(new thread added)MY INNOCENT SURRENDER-2 #2 Updated P 12 on P-131

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Vidhi24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#631

Update 8 was so relieving, finally maan got married to geet, naina i thought was villan here but you made my maan not fair yaar, but any ways too good
Update 9 shock laga maan ki soch ko dekhke, I just hope everything goes well, and tiny miny hope that maan isnt that bad here, haina?
Finally my like button worked, update ke bare mein kya kahoon was good and ok too, yaar apne toh maan ko story ka villan bana diya, dev is so nice here as a brother yaar I actually liked him, bas geet aur maan mein sab thik ho I hope...
Thanks for the update...

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#632

IMPORTANT NOTE

Guys i read all the comments on last two updates. I know it was a shocking update for you and you weren't able to digest.

Well guys MY INNOCENT SURRENDER 2 is a Dark Story. A complete Dark Story.

In this kind of fictions Heroes are like this only, means more then grey.

So ye sabne laga rakha hai ki maine maan ko VILLAIN bana diya hai or Dev ko zada achha dikhaya, To sorry i cant help it. Dark Story ka Hero aisa hi hota hai even more worst.

Some are guessing that there is some hidden secret and that's why he did all this then I am extremely disappointed from those readers coz you don't read carefully. I clearly showed Maan's intention still you guys not getting it then its not my fault.

Anyways I did a grave mistake of not shifting it to blog. Because MIS is not for sensitive readers. From next update MIS will be shifted to blog and I am only going to share with those who are loyal+interested in this FF.

I don't mind sharing it with even only 10 readers. But those 10 readers who loved it and are giving me proper feed back rather then cursing me.

I read all comments so I know k mujhe kiske sath share karni hai kiske sath nahi... coz story will getting more darker in further updates. I don't think all are ready for that. So guys pls feel free to leave reading MIS.

Thank you all. Meri bakwas ab khatam hoti hai. Thanks for reading. 😊

Edited by richa_kapoor - 10 years ago

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spicyartist

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Posted: 10 years ago

#633

Omgeh maan to baht fast nikla

I was thinking geet to maan ki hi hai to ye dev kahan se agaya

But still i want read more mysterious maan

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nat10

@nat10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#634

Awesome update.

Finally dev got to know the truth.

Maan has no regret of his act and there must be some reason why he did so.

Waiting to see how MSK to make geet fall in love wz him.

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CHERUKURI9

@CHERUKURI9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#635

Nice update. Waiting to see how geet fall for maan.

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@Endgame

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#636

i dont have any prob with the story really waiting to read more

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momi

@-BreakingDown-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#637

Originally posted by: Dragon-Heart
Maine show kiya Cut Dev k hath pe hai but it doesnt means k Maan k hath pe nahi tha... Har cheez pehle se clear hoti to shock kaise lagta 😈

yeah thts why mera maan pe dhian nae gaya tha kyunke cut dev ke hath pe tha anyways its interesting i just want geet to hate him to the core not become weak for his touch etc

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samidsamid

@samidsamid

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Posted: 10 years ago

#638

awsm,, updt..finally all tuth is oout...dev knws when maan wantss smthing he getss it...so f bttmnt of geeet hhe leave...ofcurse we maneetiians want that only...Geet ios disgust of maan...bt she gt scard also...and maanss dark side is f stryy..and its fition...so thr is no prob fr such chharrater...m looving the story pace...updt soon...