MG-SS~The Bliss~Thread-2~ UPDATED Pt 20 / Pg 129 / 11th Apr......... - Page 39

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Posted: 10 years ago




The Bliss



( For Banner credit goes to my dear Priya )


The simple things of life can be blissful, if you can take the time to enjoy it. There is love in the air, everywhere... you just need to feel it, embrace and enjoy all that life has to offer.

Every moment that is enjoyed, treasured and relished is a store house of memories, that you can draw out, enjoy and smile with love. It is bliss..


Oh sweet bliss how did you find me in the dark with all my troubles

collecting like copper pennies in a fountain,
under pain concrete form,
a flower breaks
through the crack of my once solid shell.

Stay with me bliss ,
never leave me again,
for my need is great and my patience is plentiful.
Oh lessons I need not learn again,
forget where I have been.

Let me walk in the sweet embrace of a Sunday's morn
and not forget it tender kiss of compassion
for God had granted me another day with you.
Hold me in the arms of your unfolding grace
and we will put back all the fallen stars in the sky...


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Note..

This a fiction , all incident , medical terms , professional terms nd places r imaginary ,, plzz don't relate them with reality .


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Part - 13


Part - 14

Geet became lil late for hostle ,, Dadima sent her back in her car nd she said many sorry to her hostel incharge ,, she was in her room nd thinking about Maan nd his work which she read in his laptop ,, she wanted to read that more but she cn stay there for night nd without DM's permission ,, d matter of lappy was indicating that that pen drive was related to Maan but how he lost that nd didn't try go get back ,, how it was there from so long ,, how she asked about it from Maan ,, it was risky to ask him ,, he won't co-operate with her nd DM already requested her not to talk him regarding his research .

She was restless nd pacing in her room thinking how to make Maan ready to talk her ,, he had deep knowledge nd cd help her in her work ,, asking him to help her on this topic was calling death for her ,, she left a deep sigh nd started her study cursing Dr Dev Mahajan under her breath for finding mistakes after mistakes in her work .

There in KC Maan had his meal quietly ,, Geet's fragrance was spreading there around him nd forcing him to think about her ,, he tried to think something diff bur after few min again her thoughts came in his mind ,, if he closed his eyes he felt her presence near him ,, he jerk opened his eyes nd groaned in anger ,, cribbed inwardly ... why d hell she was enduring in his mind . d more he wanted to avoid her thoughts d more she was troubling him ,, at last he forcibly closed his eyes to sleep but she was there in his thoughts ,, her words wr ringing in his ear ,, it was she in which eyes he didn't see any pity for him ,, she always provoked him nd fought back ... Akdoo hei ,, etni insult kerta hu fir bhi bura nahi manti aur samile deker mujhe tease kerti hei ,, jiddi kahin ki ,, sach mei monster hei ,, a smile crept on his lips .

He didn't know when he went in deep slumber thinking about her ,, he wake up with a soft cold touch on his forehead ,, he opened his eyes nd find his Dad there ,, worried , which pained his heart .

Maan: Dad aap ? Aap kab aaye ?

Yash: abhi ,, Maa called me ystrdy ,, why u did that beta ,, it hurt us .

Maan: i'm helpless dad ,, mujhse bardast nahi hota .

Yash: think about us beta .

Maan : i'm thinking about all of u , u all r in pain bcoz of me ,, that's why I don't want to live .

Yash: Maan ,, plzz , stop thinking like this ,, u r in front of me ,, talking to me nd this is enough for me baccha .

Maan : nd what about me ,, do u have any idea what i'm bearing ,, aawww,, Dad plzzz ,, this life is curse for me nd for all .

Yash: beta u r under treatment ,, there r many cases who recovered after many yrs ,, we have hopes nd i'll fight till my last breath ,, I want ur will power not disappointment .

Maan: I don't have that ,, I have lost everything ,, don't waste ur time nd money on me .

Yash : Maan ,, plzz , in this way u r hurting us not u .

Again same arguments from both sides ,, Maan became mum nd didn't reply ,, yash sat near him for few more min nd came back to DM ,, they talked for long nd DM told him about Geet ,, how she made him eat again .

Yash: it seems that girl had some attitude like Maan nd gave good fight to him .

