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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shining_moon

hey frnds

firstly I hv an update ready, but it is smaller than usual...I had planned certain things which didn't came out good. So, I had to change it and it took a lot of time. so, I wanted to ask if u r okay with it?

I'll be out of station till 10 march, so u'll get the next part after 10th only.

if u want me to update the whole thing, it'll be only after my comeback...so chioce is urs...

love

anupam



okii di
we will wait 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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chapter-85



It was around 8 in the morning and the love birds were sleeping cosily with maan spooning geet and his hand wrapped around her waist. His face was buried in her hair while she had a soft serene smile on her face. They would have continued sleeping but a sudden shrill sound disturbed their peaceful ambience.

Geet scrunched up her face in annoyance at the sound and turned burying her face in maan's chest to tune out the noise. But her movements and the sound was enough to wake the early riser maan from his deep slumber.

He slowly blinked and opened his eyes to see his life trying to squeeze herself in his sternum. An automatic smirk crept up his lips at her attempts knowing how much of a lazy ass she is and with their late night it would be more difficult for her to wake up. The last night thoughts led to the memories of their marriage which changed his smirk into a serene smile. Holding his treasure close to him, he turned off the alarm and let her have some more sleep. But he was informed by his mom the previous night to get up early for morning pooja. He can't have anyone thinking bad about his wife and with so many guests he knew it could become an issue. So, he thought to wake her up...

Mishty...he breath in her ear caressing her hair...wake up, sweetheart...!!

Umm...she mewed in response and went back to his warm inviting chest. He chuckled placing a kiss on her cheek...you need to get up, love. It's late...he practically cooed.

Nooo...Lemme...sleep...she mumbled at being disturbed. Seeing her so in mood of sleeping maan had a naughty thought. Maan started placing pecks on her any visible skin making geet sigh in pleasure. His attempts increased in intensity and so did her moans.

His hands crept up her back till her dori was in his fingers. A single pull and it came undone making her choli loose. He again brought his lips to her ears and whispered...if you don't get up now, I'll have my way with you while you're still asleep...!!

Geet didn't open her eyes, but replied back breathlessly...who is stopping you...??

Maan at once moved back and looked at her face...you're awake...??

Geet finally opened her beautiful eyes and smiled...hmm...how could I sleep with your sneaky ministrations...??

Well, I was not sneaky. I gave you a fair warning...he hinted his words before and smirked.

Geet kissed his cheek and whispered...I am sorry. I don't know when I fell asleep last...

Shh...he placed his finger on her pouty lips...there is no hurry, love. You were exhausted. We both were. And I am more than happy to have you here than anything else. You are mine, now. We are married, our dream has come true and we have a lifetime of togetherness...!!

He placed a soft kiss on her lips while she smiled mischievously and sassed...no wonder you are growing old, now. My MSK was more of a horny teenager than this old bore...!!

Oh, I'll show you old bore...he replied narrowing his eyes at her giggling and next minute her giggles were swallowed by his mouth in a deep mind numbing kiss. It seems like they were kissing forever and maan's hand decided to venture geet's body on its own, when a loud knock on their door break their steamy make out session.

Maan grunted in annoyance and muttered with face buried in neck...these people will never let me celebrate my suhaag raat or even suhaag din for that matter...!!

Geet giggled pushing his head back...go and answer before they break your precious door...!!

Maan though highly frustrated with these untimely interruptions, complied and got up. Geet too tied her back dori and stood up to take her clothes for bath, when maan held her from behind and whispered in her ear...I forgot to wish my beautiful wife...and turned to kiss her again, though briefly this time...good morning, wifey...and walked away winking as geet replied back.

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Geet came out after a relaxing hot water bath and saw the room empty. As she had to wear a saree she didn't take clothes inside the washroom and came out in a bath robe. Her clothes were in the walk in closet and she reached for the beautiful blood red saree.

Carefully draping the cloth around her slender body as rano had taught her previously, she came out and got in front of the mirror to do her hair and light make up. She was trying to tie a necklace when the bedroom door open and maan came inside ready in a formal maroon shirt and black suit pant. He has a waist coat on and was focused on his cufflink...geet are you ready, yet. We have to leave for your pag phera too after all other rituals...

