MG- Anmay-The Unbreakable- LAST Chapter Pg53 (30/09/2017)*NEW*

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#221

hi thanks 4 da pm n nice teaser! update soon

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Rimi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#222

Can't wait for the full update... Plz update soon..

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nadia khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#223

Lovely update geet woke up to find herself in a different surrounding maan aka anmay was admiring her geet felt she knew him maan for once scares to be caught geet felt it was maan anmay told what he does geet was lieing he knew he told to find out aisha who was also working for anmay got info that there was a spy among the girls and had a tracking device with her she told aditya who told maan who was shocked to know his geet was a spy

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nadia khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#224

Itna vaadaaa update wow so maan was numb with shock to see his geet as a spy she hasn't told abt their locations she told anmay that they save life and she didn't wanted to betray him she told abt her family being kidnapped maan felt guilty for not able to protect her if she trust him do much she risk her family do did maan he removed his mask geet was shocked but happy as maan is anmay she kissed him both confessed geet told how she got the job in his company she was having a good time with her family but then some goons barged in and kidnapped her and her family forcing her to get his location maan vowed revenge he told how his family was so happy but his parents died he was living with his sis and her fiance but one incident changed his life geet was numb but she was determined to get revenge for her maan shree was tensed as they couldn't track rakesh anmays team were worried and doubt geet but seeing anmays trust on her they decided to trust geet neel was scared for his family this ashok seems to be s sadist shree had a plan he switched on the phone they were scared the plan was to get the goons mill distract while anmay rescues geets family he reached the place rescued neel but his own man got injured he didn't wanted to lose him at any cost but finally he gave up and died

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Krupa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#225

oh...the story is getting real momentum,Is Maan will expose to Arjun?Is he will injured this time?is he will be able to save Riya?what will happen if Arjuna will know his true Identity?death of his friend is indicating any further casualty for Anmay's gang?

I am scare for safty of Anmay and praying for his victory update soon.

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Ritikanfly

@Ritikanfly

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Posted: 9 years ago

#226

happy happy holi
Superve story update
geet was forced to betry maan but she choses to by his side
arjun b phas gya
nice teaser ri jun in danger
hope anmay unhe bacha paaye
waiting for next update

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Taahir

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Achiever

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Posted: 9 years ago

#227

Suspense Teaser

Hope Riya will be fine

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ameena671

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Posted: 9 years ago

#228

Amazing teaser loved it can't wait for the update thank you for pm.

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kabslocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#229

Wonderful update. Anmay revealed himself and Geet got to know that Anmay is Maan. Maan asked her why was she cheating them. She told him about kidnapping of her family. Maan promised her to save her family. He planned a trap with the help of his group and saved her family. In this his one member of his group is shot dead. Maan is sad. Arjun's wife Riya is kidnapped.

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kashish

@kashishk

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#230

THANKS NOTE

Guyss, I am overwhelmed, for the appreciation that I am getting. Although you are a few in number but you are the true kind of readers, who give reviews that make me elated. Thank you so much for staying with me.

@Idunno: Hey, thanks for awesome comment and really deep ones. Coming to impotent, i meant that Suresh can't become a father even though he is normal sexually.

I really have read all the comments and I am thankful to those, who stays beside me always. All the comments are so damn special to me. Thank you so much and keep showing me with it guys, because sincerely it motivates me to no end. <3

This is going to be roller coaster ride and I am turning in to a Mini FF as the story and my readers demanded it, but I will not stretch it unnecessarily. If I am writing this story it is because I have a story to tell and I don't want to write just to feel the void.

This story means a lot to me, because this happens in real, the drug trafficking, the child trafficking, exploiting of girls and it pains me... It pains me that I am useless, not to any help so at least I can inspire someone to do good. I am not asking you to become Anmay, or his team because that needs much more gut, but please if you see any crime going, call the cop, inform them. If you are afraid to be in problem, call them from a phone booth but do call, your action could save someone.

BTW for new readers, Anmay is a name which means The unbreakable ;) <3

I hope I will be able to do justice to this story as it really means a lot to me, so close to my heart. And guys, let's not forget it is a fiction, I may say things that are not a reality although I do some researches but they might not be enough. So feel free to let me know.

Thank you all, as every single word means a lot to me.

I will update today, hopefully <3

You are most welcome for the PMs and those, who had not received any PM, please add me in your buddy list as kashishkPM.

Loads of love<333

Kashish