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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally Geet is feeling for Mann
Please continue
All your updates r great.
Love to read more of your story line.
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Chapter 11


Chiara is a godsend woman. Her problem with clothes, or lack of it for the outing was easily sorted by her. She sent someone to town with measurements and brought two pair of trousers and some tunics. After pairing a sunlight yellow tunic with off white shorts and a long Victorian type hat borrowed from chiara, Geet waited for Maan. Her issues with Maan wont prevent her from sightseeing. The slight footsteps made her turn and her breath hitched in throat. Minute by minute his sexiness only grew. Brown casual cotton shirt teamed up with faded blue jeans, he looked arrogant. His hair was spiked with gel, but his eyes were touching each part of her body making her shiver with awareness. Oh god! he should be banned from the world for his sex appeal. Suddenly yesterdays moments flashed in her mind, which made her get back to control.

Buongiorno Mr. Khurrana (Good morning)

Buongiorno tesoro mio. So are we again back to formal?

Oh yea.. after all we share only professional relationship Mr. Khurrana

So
mia principessa is angry!(my princess)

Oh no. I m not. Can we start for the day? I don't want to miss anything.

Geet started to move forwards, but before she could take a step, she was hauled against a scented hard chest, unfortunately which was covered.

What are you doing?

She started to hit his chest to leave her, but maan's hold only tightened.

You wild cat. Stop fighting.

First you leave me Mr. khurrana. I m not anyone's property to be treated like the way you want.

Geet please stop. Here I m trying to apologize.

She stopped protesting and stared at him unbelievingly.

I m not good at this. But I know what I did yesterday was wrong. I shouldn't have shouted at you. I m sorry. Scusa bella mia.(sorry)

Geet could say that he was not at all good at this. His eyes were looking at her expectantly and earnestly. Somewhere it touched her heart. He looked so lost.

Apology accepted

His smile was so sincere and wide that she felt herself smiling. He kissed her cheeks making it waver. She dint realize her acceptance meant so much to the great MSK.

Thanku so much mio piccolo.

The sudden hug made her aware of other things like how much their bodies were plastered and how much his stroking fingers on her waist were making her tingle.

Okay.. I think we should better get going.

Yeah.. come.. I will show you some of my favorite parts of Tuscany.


We are going by cycling?

Nope. Biking Geet. Cycling through these beautiful countryside, breathing fresh air and enjoying the scenes are kind of workout too. Trust me. You will enjoy it.

Geet felt like a tourist wearing the helmet and other cycling gears. But she enjoyed it. Its totally different from rest of the things she usually did like paragliding, surfing.. First they took steep pathways through the wine estates including Hilly Montalcino. They stopped at some places enjoying the spectacular views. On their way they had light breakfast at a local store. She felt like they are two normal people, Maan and Geet, enjoying their holiday without the burden of their wealth. People only spoke Italian and Maan as a perfect guide translated their talks.

They were really enjoying the trip when she spotted a terrifying scene. A man was beating a woman with stick. Her clothes are filled with blood and people around them were standing doing nothing. Without waiting for Maan, she parked the bicycle and headed towards the place.

Si cagna! mi stai negando denaro! come ti permetti!(
You bitch! you're denying money! how dare you!)

No.. Ionon vi dari soldi. ho bisognoper il mio bambino(No i wont give you. I want this for my baby)

donna svergognata(shameless woman)

Geet marched towards them and pushed the man away.

How dare you treat her like that?

chi sei?(who are you?)

From the foul smell Geet understood that the man was drunk. But she couldn't understand what he was saying. She looked around for Maan, but he was nowhere to be seen. She helped the woman to get up but the man was again hauling the stick at her. She caught his hand and pushed him causing him to stumble on the ground. The woman was covering behind her. Suddenly a woman ran towards her and tugged her.

Dont interfere madam. He is dangerous.

But why you people are not interfering. He will beat her to death.

He is a gangster. He always beats his wife and demands money. If anyone interferes he will beat them too.

She looked disgustedly at the rest of the men watching the scene. How ridiculous. Suddenly the woman beside her shrieked . the man was advancing towards her with a knife. Fury erupted inside her and then in the name of god she kicked him with her boots at his shin and slapped him hard. A cry of agony erupted from him and he fell hard. But she hasn't finished with him yet. She again kicked hard and beat him with stick.

Tesoro mio. Stop it. What are you doing?

Where were you? Or were you enjoying the show like these idiots!

Geet.. Geet.. Calm down.

She took a deep breathe and turned towards man. Police were arresting him and after dumbing him to the van, they nodded at Maan and went.

Again i m sorry for leaving you like that. But I went to inform police because i recognized him as a gangster. The bodyguard was there to protect you, but i have instructed him not to interfere unless its necessary. But i dint expect you to react so hard. Seems like he wont stand in his feet for the rest of his life.

Geet shrugged her shoulders and went towards the woman.

Dont let anyone harm you. You should not fear anyone. If they smell your fear they will take advantage of it and torture you. Fight hard and believe in yourself. You are the one woman army. Maan.. Pls translate this. I will check our bikes.


The woman thanked you for your help.

I hope she help herself in future.

Are you angry Geet?

Ofcourse yes. How could I not be! Still seeing most of the woman not fighting for themselves and behaving like slaves are too hard to digest in this century. They are not even trying it.

Hmm.. Their circumstances and how they were brought up has a lot to say. If they were provided with enough education, then they would have gained confidence to fight. We can only hope and help Geet. Rest is in their hands. Anyways do you want to go back since your mood is a little bit off.

Nope. I dont want some sick bas***d to ruin my outing. Whats next?

She sensed admiration in his eyes, but may be she imagined it because now he was frowning.

We will now visit Fosdinovo castle but after lunch.


After having lunch lavishly at a nearby restaurant they set out to explore Fosdinovo castle. The Castle dint lose its charm or beauty even if it was built on 12th century. It was said that no damage happened to castle even after an earthquake. The structure and cravings on the walls are even more beautiful. Its said that one can lose their way inside if there is no proper guide.

There is a forbidden Love story behind this one.

Forbidden love story?

Noble Malaspina family lived here for centuries. A beautiful girl, Bianca Maria Aloisia, fell in love with a handsome young stable man. But their romantic secret meetings came to a halt when her father arranged her marriage to someone else. She begged her father not to do so but he sent her away to a convent to repent her deeds. But there too she met her lover and fell pregnant with his child. She caused disgrace to family. The youngman was brutally murdered in a cruel way and she was thrown into dark dungeons twisting and breaking her limbs. Then they buried her alive by building the walls with bricks and mortar.
She was left to die with two animals; a wild boar to represent her rebellion against her family's honour and a dog to symbolise her loyalty to her true love.

Maan looked at her eyes which were filled with tears.

How could they do this their own daughter?

He looked at her as she wiped her tears. Is this the same woman who beat that drunkard to death? She is fiery like wildfire and compassionate like a mother. How many more face this woman have? This woman intrigued him day by day. When he was trying hard to deny his feelings, he dint realize his geet has already made a special place in his life. He has never met anyone like her in his life. And here she was given to him in a silver platter by his parents, which he cruelly ignore. He judged her badly even before he met. No wonder she wants out from this relation.

Maan gazed at her ethereal form in the dim sunlight. He watched the way the breeze ruffled her dark silken hair like a golden flag. How can he ignore his feelings for such a beautiful and loving woman? He thought by admitting his feeling is some sort of weakness. But by not admitting it, if he is going to lose this woman, then No.. he is going to win her heart by hook or by crook. Ms. Geet Handa, wherever you go, I will chase you my love. Lets Bring It On once again.




Note: Once again sorry for the lateness. I was hospitalized due to viral fever. Amidst this, thankyou for the support you showed through likes and comments. I will be wrapping up the story soon, if the forum is to be closed. Thanku once again. Happy Easter to All.


Edited by Remya_Pillai - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update di
take care :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update
Geet is such a strong willed woman in this story
Finally maan accepted his feelings towards her
Now he gonna get her fall for him by hook or crook
What he donno is she already fall for him but afraid to get rejected and ignored
The story of that princess is so touching
Continue soon
Edited by Angeline124 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update
waiting for next update
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dhakdhak badh rahi hai
magar chupke chupke

lovely story of castle

Geet shows the depth of her character

Maan realises it is not just a fleeting thing

awesome

enjoyed it very much

thanks for updating

feel better Cara🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
FIRST YOU TAKE CARE O' YOUR HEALTH, SAMJHI???
We can w8 4 updatez till eternity. We won' have all writers falling sick one byone due to their own careless behaviour. First tis sonia, then you. Apni health par ye jua mat khela karo.

Khud apna khyaal rakhna seekho. Tabhi to hum sab readers khush reh sakte hai, right?? Writers are our permanent entertainment zones. Tum logo ko kuch ho gaya to humara kya hoga?

Anyway, forum closure nai hone wala. Tis was jus' a lil' bit cruel april fools' prank. Bas limit se zyada bada ho gaya thaa. That's it.

And update was lovely. At least now maan ko uski galti samajh mei aa gayi. He ought to be ashamed o' himself. Bina mehnat ke achi larki mil gayi, to uski kadar nai karte hai ladke. but still, maan ko akal to aa gayi.

Entire part was mama mia! W8ing for next, pls update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update superb loved
geet n her reaction to that drunken man
so finally maan realise his feeling
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Posted: 10 years ago
maan maan hi liya ki usse pyar hogaya...

lovely update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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