He looked up and then went back to his cufflink only to do a double take. His eyes froze on his wife, who seems to have made her life's motto to seduce him every second of their life. In a ravishing red saree with all the bride embellishment she was looking sizzling hot.

God!!...why do these people and poojas are hell bent on ruining his life...he cursed hoping he could stay here and show his wife how much her seduction is working without even making an effort or even thinking about it.

Geet's face mirrored her dress as she saw maan's intense gaze on her. she could feel the heat from this much distance also and knew she would soon be engulfed in the flame of those desires.

With inhuman effort maan tore his gaze away from his firecracker and sighed... sweet heart, let's leave before it becomes impossible for me to leave...!!

Geet blushed yet again and came towards him fully ready. He saw his sindoor in her parting and his mangalsutra around her neck and felt another possessive surge in his blood. Holding her hand and drawing her close to him, he placed a soft and firm peck on her parting feeling immensely happy...you are truly divine, mishty and you are MINE...!!

She smiled at him and together they left the room to go down.



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Naina was busy seeing the arrangements in the temple when she saw maan and geet descend the stairs together. They looked so perfect together...she thought utterly happy. Raj too noticed them...good morning son and my girlfriend...he winked at geet, who giggled knowing he was teasing maan while maan scowled and tighten his hold on geet's waist.

They came down and took blessings from the elders and naina took geet with her for the morning pooja. Few relatives, who stayed back the night attended the pooja with them. Dev and Vicky were there too. After the pooja, geet was asked to do the chulha pooja and make her first rasooi.

Maan and others waited in the living room, chatting among them. Geet has send naina and others out too and only nakul and few servants were there to help geet.

Hardly twenty minutes had pass when nakul came to maan and whispered something in his ears. Maan immediately left from there. As he was sitting away from others, n one noticed nakul and him leaving, well except Vicky. He followed them

They came in the kitchen and were met with disaster, well partly. Both maan and Vicky came near geet who was sitting in a corner and crying.

Geet, sweet heart...??...what happen...??...why are you crying...??...did you got hurt...??...maan was going frantic with worry.

Geet shook her head and pointed towards the gas and they turn to look...

Chote sahib, khana kharab hogaya ...nakul answered.

Kharab hogaya...??...geet suddenly raged...khana bana hi kahan jo kharab hoga. Everything is ruined. I am so useless. I can't even cook properly...and she burst into tears yet again.

Maan eyed Vicky who went to look at the food. He came near him and whispered in his ears...bhai, jo paka woh jal gaya aur baki toh kachcha reh gaya...!!

Maan got angry and blasted the servants...what the hell were you people doing...??...aur sab kuch geet kyun bana rahi hai...??

Don't scold them I wanted to cook and even then I only had to make kheer and one vegetable and I Filed in that too...she snapped in the mid of her crying.

Maan pinched his forehead and instantly came into action...Mahesh, stand at the door and don't let anyone enter...he ordered and took hold of geet's hand making her stand.

He looked at nakul and asked...is everything else ready...??...nakul nodded in affirmative.

Mishty, why do you cry for small small things. Sab kuch abhi ban jayega...he asked the servants to clean the mess and started arranging the ingredients. Vicky and geet were staring at him like owls while he instructed the servants to cut the vegetables.

Maan saw their reaction...I used to make my own food in US...!!

Wow bhai. Aapne toh cooking department mein bhi doll se baazi mar gaye...vicky snickered earing glares from both of them.

Hey babaji, yeh kuch bhi nahi chodte. Cooking bhi aati hai aur main...??...she made a baby face looking above but maan snapped her out...stop wasting your and your babaji's time and come here...!!

Maan then went on instructing her and she cooked both mixed vegetable and kheer, while Vicky kept commenting on something or the other. Finally the dishes were complete in another half hour and maan and Vicky left the kitchen before anyone catch them there.

