MG- Anmay-The Unbreakable- LAST Chapter Pg53 (30/09/2017)*NEW*

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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

anmay n his team is in new mission hope they will survive maan wants to tell geet about his life n geet promised that she will be with him nice part thnx 4 update

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jasika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Nice update

Waiting for next update

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Amazing part. .. complete action pack n in peak point

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

hi thanks 4 da pm, read n commented already! update soon

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Neethu Raj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Superb update. ...hope everyone in maan' s team will be safe.

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ameena671

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Amazing update loved it thank you for pm.

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payal.gupta177

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Brilliant update, edge of the seat feeling thru out the scenes.. Anmay's team is so committed as they have nothing to loose , as all of them lost someone or something precious to them.. Akash is one who updates Maan's car with all the necessary gadgets which come to use during their mission.. Everything was going smooth till the final encounter where they are asked to put the weapons down.. Wonder how Maan would rescue them and the kids before Arjun comes and leave safely..or is it Arjun who reached early? I love thrilling stories and you wrote one with such ease that every scene can be visualised in front of my eyes.. Beautifully written. Loved it.. Waiting for next..

Thanks for pm.

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love2_soma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#138

no it cant b deir end...dey will go b4 arjun reached dere...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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yoga123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#139

Nice one...thanks for the PM

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kashish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#140

Hello guys, as I always say, to be honest, this is one of the toughest story for me, I am not much into this genre writing wise as you can from my various work, so I am giving it my best go and it takes me time, thus please bear with me.

Here goes the teaser, I will give you all the next chapter as soon as it is done, I have not written a word expect this teaser, which I improvised just now.

Here goes the next chapter teaser:

"Shree how far?" Arjun asked him with anxiousness, he feared something wrong may be up

Shree controlled his thudding heart as he was hearing what was happening with Anmay, he was scared, "Sir about 20 minutes away," his tone stabilized.

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"So finally, Anmay you are here. Trapped. Do you think we are fools, enter," the blue eyes evil said as he wanted to tackled them with care.

So, what do you think guys? Leave in comments and press like button.

Loads of love<333

Kashish