ILTEJA Thread 1||Part 1 pg 4||Updated 23 April

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azaina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Wow ... dats nyc ... waiting 4 more

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azaina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

on whch pg prt 1 updated?

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Taahir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

WOW Now That Was Such An Captivating And Suspense Filled Update

Geet is a doctor she is calm at work yet at nights she has these nightmares that haunts her and its been there for years .
so something tragic must have happened in her past , while on the other hand too Maan is it ...he also seems to live a lifeless life as if also something drastic has given him immense pain that he seems to punish himself but cannot sleep and he too goes to office masking his pain right
Is they past somewhere connected to each other

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annirogc

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

beautiful part.. geet is a docter..she was having nightmare daily ... she was not able to sleep.. same with maan he also cant sleep.. he was working tai cai.. waiting for their meeting

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momi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet
waitin...oops...me 1st😉

liked the update...there r things unsolved and in the dark that haunts the two. the night torments them and they r unable to sleep for the shadows of the past seemed not to leave them in peace.
geet is a doc..but then thr had been issues with her. Maan is so up in his position yet sleep is cruel on him.
it will be exciting to know what is next.

p.s: pls change the 'Recap' to 'Precap". (recap changes the meaning😆"

sorry i updated it without rechecking but just checked it now there were more typo mistakes as well have corrected them😆

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momi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: arunima.
on whch pg prt 1 updated?

on pg 4 have edited now

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momi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: taahir004
WOW Now That Was Such An Captivating And Suspense Filled Update

Geet is a doctor she is calm at work yet at nights she has these nightmares that haunts her and its been there for years .
so something tragic must have happened in her past , while on the other hand too Maan is it ...he also seems to live a lifeless life as if also something drastic has given him immense pain that he seems to punish himself but cannot sleep and he too goes to office masking his pain right
Is they past somewhere connected to each other

well u have for the story to unfold even i don't know it now as i havent planned the story😆

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mlaran852

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

interesting part!!!!
geet is a doctor but she can't do anything for her problems...
the same nightmares that keep her awake, are the ones that keep her company...her past is always there...
she sees a conflict between two people and then a shot...
what happened???
maan is a very strong businessman but the night only knows his problems, his pain...he hides things from everyone...
what will be the connection between them...how will they meet????
waiting for next parts!!!!!!!!!!!

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Desigirls12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Wow lovely emotional update..my maaneet ki intro was lovely..two are masking they pain and hurting themselves, both with sleepless nights but one hurting her emotional and one physically..i love te update yar

Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago