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Posted: 10 years ago
omg didnt think maan woud act so selfishly and why is he so cruel and rough with geet. too possessive of him. super awesome update...waiting to se how geet reacts to him and his demands...what will poor dev do now..guess he really did love geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow want great part so Mann got geet I knew Mann was behind dev kidnapped so he could get his possession which he did and made clear to geet to except the marriages his in love with her and want her at any cost and geet uncle can't do anything to help his daughter in this because of society and Dev wake up hearing his brother name is shocked to the core and more geet so upset by all this marriage and dev betryal and Mann
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART - 10



DEV overheard the conversation between them who made him captive here. He was in shock but there are sevral question start striking him. First she was taking his brother's name in the involvement of his kidnapping,which his heart not ready to accept. But another question is if Maan is not involved then how he will he caged in his own warehouse. Somewhere that facts are linked to each other. Dev know this warehouse very well and aware about all exit points. Main door was covered by goon so carefully,without making a noise proceed towards back door.


Naintara instruct both and come out. She sat in her car to move on,but found Dev already there in her car. He coverd her mouth quickly so she dont able to alert the goons. "move or else i kill you." Dev instructs her and she start the car. When he assured they were far from their reach he commands her to stop and snatch her phone also. Dev checked and found Maan's no there. He asked. "now common tell me the truth and only truth." he glared her,gritted his teeth which scared her.


"it was all Maan's plan to snatch Geet from you." she said briskly and Dev shocked. He still not able to believe. His stunned face is enough to show his turmoil. "i know you wont believe,but your brother Maan Singh Khurana is the only master mind behind all this. He want Geet so he used me to parted you from her. He instruct me to call you on marriage day so in your absence he would able to marry Geet." She added. Dev's head start spinning.


"you are lying. Why he do all this?" He was in shock.


"because your brother is obsessed for Geet. I saw that raw lust in his eyes when he talked about her. Dev two year ago i made a plan to trap you. So i plant a fake target which was killed by you in accident. You thought you killed someone and same time my partner made a video of that incident. Through my partner i start blackmailing you,but Maan came to know about this,even without told by you. He caught me and my partner. Due to his fear i leave the city and handovered all the proofs to him. He saved you from us. But when he got to know that you and Geet are in love,he cant bear that. In front of you guys he agreed but behind your back he was actually planning to seprate you from her. All videos are saved by him. So he called me again to use those tapes against you. And like we predict you scared again and trapped by us easily. Dev wo accident nakli tha. The person you thought you killed is still alive. You never murdered any one." Naintara revealed the whole truth before him.


Dev got the biggest shock of his life. He know how insane Maan is but never thought that he stoop so low and snatch his own sibbling's love. His body stiffened eyes turned stoned. The person he trust most ruined him completely.

In KM


Maan went to his room and found Geet sleeping on a floor,resting her head on the edge line of his bed. He sat near her. His eyes darkned and raking on her body. He stretch his arm to touch her. His fingers curled into a half open fist and he caressed her cheek with his knuckles. Sensing his touch Geet awaked and scared seeing her holder so near. She slipped backward in a pace to rosed the distance between them. Maan fists hard. Her rejection of his touch towered his anger. She is his captive how can she dared to denied him. This marriage give all hold of her to him then how can he rejcts his touch. Before he shout or show her,what mistake she had done,a knock sound on their door distract him.


Servant came inside and inform him about the arrival of priest. "Get ready fast. There is a tradition of our family,for a newly wed couple. Only after this pooja we able to lead our married life. I am waiting for you. Only 5 mins you have." He commands and threat her together. Maan glared her beafore banging the door behind. The loud noise of shutting shaked her soul even. His dominance indeed start scaring her. Already she was in a shock and moreover Maan's authoritive nature trembled her in fear.


Her belongings were there. Maid already set up wardorbe for her. She took her outfit and went inside the washroom to change.geet splashed water on her swell eyes,result of crying continously. She came here in masion as a bride but her heart not ready to accept her fate which push her in hell. She fresh n up and came outside. Here Maan get impatient and came up again to call her. Geet come out of heavy bridal attaire and looks more nubile after taking a bath. His desires making mess in his mind. His arms craving to engulf her. His whole body need to esplore her in detail and his harnened shaft playing with his patience. He went behind her and tagged his body with her. Their proxcimity shaken her. He hold the strings of her blouse,she was struggling. His fingers deliberately roaming over her back. Geet turned and moved away.




"i will do it myself." once again she denied his touch and proxcimity. Maan clenched her forearm and commands to get dowm with him.


