Originally posted by: abba12
hello !!
recently i read all 23 parts together, and today i got to read last part too .. so one comment as a whole 😉
The way u portrayed maan ... i could completely relate his character ...it didnt feel like out of order ... Geet's journey was painful one but she did fell for the beast ..
the forced I LOVE U :P ... my fav thing hahaa .. in serial and in ur story too ... that changed everything though .. maan punished himself ... but he really loved geet .. even before that drama he put in , for all others ..
i didnt like the fact that maan used to say things about her character but later he did mend his mistakes very well ..
Geet's emotions were portraid so well .. naina :-/ ...
liked that brij left home and didnt come back till maan accepted geet and he stood by geet even after doing worse for her ..
perfect beauty and the beast ..
all in all , a fabulous story with ur clear writing ..
thank u 😊
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