CHURA LIYA (5) new story link pg 93

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

chapter 18

Superb update. 😆😆 Your double meaning dialogues were hilarious. couldn't stop laughing😆. What she is asking and what he is thinking😉 Now DM and daarji also set. 😃 all in agreement except our jhalli Geet who is busy with her medical encyclopedia.

Thanks for pm.

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suni_104

@suni_104

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Poor adi
Maan teasing and warning adi good
Maan swimming
Geet want to know about robot what maan thinking
Darji and dadimaa friends
Wonderful update

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CHERUKURI9

@CHERUKURI9

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Awesome update. Loved the conversation between maan and adi.

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ppriyanka83

@ppriyanka83

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

OMG..its lyk an overdoz..it made me fell down frm bed.

The pool cnvrsation iz too gud.."IT"..power..automatic..lol Maan need 2 keep hiz eyez on ground also..

Maan iz too much yaar n i m jst imaging hiz re-action whn Geet vll brust hiz balloon of DAYDREAMING..L0L..

bechara Adi..Maan ne thik s 1st aid b n hone di..

Thnx 4 PM..

Update soon

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11j25sam

@11j25sam

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

oh god this was till now the best chapter of this story

comedy mixed with romance, or should i say romantic comedy😉😆

i m still feeling tingles 😳😳

let this kiss happen .plzzz

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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Totally hilarious... Maan's craziness and Geet' innocense LOL.. Poor Adi got beaten up and Maan is taking his revenge on him for taking his Geet's attention.. The pool conversation was too good. Loved it.. Thanks for the pm..

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BloodDiamond

@BloodDiamond

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Chapter 18

Omg 🤣 I cannot find one that was not entertaining 🤣 Maan treating Adi was hilarious
Adi whimpering as Maan was pressing band aid on his cheek and for enjoying Geet's nursing
Maan's dadee and Geet's dadajee meet and Savitri devi asks for Geet's hand for Maan
But the best part was definitely water cleaner autobot and Maan's it comparison 🤣 Oh God I laughed so much reading it . Geet's innocent questions and Maan's that one track thinking is hilarious 🤣

"Is it automatic?" she asks again.

Of course I have only one thing on my mind.

I want to grab her and tell her, Yes baby! It is automatic whenever you are around.

🤣 this is really classic 🤣

and then taking to heights comparison 😆 just loved those parts a lot👏
Awesome update ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Thanks for the password ❤️

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Congrats for the new thread 👍🏼

Fabulous update 👏

Maan & adi part too good... Maan 'j' seeing geet nursing adi

Maan apne aap ko kitna praise kartha hai😎

Maan ke imagination

Dadi n darji frnds👍🏼

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SonalikaSingh

@SonalikaSingh

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

God it is getting more hilarious by the day..ha ha

Adi hero in a play...ha ha...nahi chai pilata hai

Band aid by tough hands...ha ha

Is it automatic..is it powerful...ha ha ha

Geet is really an item ...ha ha

Mouth to mouth from nakul

Ended up giving herself

Now darji n dadi r going to see them kissing in the pool

When maan comes to know that geet was asking about the robot., he is going to hv a real heart attack...ha ha

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Part 18

Maan and adi's tom and jerry game was good. Adi is so proud of his proposal. No wonder he got it from shasha. Waitng to see when Geet does not misunderstand the situation.

Automatic! Powerful! God I just burst into laughter reading it. Maan is in his own world and waiting to see if darji is going to witness a kiss or Geet's mukha.