Geet quickly set up her clothes and went down with him. Both sat near havan kund and their family priest start the rituals. Geet doing everything mechanically. No emotions were there at all.


Pooja is going on when Dev enters with Naintara in KM. Seeing him in front of her eyes Geet couldn't able to hold herself back and trying to stood up but cant,because Maan gripped her wrist firmly.


Seeing Dev his forehead squeezed and eyes turn red with anger. He shot glares to Naintara. "chhod deejiye use." dev roared but no use. Maan ignored every sound.


Geet felt pain because of his bone crushing grip. She wincing still he not ready to leave her. Dev moved towards them but Maan signaled him to stay there only. When priest declred about completionf of all rituals both stood up and she managed to escaped to Dev. Though she was still angry on him but still she want answers. So she just ran to him and asked why he betrayed her. She was hitting him in anger but her tears told him how much she suffer in just few hours. Dev hold her. "Geet i never betrayed you. It wasn't me. It was him who played with us." Dev told whole truth to her. He even showed Naintara's mobile to prove his point. The call history itself telling his side story. Plus Dev's wouds and marks of rope on his hands confirmed his story that he was not lying.

Dev moved towards Maan and stare directly in his eyes. "why bro? Why? Sirf ek baar keh k to dekhte,main khud bech se hatt jata. You dont had a need to stoop this low. You even forgot in your madness that i am your own sibbling."


Maan was fuming. He cant take his words and snap back. "i did which i felt was right. I told you once when i want somthing i have that thing. No matter how i get that." Maan snap back. He had no regrts on his deeds.


"but Geet koi cheez nahi hai. She is my love." Dev offends.


His words made him angry and he hit Dev. "dont you dare said this again. She is mine,only mine." Maan's eyes shot at him.


"hath main b utha sakta hu. Par main abhi tak ye nahi bhula hu ki aap mere bade bhai hai."



"just get out of my house and never show your face again." Maan dont want him to stay Dev here with them.


"dont worry,apke sath ab rehna b kon chahta. But one day you will regret badly." Dev remarked and start moving. Both's eyes met and he silently asked sorry from Geet,before leaving the KM.


He know if he took any action Maan will hurt more to Geet. This time she was his legally wedded wife and no one can ready to go against him. Mercilessily he crushed their love.


Geet's hatred towards Maan was increased more then before. "dont know why but my heart always hates you and know you proved me right. You are a monstor who dont even spare his own brother." Geet said hoarsly. Her eyes spitting fire,carried only one feeling: hate for the man standing infront of her.



Her words pierced him and he fists her hairs strongly.



"i dont care what you feel about me. I just want you and make one thing very clear in your mind you are mine and only mine. So dont force me to force you. Better you accept me with your wish or else i dont mind claming you without your will." He said each and every words with a stress to scared her to death he told her about his intentions and the hell in which she already fell.





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Posted: 10 years ago
me 1st..😃

dev is super smart.. already started to link together and using his brains.. not doubting illogically..
oopss.. naintara is such a lier.. (or she is not?😲) maan did all these??😲 can't believe it...
geet is so scared of angry young khadus Maan.. and maan is also behaving weirdly..
whattt.. maan throws dev out of the house.. howw arrogant😡
geet is also v angry,... how will she fall for her actual husband??
waiting for more..😃 and also for LFR2😊
Edited by mauaa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nt is being a trump card to hide dev
maan used her well
dev is shocked n he told the truth to geet
her hatred for maan increases
but maan is clear in his intensions
he is so obsessed to claim her
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
maan behinde all this
why he did this very bad he destorye geet life

just fo his obsesion for geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh boy
This is bad
He will hurt her
Maan what's wrong with you
You did this to your brother to get her
But like dev said had you told him he would have gone away
Yeah right
What is geet some toy
If not one brother then another
This is getting scary
So now they all know about him
So to have her he will force her
Is he crazy
What am I saying
Of course he is crazy
Maan don't do this
Or like dev said you will regret it later
This could destroy you
Like it has destroyed geet
What now
So nt had him trapped like that
But maan saved him that time
Lekin geet me junoon mein unhone apne bhai ko bhi nahin chodda
Dude by forcing her she will never really be yours
It will make things worse
Which they only have gotten worse
Oh boy now what will he do
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finallly dev got to know its maans plan
seen his brother devilness towards him
geet is scared abt his intentions
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part
Maan behind all this
Dev left home
How is geet going to live with maan...waiting to know
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Posted: 10 years ago
dev come to know the truth... he came to know what maan has done to him to claim geet... geet is scared of maan and his intentions...just his obsession for geet has made him to stoop so low...

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