CHURA LIYA (5) new story link pg 93

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#551

Wow The Last Part Was Just Beautiful
In all of Geet's innocence and her analysis and medical
terms for Maan every step of their journey from childhood
until now was filled with humor and excitement , true Maan was
always confident and his ego on himself just added to Geet's innocent mind
questioning the unstable Maan Khurana but when he realized he could so easily
just lose her he had to give her time as he had always loved her truly and purely
and once Geet received this love automatically her innocent mind also matured
to further understand Maan .

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Alpha01

@Alpha01

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Posted: 10 years ago

#552

Patience is a virtue and all good things come to those who wait. These two phrases won Maan his Geets heart forever.

Geet given the space needed has slowly come to realise the depth of Maans love. It has also given her the chance to feel more secure in her own love for him which is growing day by day.

It was a lovely and fitting ending to this unique love story. Finally bulldog ko green light milgaya.😉 Left me with a smile on my face. Really enjoyed this story and applaud you for your successful attempt at comedy.👏

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#553

Just Awesome end of Awesome story

Dadi provide maneet much needed time so that they can understand each other

Geet realised the depth of Maan,s love and passion for her and Maan, patience rewarded and he won jis love, he is just WOW in bulldog khurana mode, loved it

Edited by preetidhawan - 10 years ago

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Susmitha

@susm

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#554

Wonderful n amazing ending.from bull dog to lover boy. From medical names to love.how Geet again made Maan to play cricket. Full of maaneet loved it. At last ILU to kiss.avi beautiful app dip Chura Ilya with this. Waiting for new one. Please start soon.

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kamna

@kamnagupta7

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#555

Superb
Maan gave Geet time as he promised to her.
Geet is feeling heaven in love of maan.
Maan is waiting for Geet to confess her love.
Atlast maan patience paid nd Geet confessed her love.
Brilliant work avi

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: vrinda22
Last part...nehiii.nehiii.filmy style...ok

😆 😆

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#557

I really want to read more.feeling sad...will miss this

Specially all comedies

Itwas fun reading them

Maan n geet to gf bf mode

Maan gave the space for geet

N waited for her 3 words

Ufff..the pillows heart broken..avi..u didnt say did the pillow got the perfect matchlolz.

Loved it

Finally geet told ilu

N maan turned romeo

Geet thinking of lattern sr

But maan is way ahead to do sr b4 marriage

Superb part

Pls continue with ur comedies

I likE it

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#558

whata lovely epilogue loved the journey completely enjoyed it

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 10 years ago

#559

Awesme ending
finally geet said those three magical words to maan..maan on cloud 9 after hearing it Oops pillow..LOL

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miss_mystery

@miss_mystery

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#560

It was great ending but i literary want to read more of your worl

loved the entire story and ending

can we expect epilogue

thanks for giving such a beautiful story

take care