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The Myth


The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Part - 6



Part - 7

All d plans nd promises went in vain ,, his image in mirror was mocking him ,, shocked or bewildered he was staring at his image ,, d red color of vermilion on his jawline nd chest was showing her mark on him ,, his torn button of sherwani nd bare lower body was telling him that he lose himself to this unknown girl in his drunken stage ,, he ranked his hand in his messy hair in frustration nd groaned in anger .. why ,, why did I come to tell her that I love some one else ? why I thought to tell her that I cn't accept her ,, it was a forced marriage for me .. why I came in front of her ? Why I drunk nd lost my sense ? God !! what I did ? I cheated my sam ,, I broke my promise ,, she told me not come near this girl but I did .

He removed his dresses nd opened cold shower to calm himself ,, he thought that it's not good to live here any more ,, he already did a mistake ,, what if his family put him in some more prob in d name of rituals ,, he didn't want to face this girl after this mistake ,, better he left ASAP ,, he took bath wore his robe nd came out ,, saw her sitting on bed with hung face wrapped in her dupatta ,, he cursed himself under his breath , quietly went to wardrobe nd took out his dress nd went back to dresser room ,, got ready with heavy heart nd thought to say her sorry for his mistake ,, he came out ,, she was still in same condition ,, Maan put on his shoes ,, took out his packed bag nd his hand bag nd move to go out ,, he gave a last look to this girl ( didn't think her his wife) , gulped nd spoke in a cracky voice .

Maan: I m sorry for what had happened last night ,, I didn't want to do that ,, I m really very sorry for my mistake ,, I only wanted to talk u nd didn't know how I lost my sense ,, I m very sorry ... I m going for my study nd won't bother u ,, good bye nd sorry again .

Saying this he left from there calling driver to take out d car ,, dump d bags in car boot ,, set in nd drove off to airport without informing nd meeting to anybody ,, on d way he called Sam nd informed her that he was coming ,so reach airport nd meet him there ,, when all woke up lil late in KM after a sound sleep Maan was flying with saddened heart nd Geet was sitting in d room like before ... devastated .

She came in sense after listening d intercom bell , but she didn't pick ,, looked all around remembered that he had gone long back crushing her ,, his words .. sorry nd mistake wr stinging her ,, a feel of disgust torturing her ,, that wedding dress was burning her skin ,, anger started clouding her mind ,, she wanted to shout loud but didn't ,, gulped d bitterness nd mumbled ... No Geet ,, don't let out ur anger , keep this fire on , i'll burn him in this fire nd then say him sorry ,, i'll return him nd all what they gave me ,, all only play with me ,, disowned me ,, snatched everything from me at d name of doing good for me ,, all just think for them nd for their happiness ,, my so called family made them free from my curse showing their helplessness ,, Daijaan made her agree for this marriage at d name of morals nd for her good future ,, he .. her so called husband used her whole nyt nd rejected her saying that he loves someone else ,, he said that this was a forced marriage for him but other side forcing her to satisfy his lust ,, let's see how his family show it's helplessness ,, all wr thinking for their happiness nd benefits nd got what they want ,, it was only she who was at lose from all around ,, all use her like a pawn , but now this pawn'll play d game ,, a joker nd pawn cn change d game ,, now i'll live my life of my own .. all alone .

When she was thinking nd collecting her broken self to face her uncertain future ,, Maan's mom entered in d room after a knock ,, d door was lil opened so she thought that Maan had woke up ,, after d knock she entered nd find a messy Geet sitting on bed wrapped in her dupatta ,, d condition of bed made her shy , but a smile crept on her lips getting that her son moved on in his life ,, she came near Geet nd caressed her head ,,adjusted her loose strands lovingly .

Reema : Geetika beta get ready ,, guests wr leaving so wanted to meet u once ,, ( she look around) I think Maan is in his gym ,, u get ready beta nd come down ,, today u have to make any sweet for all as ritual ,, Ur bag is there in dressing room to get d new dress ,, OK.

She left with a smile unknown with d reality ,, none of d Khurans knew that their loving son had left hrs back nd a storm had to come in KM .. Geet got up nd went to dressing room ,, took out a dress ne went in d WR ,, took a long bath ,, her body was aching nd there wr few marks on her shoulders , cleavage nd on lower lip ,, she disgusted seeing them ,, she rubbed them hard to erase d feel of his touch ,, her heart was filled with anger nd hate for him ,,he had gone nd she cdn't pour out her anger on him , but there wr many things to clear by her ,, thought she too didn't want to marry nd this was a forced marriage for her too but she didn't cheat any one ,, there was nothing to hide from her side ,, she gave a chance to change her life accepting elders wish at last ,, she was dutiful from her side , but here in KM seems all wr playing smart nd she had to talk clearly .

