... just wana say

U vandana are our star!

________

The above poem is for some one really special to me...

she is soo dear to me..onve of my closest frnd..

The one to motivated me , encouraged me...understood me.. and was with me..through toughest phases of my life


VANDY its my sweetheart's birthday today

( VANDY'S BIRTHDAY THREAD)

She knws i m a little emotional...soo this is straight from my heart to u dear!

i m soo glad i have a frnd like u..whom i can call when i dint clear my interview(hope u remember our talk)

Thanks fro being such a awesome frnd!


Since today is ur birthday...how can I not try to make it special!

I chose to write a story for you only because we became frnds through my writings...


awww how can i not write one for u..

for my star ⭐️


So vandy this one's for you girl!!😳

A TWIST OF TALE

A girl dressed in jeans n kurta entered her room huffing...

She had a tiring day...she slumped on couch..and dropped her eyes close...

And then snapped them open again.. " why everyone is inactive these days ?? she twisted her lips and grabbed her lappy..

She had a strong urge to open IF but somehow suppressed those urges and open some online stories...site to read..

She scrolled n scrolled..but couldn't find anything fascinating ..and then her eyes landed on a story which was entitled THE FAIRYTALE STORY.

Curiously she clicked on the story and began reading it...

Here pupils dilated as she read the story in full concentration ...and then she sighed shutting the laptop..

Maybe it was her mood that's she wsnt able to read the story..

" whts happeneing to me.. yeh story bhi pasand nai ayi...uff" she held her forehead...irritated with her own behavior ..

" I think I should sleep...yaa.." she concluded. And hopped on to her bed...closing here eyes...

Suddenly there was flicker of lighting brightening the room...but the girl was still sleeping oblivious to this..

" hehehhehe hum yaha kyu aye hai??"

" tasha.. hum mood fairies hai na..aur aaj hume special treatement vandy ko dena hai.." Sahsa replied rolling her eyes..

Yes tasha and sahsa were tow mood fairies..who were responsible in altering one's mood from sad to happy ..

"wooowww so aaj vandy ki bari hai..yeh ladki vandy hai??" She questioned her..

Sahsa nodded huffing..

" yes...she is vandy ..she loves INDIA FORUMS and her FRNDS there ..leking aaj kal sab busy hai..they hardly get time to talk..u knw.. uska birthday bhi hai...kal..isliyee aaj hum specially iska mood thik karne aye hai.. All her frnds prayed that vandy should be super duper happy today and her day should be filled with excitement and adventure and fun... ab.. hum itne cute frnds ki wish kaise nai grant karte..."

"heheh are wahh" tasha clapped her hands...as sahsa..flickered her wings..and reached before her eyes..

" birthday pe..uske liye kuch special karna hai..umm...kya kare??" sahsa tapped her chin..

Tasha bit her lip..thinking of a brilliant idea.. " how about we give her experience of this story...tahts he was reading...isse zayda adventurous toh kuch bhi nai ho sakta na??"

" tashaaa that's fantastic idea..."

With that sahsa smiled brightly and swayed her magic wand...

" happy birthdayyy vandy..."

******

Vandy turned her face to the other side to block the light coming direct on her face...

" mumaa..shut the window na..plz let me sleep.." she mumbled...

But she dint received any response from her mother...and neither did the lights dimmed..

Frustrated she opened her eyes ...and raised herself.." mumaa plz aap" she trailed off narrowing her brows...

Gulping her saliva she stood to her feet gaping her weird surrounds...

" m I dreaming...yeh..mai..jaha" she muttered.. her surrounding were definitely not her room.. She seemed in a jungle noo..may be a park which was very green and...blooming with flowers..

" where m i.." she pinched herself...and the yelped..." okay vandy u r not dreaming phir mai kaha hu..."

" aaahhh" she screamed...as something almost hit her making her stumbled down...

" ah ouch" she touched her elbow which got hurt in process...and then dragged her eyes to the arrow which was fired on her ..

Her eyes widen in anticipation " this is arrow...but aaj k zamane mai kon...use karta hai isse...this is soo sharp" she gulped staring its tip..' oh god where m I"

" hey Miss are u okay I m extremely sorrryyy " she heard someone say... She took in a sharp breath raedy to yell at the person...but as she flipped her head... She froze..

She blinked her eyes..unsure of what she was seeing...

She saw a tall handsome man dressed soo lavishly as if a prince..perhaps and..with mesmerizing chocolate brown eyes ...

" yeh toh maan lag raha hai..,geet ka..m I dreaming...nahi nahi..i m not" she recalled

" miss I m sorry" the man approached her...humbly and asked for forgiveness..

" its okay,,,"vandy mumbled and stood to her feet..

The man smiled at her.. " cn I help u plz..ur elbow is hurt...I m once again very sorry"

" can u tell me where m i..i mean what is this place" At first she thought maybe this can be a prank.. but the way the man was speaking dint seem fake..plus in delhi such a place which is soo vibrant and cool never excited,..

"why do u ask this...umm this is HASMUKH lok...and I m prince of this estate MAAN SINGH KHURANA"

Her eyes shot up hearing the name... MAAN SINGH KHURANA?? This name was echoed in her brain making her soo tensed...that she fainted

*******

" vandyyy plz get up"

Vandy heard a faint unknown voice...reverberating .

She slowly opened here eyes...and shriked up

" what the hell are u " She yelled gaping a lady with two wings... she is going crazy she thought

" relax vandy its me sahsa..i m the mood fairy"

And then she told everything to vandy..about what her frnds wished for her..and then this place..

" and the prince MAAN bought u here because u fainted at the park "

Vandy clenched her eyes "ohh. but how will I leave this place??"

Sahsa smiled " ill give u a hint.. this is some type of fairytale story.. u just have to make everything perefect and that will bring the end of the story and ull return to ur world.havent u heard the quote "all's well that end's well and rememeber play fair...u cant disclose this to anyone

" enjoy ur stay in HASMUK lok c yaaa" and she vanished...

" wowowww" vandy sighed..heavily

1 hour later

" okay listen vandy..just try to find out which fairytale this is..plz help it to get sorted then ur done.. " she concluded after contemplating for an hour..

yes..this is a good idea" she stood to her feet " I should talk to the prince har story mai prince to hota hai hai na"

Contented she decided to exit her room..and meet the prince MAAN SINGH KHURANA .. As she walked outside..she found two girls..walking ahead of her..

Vandy possessed good instincts..and this time they told her that the two girl were upto something...

She followed them closely and tried to overhear their talking...

" this is love portion just make the prince drink this and after he drinks this whole portion..make sure u r standing infront of him..and his eyes descends on u ...first" the first girl said

" isse kya hoga? The other one replied

" kind will go ur deewana" she muttered evily

Vandy's clenched her jaw " yeh dono toh evil hai..but yeh mujhe kissi story ki yaad nai dila rahe" she mumbled sadly

" omg ..yeh dono kaha gaye..vandy phele prince ko toh bacha lo" she ran behind them but unfortunately she had lost them...

She scurried in every room...she knew the prince was in danger...

Finally she reached the balcony and found the girls with prince MAAN SINGH KHURANA and he had the love portion in his hand...

" noo no.." she gasped when he bough the portion to his lips...and started gulping it down...

" princeee maaan" vandy screamed...loudly...making maan turn his head in her direction...when after he gulped the whole portion down..

" ah oh dmmit" she muttered when he threw the glass...and gave her a lovely charming smile..

" yeh love protion sach mai kaam karta hai " she cursed herself for calling his name...



to be continued...


p.s - hasmuk lokh because i couldnt think of another name 😆


VANDY hope u r not over this..


there is lot to come 😆

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PART 2

" vandyy...u are beautiful" Prince maan said...when he came before her..

Vandy faked a smile and shifted awkwardly..

" u might have a weird name...and weird taste of dressing...but still u r very very.."

" I should leave ill see u latter..." she interrupted him..and ran inside in her room

" kuch toh karna padega mai iss story mai heroine nai hu... maan singh khurana hai..toh geet handa kaha hai..usski princess toh who hi hai..."

Vandy huffed pacing back and froth

" upar se yeh love portion 10 times that prince has called me aur kitne bahane banaungi" She chewed her lip..

" vandy tujhe yaha se nikalna hoga..but kaise...yeh log mujhe palace ka bahar nai jane denege"

ideaaa" she smiled delightfully...and immediately put her idea into action ..

She made nice n strong rope out of the bedsheets and every cloth she had in the room..and vigilantly descended down the rope from her window..

" phewww" She blew heavily..

" man this is quite an adventure" and then...she sauntered outside the palace...

Thankfully she had made her way into the city...

" ow' She mumbled.. in astonishment the city was soo lively and vivacious...

" omg..." she covered her face in veil..when she saw ADITYA MAHAN aka adi sir(from geet) entering the city on horses along with other men..

He shook the bell gathering everyone's attention...and vandy slipped behind the wall...

" THIS IS TO INFORM U ALL THAT PRINCE MAAN SINGH KHURAN'S LOVE VANDY IS MISSING... INCASE ANYONE FINDS HER PLZ INFROM THE STATE OFFICIALS ...THE ENGAGEMENT OF PRINCE AND HIS LOVE IS DUE DAY AFTER TOM INFORNT OF ALL AND KING N QUEEN"

THIS IS HER PORTRAIT PLZ SEE THIS CAREFULLY "

Her eyes shrieked when she found her portrait ...and then she shook her head.. I look weird in their dress or gowns..i m best in jeans..ah.." she uttered proudly...

After some time Adi left..with his mens..and vandy sighed in relief..

" what u doing???" Vandy bit her lip...when she heard SOMEONE'S voice

wohh...mai..i.." vandy turned...her face...and she jumped delightfully ...in happiness

" yeyyy thank god I meet u" she pounced on the girl in front of her..and hugged her ...

