ILTEJA Thread 1||Part 1 pg 4||Updated 23 April

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Wht happens when innocence is tarnished?? Wht happens when u r abandoned by those who r meant to love u the most?? Wht happens when u learn tht relations r nothing at the time when u r meant to learn the value of relations ?? wht happens when you see everything breaking apart ?? wht happens when you want to do soo much and ur hands r free yet tied?? Wht happens when a person who is damaged beyond repair dreams of having those thing which she isn't meant to have?? Wht happens when u have lost ur own self in this mingled yarn of life ?? Wht happens when u hav everything yet deprived of it? Wht happens when u mask urself to fight this world but you loose ur own self under tht mask? Wht happens when two such souls meet??Will they ever find their true selves?Will their dream ever become reality ?Will they succeed in breaking these shackles?Will their ILTEJA their CRAVE be fulfilled?
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-Character Sketch-


Maan Singh Khurana
Age 25 A self-made man uncrowned king of Khurana empire very ruthless and merciless can go to any extent to get revenge but is it his trueself?
Geet Rathod
Who is she?? Or wht is she??
Savitri Devi Singh Khurana
A woman having commanding aura she can judge a person in one glance very respectable and have high morals

Dev Rathod
Brother of geet very strict and ruthless have faced many things in his life loves his sons yet don't believe in relations

Naintara Rathod
Dev's wife A very selfish and self-centered lady only knows abt herself her color her dresses and her diet
Yash Rathod
Father of geet and dev very down to earth loves his children and live for others

Pooja Rathod
Wife of yash A lady who has done soo much for her family yet haven't gotten anything in return lives for her family

Ridhima Malik
Elder sister of geet loves her a lot and like a mother to her

Arman Malik
Husband of ridhima loves her and their children a lot a brotherly figure to geet

Pari shinghania
Vicky Rathod
Sameera Rathod
Anjali Rathod
Mohinder Rathod
Rano Rathod
Muskan Rathod

Will introduce along the story
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-Author's Intro-

Hello everyone! Its momi here I m 18 and next month r my finals for pre medical then entry test u know and hopefully I will b able to crack it although I m very busy yet this concept didn't let me in peace so I m here with u guys after reading splendid stories on maaneet giving myself a chance to write on them I m not sure if I will b able to but if u guys support me and guide I m sure I will b able to do this feel free to point out my mistakes I m not sure if it will a ss or ff depends on ur response will start it after exams
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*This story is completely my property Any resemblance with any other story is purely co-incidence though I don't think there will b any but if still u find pm me rather than creating a huge fuss over it Don't copy any thing from my story or make any pdf if u want pm me for permission *
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Intresting start!
waiting for the first part already😳


All the best for ur exams too👍🏼
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congrats! awesome prologue! lovely cs! update soon! do add me 2 ur pm list! can we have at least one update before ur exam???? all the best 4 ur exams. Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Captivating Start

Eagerly waiting for story to unfold
All the best in your exams

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awesome start!!! Interesting Character Sketch,
eagery waiting for the first part.
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intresting start.. eager to read more
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Interesting start ,
awsm concept ,
waiting for next !!!!
all the best for ur exams ,
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Awesome start
Prologue sounds interesting
Nice cs
All the best for exams

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