Geet got ready unwillingly nd went down ,, DM saw her nd took her to kitchen ,, Geet touched their feet but there was no happiness on her face her eyes wr blank ,, it was her 1st day in KM ,, there Geet stood quietly ,,both felt lil odd ,, Reema saw nd passed a smile but Geet gave a cold expression which hurt her ,, exchange a look with DM then told Geet to make Kheer for all .

Geet slowly : ji ,, plzz show me where r things to make ?

DM: nakul is here to help u nd he'll give u all d things .

DM gestured Reema to come out ,, she sensed that there was something wrong ,, Geet's expressions alerted her ,, Re followed her nd they came in lone corner.

DM: Reema where is Maan ?

Reema: don't know maa , may be in his gym .

DM: call him to join all in BF .

Reema called at Maan's phone but that was coming switched off nd this thing made them tense ,, Reema tried again but d result was same ,, both looked at each other worried .

DM: go nd check him in gym , I m with guests .

Reema went towards gym nd find that empty nd untouched ,, she went to his room nd study but he was not there too ,, R called him again but same switched off ,, Reema became tensed thinking that where he went nd why his phone is off ,,, Geetika ,, she went in kitchen where Geet was quietly chopping dry fruits for Kheer nd steering d kheer in mid ,, she slowly went near her nd asked .

Reema: Geet beta , where is Maan ?

Geet's hands halted for few sec nd then started chopping whispering ... I don't know .

Reema: when he left ?

Geet: 3-4 hrs back .

Reema: what ???

She looked at Geet confused nd shocked ,, didn't say anything nd came out worried ,, she cdn't even asked to Dev nd Yash bcoz d guests wr there ,, DM looked at her nd she gestured in a no faking a smile in front of guests ,, Geet finished d cooking ,, nakul placed d BF at dining table nd informed all ,, all d guests settled in dining hall ,, Geet brought Kheer in many bowl nd served all ,, they praised her , asked about Maan nd R covered saying he went meet his sick friend nd will come back after few hrs . Dev nd Yash gave a confusing look to Re nd DM but remained quiet ,, after BF d guests took leave praising d whole wedding nd Geet .

Geet came back in room nd got a call from daimaa ,, she asked about her ,, Geet quietly replied keeping her calm nd asked when they r going back ,, Daimaa said that when she came for pegfera ritual in resort after that they all wd go ,, Malkin wd talk to savitri devi ji or Re when they wr sending her with Maan ,, Geet smirked nd replied that they won't come nd cut d call ,, that reply shocked Daimaa nd she informed Rano nd told her to talk Khuranas ,, daima sensed something wrong ,, Rano 1st called Geet .

Rano: Geetika ,, what happen beta ?

Geet annoyed : come here nd asked ,, I m not going to reply all whole day .

She cut d call nd switched off d phone ,, d situation started warming up at both places .


Peeping ---- arguments , blaming nd decisions ...


Part - 8

sorry for mistakes ...


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wow lovely emotional omg update..te way rano - mahi ask daimaa to bring geet was they want to talk abt her future but geet was annoy with them..wen they said abt her wedding she was angry and bursting them was lovely emotional..te way they saying abt they helpless but wat ever geet was te one who was affecting by their helpless..te way daimaa talking with geet's family decide to crush geet's life and fixed her wedding without her against her wish..and daimaa too helpless but she making geet to accept her was lovely emotional.. te way my maan was futrious with his family decision and doing everything mechanically was lovely..now destinty have tied them in one bond which no one can untie it even if try..i love te way geet was waiting to face her new life..i love te update

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wow lovely omg emotional painful update..te way my maan too was blackmailed by his family as he was mang tikk and sam family to rejected him but both planned to decide they future but for tat he crushed his geet's life..te way my maan drunken to sooth his pain and geet was shocked to know abt his love . which shattered all her hope..omg my maan claimed his geet in his talli state but wat ever he lost his control and geet lost het everything to te man who was love with some one very painful..te way my maan.pushed which hurting her more physically and mentally was heart winching..geet u show wat u are to everyone..but i feel for my maan who once realize he will burn himself in his sin..i love te update so much yar..

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Part 5 & 6 both r superb . handa family ne geet se emotionally baat manwa hi li ...dai ma ke sahare . n dusri taraf maan n Sam apna plan ready krke rakha hai dusri country Jane ka . in sab mei geet bechari phases gyi ...sab apne apne fyde ke liye usse use kiya . n ab maan bhi :( waiting for next...
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

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🤗 Hi Lily ...
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😊 Update ...pg .. 85

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Geet is right all used her for their own selfish motive...all wants her to adjust with their demands but don't care about her feelings...

Geet is angry...she wants revenge from Maan...

waiting for next part...


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