" excuse meee..." the girl wriggled under her hold...

" yes geeet I was looking for u..thank god I found u,...phew.." vandy smiled widely

Geet pushed her a little nd parted " how do u knw my name??" she narrowed her brows..

" who bas aise hi... Tum.."

" GEEET WHERE THE HELL ARE U "

" ohh sorry I hve to go...my step mom will kill me or else nice meeting u" geet smiled at her...and left

" step mom??ohh this is cinderalla's story"

" aree geet wait mai..bhi aati hu"

Vandy followed geet to her house... She paused at a distance...and hid behind the tree

Geet's step mom was scolding her and she was silently listening everything...

" this isn't cool..she should retort back..." vandy suggested..

" thank god she is leaving..." she muttered when geet's step mom...came outside the house and walked...towards the city..

Vandy rushed inside her house nd shut the door...

" geeettt where are u ?" she muttered as she found no one downstairs...

" upar dekhti hu" and she climbed the stairs..

" geeet" she mumbled when she saw her sitting besides her bed lost somehwhere...but there were tears in her eyes..

"geet are u okay?" vandy asked her after slipping besides her..

" tum yaha kaise ayi??" geet retorted wiping her tears

" that's not important..bolo phele...why are u crying and yeh kya hai tumhare hath mai" vandy tried to peep in what she was hiding in her fist..

" kuch nai.." geet looked away with moist eyes

" plz tell me...na.. mai tumhari dost jaisi hu..plz pzl.." vandy repeated...

Geet looked at her...and tears pooled in her eyes... and opened her palm..in front of her

" yeh toh ring hai..."

Geet nodded.. yeh ring mujhe mujhe..." Another tear slipped down her cheeks..

aww bolo na geet don't cry" she wiper her tears

" yeh mujeh PRINCE MAAN SINGH KHURANA ne di ti"

" WHAT?????"

" haa...i...he..love..." she broke down crying hysterically

Vandy held her shoulder...and geet cried holding her

" 2 dino se unka kuch pata nai..aur aaj unhone...adi bhaiya se..yeh notice bhijwaya ki..he loves some one else...some vandy"

Vandy closed her eyes in pain " gosh what did I do man"

" geet control urself.." vandy comforted geet..and parted her

" geet" she took in a deep breath

" I m vandy "

" what????" geet looked her stunned...she couldnt fathom the girl who was being soo nice to her was the one who snatched her happiness...

" yes..but please listen to me.."

Geet shook her head..getting up and raised her hand..

" get out of my house vandy..i hate u..i hate u"

" geeet plz...i promise...I never intended this..i..will never do such a thing to u plz" vandy had tears in her eyes..

Geet looked at her.. Vandy's eyes were shone with truth...

After while when geet calmed down.. vandy explained her about the girls...and everything that happened with prince

" oh...u mean u tried to save him...and..i m soo sorry vandy" geet apologized holding her hand..

Vandy smiled and patted her hand " its okay geet..koi bhi aise react karta"

And they both hugged

" but geet we need to find out how to counter back the love portion "

" ohh haaa hume yeh soch na padega'

" GEEET"

" omg..vandy meri step mom aa gayi..tum jaldi se peeceh k rahste se nikal jaao..ill meet u in the park..go go now" geet responded...and vandy scurried outside through back door...

*****

" kya kar sakte hai love portion ka effect nullify karne k liye? Sochoo vandy sochooo"

Vandy was laying down on the grass...

" hmm mai bhi sochti hu" sahsa suggested

" omg..u...plz help me na' vandy turned to face her... She blinked her eyes god knws how did she appear all of a sudden...

Sasha giggled... " vandy tumhe aise story nai padi jismai love protion ya aisa kuch ho..jisse prince apna sud bhud kho deta hai??"

Vandy shook her head cutely nai.. " mai toh sleeping princess padha its almost similar but in that case in was princess and who..neend mai hoti hai and use todne k liye..aisa karna padta hai"

Sahsa hummed geet har fairytale same ho aisa zrruri toh nai..smiliar hona chayie..same nai " she replied winking at vandy

next will the last part!!

Edited by crazy_sweta - 10 years ago
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INDEX
PART 1- PAGE 1

PART 2- PAGE 1

PART 3 - PAGE 5
Edited by crazy_sweta - 10 years ago
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Happy B'day dear Vandy,wow its awesome,😛unique gift on your b'day by Sweta,👍🏼loved it.👏
Stay blessed,love you so much🤗 ❤️





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I'll comment after reading Sweta😳 but loved your gift for Vandy.🤗
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Lovely os :)
Happy birthday dear !!!
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Originally posted by: mskfan

Lovely os :)
Happy birthday dear !!!


thank u dear 😊

the story isnt over here 😆
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Originally posted by: mskfan

Special mention 'beautiful poem'


THANK U SOO MUCH
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wow awesome update sweta⭐️
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hi dear! splendid update! well written! waiting 4 next part!

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