~MAGICAL RIDE~NEW MG STORY~CHAPTER 5 posted@38 on 9.3.15

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Ruchita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#231

Part2 : hawwwe im in dream land yaar just just mersmerized u shud write more like dese concepts u r too goood at dis

Btw im litreally clueless abt harry potter😆 havent watched anything like dat

1 request yaar if possible add pictures like der clothing jahan bhi possible ho only if u r ok warna its fine

Btw im in justt awww aft seeing d castle's pic wowww super duper

Yipeee sanaya bhi hai yahan n u already knw hw much i adore SI n DD 's frndship thank u yaar for including her here dat to as a bestie

Her character is too goodd so cute n sweet

Loved it wen she did magic n she got so excited abt it pehla magic tha kya just wondering

Maaan toh gaya abhi nayi duniya mein aaya n he is just getting shock aft shock

Hahahaha dat magic powder mujhe bhi chaiye yaar

Btw is NY ur fav city curious

Just as i thot maan is going to do magic n geet k liye he is going to do wat he doesnt likes dats really appreciatable

Geet ka kya secret hai hw she managed to come to live like a normal person

Yahan bhi dev dat tooo evil yipeee im happy

Grrr yahan geet ka dad bhi villian lag raha but cant say much without reading further

Already shaadi shuda ki shaadi nt fair

N dat to without her marzi well ofcourse she loves maan ders no doubt in dat may b she was just lil upset or disappointed dat she didnt got any chance to explain

Im loving dis sanaya thank god only she found maan n sumone is der to help maaneet

Wondering who was dat guy in 20's jis se maan takraya

Hahahaha dat magical ride poor maan everything so alien for him

Eagerly waiting to read further lets c what happens

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Ruchita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#232

Part 3 : Dis is so so sooo magical yaar dreamyily cute

Im just in awww speechless

Kassh mein bhi aisi duniya mein hogi

Btw thanks for a longgg update dat to full of maaneet moments

Edits are superb yaar so real

My doubt 1st warna mein bhool jaungi

My geet said u r nt supposed to c der wen said u r looking beautiful in dis gown n at d same moment sanaya came

Wats dis magic abt

Hahahahaha im loving dis power of sanaya to read peoples minds bichara maan full of surprises n shocks wala din maan k liye ab he cant even think der lollzz

Wenever maan starts to think something im saying maan mat soch mat soch hahahaha dis is too much fun

Maaan is damn cute yaar nw waiting for some action frm him

Maaneet ki meeting bhi full magical n geet is sooo cute

Bichara maan yaar waiting for him to do some exciting magic

Hawww geet ki room toh sounds sooo beautiful n magical n wats really tooo good was her room changes according to her mood

Hahaha aacha punishment diya maan ko ulta latka diya

But such a emotional cute si meeting

Hahahaha good name yaar lolllzzz monkey soo perfect i ll use dat for dev frm nw

Iske liye bhi punish hoga maan ab humesha MU karta hai

Ahaaan twist spell broke n dad devil aa gaya n sab ko pakad loya ab kaise bachenge sab

N yeah forgot tell ya perfect title dis is a MAGICAL RIDE in all senses for us

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Ruchita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#233

Part 4 : hahahaha samay handa perfect kinda evil though nt truly aft reading dis update its just dat je wants d best for his daughter n he is nt at fault he doesnt knws abt maan's reality i hope he is nt behind watever happened to maan's parents i hope dey wer besties in d past greedy me 😆

Sanaya is such a sweetheart good dat she had dose powers she is able to help in d most possible way

Yeh kya ho raha hai but im excited to c maan doing magic but d saddest part is maaneet wont get to meet with eachother

God its good dat geet's dad cant read peoples mind warna aaj toh maan gaya tha

Though maan nw feels dat apne hi pair mein kuladi maari hai but he is going to love dis n be is going to proud of himself n his parents may b he ll get to knw some raaz

Cant c maan so down

Excited to read further

Good sanaya hai hope she ll b able to help dem or atleast she can b a mediator though i feel kaise bhi mil lenge maaneet

Geet's dad is going to get shocked wen he ll c maan doing magic

Dev ki band bajani haiii

Update sooon 😆

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Sweta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: shruthiruchs
Part 3 : Dis is so so sooo magical yaar dreamyily cute
Im just in awww speechless
Kassh mein bhi aisi duniya mein hogi
Btw thanks for a longgg update dat to full of maaneet moments
Edits are superb yaar so real
My doubt 1st warna mein bhool jaungi
My geet said u r nt supposed to c der wen said u r looking beautiful in dis gown n at d same moment sanaya came
Wats dis magic abt
Hahahahaha im loving dis power of sanaya to read peoples minds bichara maan full of surprises n shocks wala din maan k liye ab he cant even think der lollzz
Wenever maan starts to think something im saying maan mat soch mat soch hahahaha dis is too much fun
Maaan is damn cute yaar nw waiting for some action frm him
Maaneet ki meeting bhi full magical n geet is sooo cute
Bichara maan yaar waiting for him to do some exciting magic
Hawww geet ki room toh sounds sooo beautiful n magical n wats really tooo good was her room changes according to her mood
Hahaha aacha punishment diya maan ko ulta latka diya
But such a emotional cute si meeting
Hahahaha good name yaar lolllzzz monkey soo perfect i ll use dat for dev frm nw
Iske liye bhi punish hoga maan ab humesha MU karta hai
Ahaaan twist spell broke n dad devil aa gaya n sab ko pakad loya ab kaise bachenge sab
N yeah forgot tell ya perfect title dis is a MAGICAL RIDE in all senses for us

sweety sanaya can read minds na..so she knew maana nd geet were sharing a cute moment and thats y she peepe dinside geet's mind

😆

thank u yaa..

and regarding the pics u can imagine geet na i have given her pic accordingly in the banner

maan k liye pic jaldi dalungi sweety 😳

thank u for liking the story 🤗

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nadia khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#235

awesome start to a new story sweta loved it so maan came home to give surprise to geet but surprised himself she is wizard which he couldn't handle it maybe coz he himself was a wizard but didn't wanted to since magic is what killed his parents geet is missing hope he finds her soon

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nadia khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#236

lovey magical update so maan is regretting his decision of running away dadi consoles him and says to go and get her as she dosent know of his past maan decides to use magic if necessary maan uses his fathers book to find geet where he comes to know that she is getting married to dev forcefully he meets sanaya geets besty and she takes him to geet lovely sweta

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Ruchita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: crazy_sweta

sweety sanaya can read minds na..so she knew maana nd geet were sharing a cute moment and thats y she peepe dinside geet's mind
😆

thank u yaa..

and regarding the pics u can imagine geet na i have given her pic accordingly in the banner

maan k liye pic jaldi dalungi sweety 😳

thank u for liking the story 🤗

Ohhh ok ok i got it

Coool i ll b waiting

Ab aaj kuch treat chaiye

Since i ve completed reading alll😉😆

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 10 years ago

#238

lovely update so finally our maan reached his geet loved how sanaya deformed his face hope u had put a bit of pics too sweta the lovers reunited where geet bounced him in the air haayeee normal sherni itni khatarnak hai to jadoo wali to pooch mat bechara maan but ye kya geet dad came ab kya hoga update soon dear

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nadia khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#239

lovely shocking update so geets dad aur maan ka amna samna he is furious and refuses to let geet stay with maan he thinks maan to be a normal human but he dosent know his parents were wizards so he challenged him to a competition hope 3 weeks r enough for him to do what he hated from the start