MG SS#3:The Deadly Husband Note Part 39-Page 140 13/8/2018

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swastisinha

@swastisinha

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#511

Hi Ana,

I have been following your story from the beginning but I am going to comment for the first time.

I love how you link your stories with the songs that play in your mind. It also creates a very strong imagination in reader's mind and also the reader can connect to writer's mind.

So the story has progressed significantly, Geet is ready to move on finally and Maan's wait is over. I like the way their relationship has progressed. Slow and steady, with proper explanations. Hats off to Maan for having so much patience while dealing with Geet.

Now I know you are good in writing hot updates(Courtesy your OS's)😉😳 Eagerly waiting for the next!😛

Edited by swastisinha - 9 years ago

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#512

Can I die for a moment.. ?? 😆 Such an awesome scenes between Maneet.. must say.. after Geet's confession.. Maan too has become expressive abt his desire for her.. n he openly showing it to her... Last scene finally he admitted his desire for her.. but he wants her to take now stand to take their relation forward... Huum waiting for next part now..

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bhasha9

@bhasha9

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#513

This is the best update...it was awesome... i read it again nd again just to reloeve those moments...

Maan had to be awwed seeing geet...she was definitely killing with her looks...bechara maan,why he has to suffer...obviously nw he cant hide his desire,nw tht she has also confessed..

last was the beat he again told her tht she has to take step frwd nw...bcoz he was more thn dying to live tht momnt..

finally the wait is over fr maan hopefully...

i hope u r nt planning anything evil to ruin their moment...i hv my doubts...👎🏼

plz plz plz plz give an update fast,hw can u expct us to wait,

waiting more eagerly thn even last time..

u left us last ti me also hanging in middle..nt this time,this is supppesed to be special one wala rght????:-)

plz update dedo jaldi se...i just read it everyday just to love tht moment...hayeee.it was so beautiful...

thnx fr locely update

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#514

wow awesome.. Superb ..

Thanks for updating..

Continue soon...

It was a beautiful update... Romance is in the air is all I can say...

Well enjoyed the update thoroughly... It was worth the wait.. N the song is apt choice... Going perfectly with the situation...

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aashi14

@aashi14

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#515

such a fab part,loving ds more and more,dis part was full of maaneet n so much enjoyed it.maan desire for geet is inreasing after geet'sconfession bt poor him has to keep a check on fr geet's ake.shaina has becum so luving n caring towards geet,finally geet is getting all d luv n care she deserves.eagerly waiting fr next part

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#516

Mindblowing. You have so nicely depicted their inner feelings.can't wait for next part please update soon.

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#517

WOW!! outstanding updates dear...loved maaneet's moments...although aryan-shaina is my favt...

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#518

Finally...maans dream will b fulfilled...n he deserved...beautifully written every moments...

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#519

beautiful part..now geet understand maan more..finally geet decide to take their relationship to next level..maan's waiting is worth it because finally it made geet realize her love for him and his unconditional love for her..beautiful part..

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Asheley

@Asheley

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#520

Chap-32

Wow such a lovely flowers Maan has really good taste

Maan is cursing himself for not asking Geet to accompany him

Geet is missing Maan already

She is imagining Maan

Annie sending pics to Maan of their evening tea party enjoying rain

Geet sleeping in Maan room

Maan could not even wait till next flight and came through road just to reach home early

Maan knew Geet was awake

OMG that dresses

Maan must be really would have tough time seeing Geet like that 😆

Thanks for PM dear

Sorry for late reply dear