(new thread added)MY INNOCENT SURRENDER-2 #2 Updated P 12 on P-131

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fariya20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#671

Originally posted by: fariya20
maan is behinde all this 😲 😲 😲 😲
oyeee ab kiya hoga

and note kon curse kiya rey
dark story chaley gi but geet chi moi nahi chiye please ha request 😉

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#672

Finally the truth is out.. Naintara hv admit her doing under maan instructions n when dev question maan he admit without any guilt... Geet hatred hv increase more after the truth... Don't know hv geet going to save her self fm the devil.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#673

hi read ur note! Pls continue 2 pm me! Thanks

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 10 years ago

#674

waiting for next update hope i am in list

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chavvi16

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Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#675

so maan is gonna be scary
oh dear
hope not too much violence and no sexual assault please
hope not
rest would be okay

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DreamyMadhu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#676

I love this ff. u pls Cont. , waiting for next
update.

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vrinda22

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Posted: 10 years ago

#677

np..i like this grey shade maan..

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sssppp560

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Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#678

U r a good writer...positive and negative comments will come..as a writer u have to take criticism in a positive way and leave those negative comments...but if u keep on warning readers...they may like and give a comment just for the story...and they may not appreciate your real work...

To all Writers...

every body giving warning and shifting to blogs ...its your story...you shift...but why warn readers...What would be the situation if you dont give update and readers will give warning that they may lose interest and leave your story...i know there are may silent readers.. who does not want to comment, leave them..if you dont want to share your story with silent readers you shift..but dont give warning like i need these many comments ...these may likes...readers will comment only if the story is upto mark...if u did not get enough comments it means you have to improve thats it...

This is my personal opinion and not to criticize or hurt any body

Edited by sssppp560 - 10 years ago

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singh24

@singh24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#679

friend

😊 don't take d comments on heart dear...

it's u who decide d matter not others ,, u cnt write according to other choice or commands ,, this is ur story nd write it like u want ,, we love it dear nd enjoying ... carry on ...

Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago