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Posted: 10 years ago
its so lovely precap

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part
loved it
geet and maan went on date
maan asked about her college life unkowningly freshend up her wounds..she shared how she came to know about her pregnancy how she decided to keep the baby alive
maan felt guilt for not being there with her and their baby when they needed him
nice precap
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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Hi Doma...
aaj mood bada kharab hei ,, aur yahan ka mausam bhi...

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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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(For banner credit goes to my dear laksmi )

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we cu
rse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 129




Part - 130


It's time to forget our bitter past . Begin a new relation to make it last .

Forget d hurt we've given each other . Be better companion understand one another .

Start a fresh all over again . Erase all memories of anger and pain ...


This was d time when both wr sharing their hearts nd pains ,, he was feeling her pains nd she was his remorse ,, he was not feeling burdened nd ashamed for having his baby ,, he was admiring her decision for saving their baby's life ,, his words soothe her heart nd she beamed nd parted.

Geet: thanks to u Maan for giving my Manu his Dad ,, sometime I cursed myself that I m really a curse ,, a jinx who gave my child this life which I got ,, a fatherless nd familyless life .

Tears dropped from her eyes but Maan cupped her face , wiped them with his thumbs nd nodded in a no .

Maan: no Geet ,, plzz don't call u a jinx ,, it was my foolishness my madness that I mistreated u , It was me who turned a curse for u ... I m sorry ,, plzz never use that word for u ,, u r a boon to me who save my soul ,, u filled my life with happiness nd love ,, u bring back life nd happiness in my family nd give me an angel , my son ,,, u r my sunshine Geet ,, u r my love .

Overwhelmed he started giving feather kisses on her forehead , wet eyes , cheeks nd lastly took her lower lip , licked that softly nd mumbling .. u r my love Geet ... I love u ... I love u a lot ,, lost in his pain nd love Maan forgot that he had crossed all distance between them ,, Geet shuddered nd clutched his shirt tightly ,, she was already chocked with pain nd emotions ,, Maan's confession of love made her more weak ,, she was also having feelings for him nd Maan's this advance shattered her last barrier nd she reciprocated .. I love u too Maan ... I love u .

Geet ... oh baby ,,, he showered many more kisses nd engulfed her thigtly ,, there was an satisfaction on his face ,, those three words washed away all d pains they wr bearing ,, with closed eyes they wr cherishing that magical moments ,, d beautiful moments of their new life .

They wr lost in that magical spell of love ,, listening each others heart beats ,, their contented smiles showing that they etched each others names in their hearts,, satisfying their heart nd soul they parted nd exchanged a deep nd loving look .

Maan: thanks Geet ,, I promise u , i'll filled ur live with love nd happiness .

Geet: not only mine but for all ,, for u nd others too ,, my happiness lies in my family nd thanks to u for giving me a complete family .

Maan: I promise nd love u a lot .

They came back to their seats nd settled in their chairs ,, Maan served for both ,, all r cont dishes ,, Geet passed a smile when saw Chinese combo nd her fav smoothie along with his fav Italian dishes (Penne with Vodka Sauce & Capicola , Chard with Shallots, Pancetta & Walnuts ,Creamy choco Gelato )

Geet: u already selected d menu for d dinner.

Maan smiled: they asked at d time for booking ,, if u don't like anything we cn order now , r u ?

Geet: no,,no ,, I m fine with this . it's my fav.

Maan: I knew ,, u nd Manu most of d time eat this .

Geet: manu likes Italian like u ,, it's tough to feed spaghetti nd ribbon pasta outside so I prefer this combo,, easy to eat .

Maan: but at home u to eat Italian .

Geet: hummm, I forgot all my tastes ,, bcoz of manu nd U&A sam I cook according to their tastes .

Maan: nd what do like d most ?

Geet: golgappe ,, papri-chat ,, jo yajan nahi mil sakta .

Maan amazed: what .. golgappe ,, chat ,, Geet u like these ?

Geet: humm ,, what's wrong in that ? at d time of 3rd trimester I craved for these types of food ( in her flow she forgot what she was sharing nd what maan was thinking ) ,, I didn't have time for proper cooking nd eat ,, work nd study held me tight ,, there was no time to eat nd rest then going very far to purchase from Indian store was impossible for me .

It pierced Maan's heart ... she was not getting her proper diet nd rest at that time when she was needed d most ,, she craved for small things but didn't get .. God!!

Maan felt a lump in his throat , gulp hard nd held Geet's hand tightly in his ,, his eyes burnt ,,

Geet: what happened ? r u ok ,, spiecy hei kya ? have a sip of this smoothie u'll feel better .

Maan cdn't deny her , he didn't want to show her ,, took sips from her drink , composed himself nd passed a faint smile to Geet who was staring at him .

Geet: feeling better ,, don't eat if it's spicey , have from this , it's enough for two .

Geet placed her plate near him nd gestured to with a smile ,, he fulfil her wish nd shared her food ,, then rest of d dinner went well with few more revelation of past memories of her life ,, all wr painful for Maan but Geet was feeling lil light sharing those ,, she was normally talking ,, they finished ,, maan wanted to spent more time but Geet started checking time .

Maan: want to go back ?

Geet: hummm ,, wo.. I want to purchase ice-creames for Manu & all nd don't want to be late ,, we cn go out with all at week end .

Maan: Geet , dad -mom have to go back Ind in next 2-3 days ,, u know work is piling up there for him nd mom has to prepare for our marriage ,,,,aamm ,,did u ask for leaves ?

Geet: sorry , I was not able to ask today , TM for sure .

Maan: it's ok , Geet we have to apply for rgtd marriage too nd I think u want that here .

Geet: hummm ,, Maan I don't know u all like it or not but I have a prob .

Maan: prob ,, what?

Geet: I had sign a bond with Co nd have to work for next 2 yrs with them .

Maan: humm,, don't worry we'll try to manage ,, now we have our business here nd d current projects'll take nearly 3-4 yrs so there was no issue for this. Thanks . ... anything for my love.

She shied nd Maan leaned to her nd stole a quick peck on her rosy lips which made her more red ,, chalen ,,, humm.

Both wr driving back nd feeling very relaxed ,though Maan's heart was heavy knowing about her miseries but but hiding that he was smiling ,, they reached home with many flavour of ice-creams for all but all wr settled in their rooms nd Manu had slept with his granny ,, when Geet was going to her room Maan stopped her .

Maan: Geet if I ask something , will u give me ?

Geet confused : what ?

Maan: Geet I want ur ultrasounds cds nd manu's birh record ,, plzz .

Geet startled nd staring at him sensing his attachment with his child she nodded in a yes giving him a smile ... abhi deti hu ,, coffee peoge ? humm.


Precap ---- Maan's pampering ...




sorry for mistakes ...


Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



Hi Doma...
aaj mood bada kharab hei ,, aur yahan ka mausam bhi...

mood kyun off hai di??
kya hua???aur mousam ko kya hua?
barish ho rahi hai kya??
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Posted: 10 years ago
Babbie,
Waiting 4 update please!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Babbie😃
Mood off kyun hai?
Ab main aa gayi hu
Smile please😃

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