CHURA LIYA (5) new story link pg 93 - Page 53

part 21 - dadi's plan worked...she sent maan away from her...she was happy to see her reaction when they met...

aakhir geet ne maan ko i love you keh hi diya😃

just read both part 19 Nd pt 20... Nd I seriously loved both of them... where pt 19 was full of comedy Nd romance pt 20 was seriously a mesmerizing pt with Maan's confession... I loved the dialogues so simple Nd honest Nd I even feel that it was rite for Geet to clear out things so that maan can understand her well.. hope nw he knows Hw to take things wid Geet Nd even Geet realizes wat love is... continue soon dear

Firstly yippee boy I'm I glad that this isn't the last part and secondary back to weirdness 😆

I'm happy geets realised her feelings and adi was a helping hand in that 😆 but dadi of course was the windmill 😉 way to go dadi. Hail dadima

The boyfriend explanation was so cute, i loved the whole update

Man back to flying high but not solo, that's great

Thank you for regular update and sorry not in the ball atm so commenting when I can but trying not to fall behind

Awesome update can't wait for the next, teaser is awesome

Part-----19
Hillarious update I was laughing like crazy ...
Finally Mr BD MSK's lucky day come oye hoye ,he got his kisses but as usually our jhailli queen geet in her case was entirely different kiss story and her thinking totally different when he was kissing her LAMO ye na bas eske sath he hotaa h n maan is in cloud nine today was his lucky day even i was on cloud nine finally Avi Ji ko thora tarash aaya maanjaan pe thankss for ur kindness Jiii...

Daimaa nd darji saw them kissing , in swimming pool as usual like true Msk's dadimaa she to join us on cloud nine (don't get confused maan n readers are already their na ) darji in shock , then maan's acting like 60 ki moves ki heroins as if geet had looting his virginity, and he says, "Ab main sab ko kaise mooh dikhauga Geet. Meri izzat " he acting all
innocent in front of Darji geet is thinking of crp ...
Both dadimaa n darji has announced the engagement and indeed its a lucky day for maan about it n geet is confused that
Maan loves her ...

Maan still on his tortured spree poor pillow don't worry tumhre azaadi ki deen ab nahi dur h , geet's enter in maan's danger zone n heyeee darshaan ho gaye NPG Msk k I'm droolinggg over my him but geet toh geet hai n her jhailliness out of the world n MAAN's maan-nesss on peak ho bhi kyu na geet in his room has only boasted his ego more his thoughts as usual went only in one direction his mishty cant resist him,kyu nahi after all Msk hotness personified and she desires him like does without hearing her kya keh rahe h no use maan geet's WO n maan's assumed his WO now he having his own way with her n geet nikal le aapne TV shows ke highway n the most hilarious one was he talking about HM when geet had come to refuse him heyee maan ko milinggg kiss Ka double dose ...
best diloge when maan said --- don't worry shaadi nahi affair kar lege I just love it...
Bar bar har bar ye sabit kar deyte hai they are just perfect for each other...

Part---- 20
Update started with a lovely note but ended with a sad note :P but beautiful things happen at least wo kehte h na Distance makes the heart grow fonder same thing happened to geet ...

Coming to the scene
Maan was sooo lost in geet n trying to escape n rajji phone call bring him out form his lala land n finally some one recognized his Maan-nesss n our munda is flat by raj ufff n Mayank and Nupur's Papa parts was awesome ...
Now room, she had been waylaid by daadima on the way to her room de spite her protests daadima had pulled out her khandani jewelry for geet to try n main time maan's entry and he mesmerized by his mishty u reminds me GHSP's moments as usual in ur way I just loved it...

The most earnest n sincere heart touching confession
Aww when he said na "Tum kyun mujhe baar baar chod ke jaane ki baat kar rahi ho Geet. Ab hum dono humesha saath
rahege", howw kinne pyaar se bola ...
Finally he confessed his love for geet he put his heart in front of her
"I love you Geet aur ab main
tumhe mujh se kabhi alag nahi hone dooga. 17 years ka tha, tab se tumse pyar karta hu. Chura
liya hai tumne dil ko, my love. Ab meri saari zindagi tumhare naam hai Geet"... I'm floored by his most genuine sincere confession...
But I think geet was right with her own POV and finally he listens and understand her and so does daadimaa n she thought his bacha geet needs dadimaa's supper help n its gonna work ...,,

But maan's reply "Toh main wait karuga Geet. Tumhari ummeed tumhara intezaar karuga. Jab tak ye
ehsaas tumhe nahi hota, hum dono ke hisse ka pyar main karuga tumse" its brought tears in my eyes he maid it bass loot liya mujyeee ... maan was out of station and geet seems to be missing him ...

Last but not the least of course Writer Ji deserved lotsss of loveee n muaahhh for ur awesomest heart touching lines ...

like buttons are not working grrr... send me next link

aayee heeyee kinnaa pyaara sa teaser hai ...
where are u ?? give me link
sorry for my late comment but what to do my work didn't let me live in peace now day ...
10 dayss gap I have almost 40 pending comments mummmyyy , sab ne bas thaan le mein nahi aaoo ge or sab ne milkar tabi update karne h poor me

Originally posted by: dqno1

Sheen😃