MG SS Allured!! #1

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zida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

awmzing start next part soon

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 12

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

I know I probably shouldn't even read anything when I leave half way but the prologue is captivating and honestly intrigued me that I couldn't help myself from reading.

So brilliant start to this SS. ⭐️

Quite different to Milestone, (I will catch up with that during one of the weekends 😆 )

Love the way you've written their characters, the little glimpse to MG was definitely interesting, it was what kept me reading.

I loved these lines the most though. It reminded me so much of the story of one of my favourite couples from a book I'd completed re-reading recently.

He was her protector and she was a prey!

He had vowed to keep her safe

But she chose to be destroyed!

He was bewitched by attraction and she surrendered to her love!

Both were Allured!!

One by lust and the other by love ... And the tale unfolded!

Best of luck for the renovation.

Will wait for a new update. 😳

Take ur time, I dont mind at all. 😉

Edited by Jannat-Fictions - 10 years ago

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

awesome n interesting prologue...

loved it very much...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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mlaran852

@mlaran852

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

the story is very interesting... waiting for more!!!

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metromasti

@metromasti

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Congrats for new story Heytal 😊
concept is very interesting...
awesome prologue
waiting for update 😉

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Awesome prologue something new and loving the start

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alekhika

@alekhika20

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Congrats on new ss.
Asum prologue, loved the concept.
Waiting 4 updts.

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Preethi

@GeetMeet

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Hey nice that you have started a new story I am eager to read it

prologue Is nice waiting for update dear

And Pls PM me

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Alamelu

@Alamelu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Hi looking forward to another brilliant piece of writing from you.

very different and interesting start...maan is her savior, is it even from himself! and geet is she the one to break his bad habits...will he be saved by her and vice versa...

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nishamna

@nishamna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

It's amazing dear. Geet was running away from some people who were behind her with some dangerous purpose. N finally she entered in her seviour's premises. Maan was shocked seeing a girl hiding in washroom. n when he saw her , he just blown away with his beauty. I am eagerly waiting for next dear

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