DM: huummm ,, she was as stubborn as he ,, u didn't see their fight ,, Maan told her many bad words but she never felt bad .

Yash: she understood his state of mind , she is a Dr nd knew how to handle him?

DM: hummm .

They talked about Veer nd Nandini ,, about his trip nd business ,, then Yash left for taking some rest nd DM in kitchen for instructing BF.

Geet went to college nd trying to ask about Natrajan from d lab assistant of her lab , but he was new nd didn't know about him ,, there wr many labs nd assistance in every lab ,, she went to other lab nd asked there but got nothing ,, in lunch time she saw quiet matured lady employee .. a sweeper of that area nd thought to ask her .

Geet: amma ,, it seems that u r working here from many yrs ,, I want to know about lab assit Natrajan , do u know something about him ?

Sweeper was an old employee of college nd knew max of d profs nd employees of college who work there from long term ,, some left nd went to other dept .

Sweeper : Natrajan ,, yes, he is , but I don't know where is he now , may be he had transferred at other place ,, I saw him many times entering in hsptl in d mrng.

Geet: at what time amma .

Sweeper : near 9-10 am.

Geet didn't know his face then how she got him at gate ,, it was like searching a needle in d heap of husk ,, there wr thousands of ppl came from d main gate nd went here nd there ,, how she recognized him ,,her face fell .

Geet: amma, I never see Natrajan before nd only know his name , how I'll be able to recognize him ?

Sweeper : now , how cn I help u ?( she thought for few sec) there is one thing to recognize him ,, his scooter cover from back has photo of Sai baba ,, a white line-line photo .

Geet: Saibaba's photo ?

Sweeper: yes , I don't know anything more to help u , I saw that from back so telling u .

Geet: thanku so much amma for this help , i'll try to get that .

Geet went to her lab nd got busy for d rest of day ,, she skipped her lunch to know about Nattu ,, at afternoon when she was going to hostel she called DM nd asked about her nd Maan ,, she was quiet relieved nd said that Maan took his meals ,, Adi removed his drip nd Yash was here for few days ,, she too felt relieved ,, after few light talks she cut d call . her main task was for next day was searching Natrajan nd for that she had to watch near main gate to check d ppl.

Geet : Babaji !!! plzz help me .

That night passed nd next day was tough for Geet ,, she got ready nd went to main gate,, there wr two gates .. 1 for in coming nd other for outgoing ,, at in coming gate she search a place where she cd sit nd watch clearly ,, half an hr passed but no +ive result ,, she cn't even divert her eyes other side ,, what if she missed few vehicles ,, hr passed nd it was near 10 am ,, she skipped one hr of her study ,, feeling disappointed ,, it was hard to get a person when ppl wr rushing in at peak time of college nd hospital ,, her heart saddened for not getting any success ,, she cn't stay there any more nd thought to come next day again , but every coming scooter raised her hope nd fixed her feet .


Precap --- Geet's search cont ...

Part - 15



some tech terms cn be wrong as i don't have deep knowledge about them , so plzz avoid ... Thank u


sorry for mistakes ...
My dear friends ,, planning to start a very small SS on GHSP Anni ,, a small nd light rom-com...






Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi Babbie
hand is still hurting so on/off hu

how r u😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi babbie
how r u ?

waiting for ur updates ..

aaj baakki log kahan gaye ..


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

hi Babbie

hand is still hurting so on/off hu

how r u😃

hi avi
what happen to ur hand ??

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Posted: 10 years ago
Ha ha ha...
Maan again lost :P
Geet u r genius ;)
Their arguments were superb :P
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Posted: 10 years ago



😃 Updated ...pg ...64


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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan is getting affected by Geet.
He thinks of her all d time.
Geet wants to know abt natrajan.
She is finding it difficult to find him but didn't loose hope.
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Posted: 10 years ago
It's very nice part. Geet wants to ask maan about that research but couldn't able to do that as his anger always remain on his nose. Yash is back and pleading Maan to take of himself. Geet is finding about b
Natraj. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice ..update..
Geet all set for search..
Here Maan full of geet thoughts...
Waiting for interesting turn...
What asst. has say?..
waiting for nxt...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
waiting for next update

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