~||Prohibited Love||~ -Thread 3 pg1 - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW!! fantastic update dear...loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oye ...u changed ur user id...
nd i thought its some one nw..
commin to update...
aww ..geet kitni khush hai..wit d gift nd d thought dat maan is not angry about him..
he cares for her..bt i feel its jus dat he is thinking her as ashima...
i would love to know maan ka pov ..to know wat he is thinking ...
lovly part..
cont soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
anie scold maan because get fever he was the reason
maan was restless went to geet room watching her
that scene witnessed dadi she want maaneet together
geet went to maan kiss him saying thank you
maan remember her birthday gift to her no one didnt know this
lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update.. Geet look like Ashima... is main worry.. because.. whatever Maan is doing is only for Ashima not Geet... n Geet is so innocent to not understand this every thing .. may be she is getting attached.. to Maan somwhere n it will cause more complications in future may be..
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Posted: 10 years ago


wonderful updates...

Anni removed mangalsutra from Geet's neck because she thinks that if later on Geet don't see Maan as her husband then she will feel burdened and Maan also thinks that if in future Geet wants to be free from him then he will free her...

why Aashima ran away from Maan...and how she died...

waiting for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 14(English Version)

Making one person smile can change the world. Maybe not the whole world, but their world- Anonymous

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"Dadi" Anni called

"Ji beta" Dadi looked at her

"I want to talk to you" Anni paused "regarding bahi "

Dadi frowned "Maan"

"woh..ha.. bahi thinks Geet is..."

Anni couldn't complete, karma screamed out.

*****

"Karan will be fine na" Geet said to piya in concern voice, she was missing him so badly who had taken to doctor due to his negligence, that stupid gobbled the food like anything because it was delicious and he didn't check out there was chick pea in it which he had allergic reaction afterwards.

"Geet chill" piya said casually "he will be fine, this is not new, he have allergy with many things, even me also"

"Means?" Geet confusion rose

"I have allergy with brinjal, papa also have, it just runs in our family" piya explained her, as her whole family have allergy problem with different substances.

*****

Next day

"Hey baby doll" Karan jumped on her bed as he was all fit and fine.

"Karan" Geet exclaim with happiness "You are okay"

Karan frowned "What happen to me? I am perfectly fine"

"Yesterday you..."

He cut her "uffo baby doll, it's nothing, I had medicine and now I am fine, see! no allergy " she looked at him as today he was fine, yesterday he looked horrid with red swollen face. She was just concerned.

Later on Geet was busy in drawing in sketching book, but not failed to keep an eye on bunny and doll and teddy are beside her, and Karan was busy with PS4

"Karan" Geet called out.

"say" without looking at her

"Why he never smile?" she said holding her teddy bear which was giving by Maan

"who he?" He questioned her continued his playing "wait... your prince, till now I never understand why call him prince, whatever" he shrugged off "di said he used to smile before, but I have never seen him smiling" Karan said between his game "I think he have some kind of allergy with smile, even with other smile too, wait yah, yah, yahooo" Karan screamed out winning the game.

Geet was going to ask something else before that nakul came informed Karan that his mother was calling and immediately left.

*****

Next Day

As Maan sat for breakfast, saw arp and Geet were coming to dining table.

All the family was surprised with arp's sudden entry. Everyone welcomed her with heartily.

"Di, say" Geet nudge arp, arp looked at her than Maan

"MSK" lav brought his attention "I know you don't have time, but I think you shouldn't ignore your health, you should come to clinic for once check up on"

"beta, what happened?" Dadi became anxious.

Maan frowned "Dadi, I am perfectly fine"

"No" Geet argued "Why you lying " then looked at arp "He has allergy"

"What ?"

"Bahi why didn't you say before you have allergy problem ?" Anni said disappoint.

While everyone was bewildered.

"Anni.i.am.fine" he said gritting his teeth then looked Geet "Who said to you"

"Again you are lying" Geet said pouting her lips "This...This...karan said you have allergy "

Karan spit out the whole water from mouth and started coughing; Maan eyes were fire as if he will burn him any moment.

"Karan said because of allergy you never smile, that why i called arp di, so she can give you medicine, you will become alright " Geet finished with tear

Geet will kill me. I just said like that, and she really believed. Please god save before bahi kill me Karan thought

"first time i am listening smile can be also allergy" mami said munching her toast.

Maan looked at geet few second with bewilderment and tried to suppress his smirk pressing the lips tightly at her innocent thought but ended up laughing loudly, surprising everyone.


"You are smiling" Geet couldn't believe her own eyes "But how?"

"medicine is sitting in front and asking How?"Mami said

Everyone burst out laughing.

Maan was the one first who control himself, and put the masked of MSK mood "I am done" getting up from the chair leaving foe office.

Nobody failed to noticed that still there was little smile playing on his lips.

dadi kissed geet's forehead as a blessing.

*****



Attention

Few readers ask what was maan's POV reagarding geet's birthday that he gave the gift to Geet?

I will answer in next 2/3 updates.😉

Edited by pixi_nightingal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update... geets innocence made maan laugh...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic Update

Geet gets worried that Maan too suffers with an allergy and that is the reason he does not smile but the great thing about it is that the thought of it made Maan burst into laughter and Daadima was so happy that its because of her Maan is happy .

Is Maan still thinking of Geet as Ashima or can he really make the difference between the two
Is he living in some illusion that Ashima is with them instead of Geet
Is that the reason he cares for Geet thinking her as Ashima

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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update finally maan smiled fully geets innocence bring out his lost smile thought karan may gone but maan didnt say anything very sweet part thnx 4 update

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