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Twenty1st

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Posted: 10 years ago

OpTioNs opTIOns OPtioNS sounds better than ChOOse YoUr FF, don't it?

Well anyways hi it me again, hope your all well and doing great. OK I have a couple of ideas for my uncoming Maaneet FF but I wanted to give you the option of which story you would like to read. Seriously I don't mind writing updates for each story but since the response it quite low for my current FF, it won't be worth it as I have my deadlines also approaching unless the demand is quite high (lol). Please like or comment on which story you would like to read. Thanks.

Here it goes, I have added the intro for each story:

My corner: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/125465902

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Twenty1st

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1. Dadi's Bride

'Maan will marry my bride, haina Maan' shouted Anita

'No ways, Maan will marry the girl I chose for him' countered Raj

'For goodness sake can you two just stop, Maan come and sit next to me. Now tell me do you like someone' Dadi encouraged Maan to voice his own thoughts. If it was up to his parents, he would end up marrying a stubborn cow or a haughty monkey, dadi thought sadly. She wanted a boisterous, happy and jovial girl who spread the light to all corners of their mansion. Someone full of life and colour, someone who could teach her stuck-up family what life was all about.

'No' he answered in a dejected tone, he was only 25. An age for fun and glamour not marriage, life was so unfair. He neither wanted to marry the arrogant Pari Singhania his fathers business associate's daughter nor the flamboyant Sameera Khanna his mothers fashion line model. He wanted to be a free bird, yes the girls were nice even pretty but he was no man to be tied down to one female. He was a man of leisure who needed several females. Late night outs, partying and girls were Maan's habits or nature, think of it what you may. So the best way out of this was.

'I like dadi's choice' he shot thinking of it as the perfect excuse. Dadi possibly can't have a girl in her mind as well, now can she? Will she take advantage of this situation and force Maan into marriage or will she let him live his life, or partying shall we say? Which bride would win the race to Maan's heart, his dad's; mother's or dadi's? Who should win? Who would loose?

Choose me to find out which bride will be Maan's Bride.

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Twenty1st

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Posted: 10 years ago

2. Wispering Fate

Darji thinks my face tells a story

Mama told me my body sings its own language

Papa says my eyes are like an open book shouting out my feelings

and Brij veerji can hear my smile

But then why can't he hear my unsaid words, can he not read the hurt in my eyes or see my withering shape. Is he ignorant to my vanished smile or my story telling face.

Can he not feel my pain?

I'm I dumb or is he deaf.

Who is he and why can't he hear her.

Choose me to find out whether if he is deaf or he's just playing deaf.

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Twenty1st

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3. Crowded Marriage

This story resolves around 3 individuals, 3 very different people.

A man, his love and his obligation.

There is a husband whose married to one but loves another.

A married women who's continuing her affair with her first love

And a wife who knows her husband loves a women other than her

What happens is this marriage? What happens when 3 people are involved instead of 2? What happens in a crowded marriage?

Maybe both you and I will get our answers through this Maaneet Fiction.

Choose me to find out whether a marriage of 3 would ever work.

Princess Diana's exact words:

"Well, there were three of us in this marriage, so it was a bit crowded."

This FF would be different, I don't know how many of you are aware of Princess Diana but this FF is influenced by her story. She was just another female living in the same agony as every other women, with an infidel husband. She however was no normal girl, she was an Princess, Princess of Wales. Sadly she died in 1997, aged 36 in an awful car crash, there are speculation that this was a murder but nothing solid has been found yet. I was really young when she died however I always was fascinated by her beauty both inner and outer and then by her story. I will use quotes by her, her husband Prince Charles and the other women Camilla.

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Twenty1st

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Posted: 10 years ago

So there it is, all three stories which I want to share. Now its up to you which one you want to hear, so please like and comment on the story you find most intriguing.

I will start the winning FF after my EXAMS, just bored and anyways this way I will know which FF to upload after a month. Spoorthi no still revising but I come here whenever I've had enough of stuffs and stats.

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EllenaStarlet

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Posted: 10 years ago

Great concepts 👏

Dadi's Bride

Crowded Marriage would love to read ❤️ first

Whispering fate is also nice

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LM1991

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Posted: 10 years ago

I would love to read Dadi's bride.

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Akku

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Posted: 10 years ago

all 3 are nice concept but I would like to read- dadi's bride & crowded marriage as both are different than others... so waiting to read😊

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Hemlata

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hmmm ... I would like to read 1st & 2nd one... Third can wait for sometime ... O:-)O:-)O:-)

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samidsamid

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Posted: 10 years ago

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i wl love to read...dadis bride...1st...hahehehe nice concept...aftr that u can continue...2nnd story thm 3rd...wnk wink...jus kidding...1st want to read dadis bride ...looved d coonccept...

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