Geet happily arranged everything and the servants set the table for breakfast. Everyone relished the food praising the new bride and gifting her neg while she beamed in joy at her successful cooking. Maan smiled at her enthusiasm and passed a secret flying kiss when she looked at him.



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Later maan took geet for the pag phera ritual and left her in HM while he went on to see the reception preparation, which was to be held that night.

Geet's arrival brought waves of joy in HM and her friends too came there to see her and get her ready for the reception.

Mohinder hugged geet and ask a number of times if she was okay and how did everything went as if they have been apart for a whole year and just a night.

Papaji, everything went fine. You know I made kheer and mix vegetable for my first rasooi and it was super awesome and delicious...she narrated everything excluding her screw up while cooking and maan rescuing her.

Both her parents were proud of her and had tears in their eyes knowing how big their daughter has become. She is a wife and a daughter-in law now with so many responsibilities.

But hearing the cooking part, rano got alert and asked...but puttar, tujhe toh kuch bhi banana nahi aata. How many times I tried to make you learn but you always use to run away. How did you manage there...??

Geet avoided eye contact and lied through her teeth...oh mama, aap bhi na. I am geet handa and khurana now. I can do anything...!!

Though rano was suspicious mohinder diverted her attention...let her be now rano. Puttar you go and spend time with your friends...!!

Geet took the opportunity and immediately left for her room where her friends were already present, assembling her dress and jewellery for the reception party. Discussing their own dresses etc.

Geet thanked her babaji that she was saved from her mother and now she could spend her time without any problem. But boy, was she wrong!

As soon as her friends noticed her they pounced on her for her SR details and poor soul was stuck once again cursing her fate...bas tere sath hi geet, ek tere sath hi aisa ho sakta hai...she thought with self pity not knowing what to reply.



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okay, here is the next part...
I'll be updating next part after 10th march coz of vacation.
plz comment n give feedback😊

don't forget to hit the LIKE button

lots of love🤗

anupam


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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
yipeee me first [:D/]
loved their early morning romance nd seeing Maan controlling himself but pata nahi Mishty apne bhuke sher ko kaise sambhalegi...as he's devouring her just with his eyes 😳
Maan is such a loving person helping his Mishty out in kitchen nd both Vicky nd Geet staring at the chef MSK...I could actually imagine their eyes popping out 😆
Rano knows her daughter well nd is curious to know how she actually cooked when she doesn't even know the abcd of cooking but as papa Handa is there to save his ladli 😃
now Geet is in her room nd all her friends want to know about their SR ...bechari ab kya bolegi 😆
looking forward to know how she'll tackle her devil friends nd even more devil hubby after the reception 😆
nd I'm even looking forward to read some dev-meera scenes...(this is the first time I'm interested on reading about this couple ) 😉
Edited by fatema_007 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Amazing update
loved their morning romance
Maan is better than geet in cooking as wel
nobody can escape from mothers eyes
they caN cetch anything
poor geet couldnt reply anything about her sr
continue soon
really want to know about their sr
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Lovely Update

Geet has to cook and seems like she messed up a bit but started crying well she is lucky that Maan was there and he helped and instructed all on what to do so that she can complete her cooking .
but I don't understand why she lied to her mother because surly her mother would know if Geet can cook or not .

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it. Poor maan, na suhaagraat or na suhaagdin. 😉 bechara kya kare 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome ud
lovely morning romance
geet make mess in kitchen
maan scold servant and than
instantly make food and left
from their all gave neg to geet
fr hr cooking and than went to
HM fr PP geet told about hr
cooking and rano was suspicious
about hr cooking
now again geet in trouble to
ans hr friends
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Nice part.
Maan helped geet in cooking her first rasoi!! Sooo sweet.
Waiting for next.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb update too gud maaneet morning romance n geet spoiled the food loll...awww maan rescued her from the problem n helped her in cooking n pagphera loved it waiting for next...i have my exams so won't b able to read or comment till 31st march.will b back with my comments after that
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsemm update geet maan romance morning geet disaster cooking maan rescuing geet pagphera rasm

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