MG-SS||Hold on-to me||COMPLETE||part 13+epi @pg47 on 1/6|| THE END

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kindlelover

@kindlelover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#481

Nice one Really heart touching. How can a father be such a jerk. Now a days name & fame can make one do anything. I really appreciate you for bringing such a story.

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Pratima Singh

@Rocks.Dhara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#482

Amazing maneet journey... Loved this equation wala thing

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Rami

@Rami92

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Posted: 9 years ago

#483

Read n z go

Shrt cute sweet stry

Lovdd t to bits

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vidyaniru

@vidyaniru

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Posted: 9 years ago

#484

Read the entire story in one shot. Loved it. Very different and very very well written!!

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#485

Hmm maine padh liya isko

Pure SS me Geet ke hardly few dialogues hain..

but she is the girl who faced suc trauma with her ex husband

Vikram was really a man of stone heart jisko apne alawa kisi aur se koi matlab hi nahin

Finally he reaped what he sowed.. and Maan got his love after so many sacrifices to give her life..

Bas ek baat??

Why did Maan fell in love with a lady who was someone else's wife at the first ahnd..I mean jab Maan en dekha tab wo sirf Vikram ki wife thi.. how can any ethical man loce someone's wife

Other than this point-SS was good

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: Rashmi...
Hmm maine padh liya isko
Pure SS me Geet ke hardly few dialogues hain..

but she is the girl who faced suc trauma with her ex husband
Vikram was really a man of stone heart jisko apne alawa kisi aur se koi matlab hi nahin
Finally he reaped what he sowed.. and Maan got his love after so many sacrifices to give her life..
Bas ek baat??
Why did Maan fell in love with a lady who was someone else's wife at the first ahnd..I mean jab Maan en dekha tab wo sirf Vikram ki wife thi.. how can any ethical man loce someone's wife

Other than this point-SS was good

haha we already had that discussion 😆

i believe ki pyar kabhi bhi, kahin bhi, kisi se bhi ho sakta hai

actually depends on opinion;

just loving her cannot be unethical as long as he keeps his emotions in check.

and most importantly its just a story 😛😆😆

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#487

Right Pooja

We already have discussed it

But as reader I need to say na what I think about the story😛

Yes this is a fiction so everything is possible here...

We get the chance to do anything with our characters..😆

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zoyaimran21

@zoyaimran21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#488

Ur ss is amazing !! Just read in one go

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Nivedithachand

@Nivedithachand

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Posted: 9 years ago

#489

This is the first work of yours that am reading and i just loved it !!! ⭐️👏I am a firm believer that love can happen to anyone, anywhere, anytime.. but when it's unethical, one has to let go... i also think that in most cases our heart by itself doesn't recognize it as love when we know that it's wrong... it may seem unrealistic to hear.. but in my personal experience i guess that one can only have control over the actions but not the heart !! 😊 Poor Geet...She had to face sooo much because of that Vikram 😡.. i can accept that he couldn't love her as he was forced.. But how can he be inhuman to an extent that he couldn't love his baby.. leave love, how can he be sooo careless and heartless to an extent that he ended up killing it ?? 🤬 No explanation can justify his this act !!! 🤢 But God gives more than what you expect when you don't expect anything... Maan happened in Geet's life !!! If only someone can love a girl like Maan And he was also finally rewarded with Geet's reciprocation !! 😳😳 Loved your writing !! Gonna read your other completed works soon..😊 Keep writing on Maaneet !! 🤗

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

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+ 13

Posted: 9 years ago

#490

Originally posted by: Nivedithachand
This is the first work of yours that am reading and i just loved it !!! ⭐️👏I am a firm believer that love can happen to anyone, anywhere, anytime.. but when it's unethical, one has to let go... i also think that in most cases our heart by itself doesn't recognize it as love when we know that it's wrong... it may seem unrealistic to hear.. but in my personal experience i guess that one can only have control over the actions but not the heart !! 😊 Poor Geet...She had to face sooo much because of that Vikram 😡.. i can accept that he couldn't love her as he was forced.. But how can he be inhuman to an extent that he couldn't love his baby.. leave love, how can he be sooo careless and heartless to an extent that he ended up killing it ?? 🤬 No explanation can justify his this act !!! 🤢 But God gives more than what you expect when you don't expect anything... Maan happened in Geet's life !!! If only someone can love a girl like Maan And he was also finally rewarded with Geet's reciprocation !! 😳😳 Loved your writing !! Gonna read your other completed works soon..😊 Keep writing on Maaneet !! 🤗

thanks a lot dear...

ur comment suggests me like we share same line of thoughts

well i had actually dreamt the plot of this story, and that too in maaneet form only, so i wasn't sure if would be able to do justice to this... i did mostly

but think i hastened at the end... well never mind that!

yes! if only someone can love a woman like maan did to geet... but that's y its a fiction 😆

n if you go for my completed works... you wouldn't find much 😛

happy reading though!

n i don't take guarantee of what happen to people after reading my works 🤣