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Rashmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: Desire6
ONE THING I LEARNED AFTR READING DIS UPDATE...
DAT NEVER B IN A HURRY FOR ANYTHING...

AAP SOCH RAHI HOGI NA..YEH KYA BAK BAK KAR RAHI HAI...
OFCOURSE WEN I READ...NOTE FOLLOWD BY UPDATE...
I THOUGHT TO SKIP NOTE..AS AAPKA NOTE THINKING KAHI ...MUJHE MINI ATTACK NA DEY DEY😆

ND I THOUGHT D ONE IN BOLD ND RED IS UR NOTE..SO I STARTED READING FROM BELOW..
ND I WAS ..LIK..YEH KIRAN KAUN HAI...MANEET KE BEECH MAIN..😕
YEH DONO THO HOTEL ROOM MAIN THEY NA..

ND DEN WEN I READ ...WRITER ND READER...BATTI JAL GAYI😛

DI...AAPKA NOTE TO...UPDATE SAY B BADA THA...😆😆
ND AM SAD...😭
HUM B AAPKE ADMIRER HAI..AAP TOH BHUL GAYE😡
IS BECHARI NACHIS KO Q YAAD RAKHENGE

COMMING TO UPDATE...

HAAYE..DAT WAS 😳😳😳

PICS...ND D DESCRIPTION ...DAT GAVE GHOSE BUMPS
ND U KNOW.. BAHO KE DARMIYAN SONGS..ALWAYS MAKE ME REMEMBER RISHBALA
ND DER STUDIO NT..😳
AAPNE NAHI DEKHA HOGA SHAYAD-MADHUBALA...

BT MUST SAY DAT VIDEO BY VALLI DI...DAT WAS 😳👏👏
NEXT TIME FOR SURE ...IF I LL LISTEN DIS SONG...PAKKA MUJE YEH VIDEO ZAROOR YAAD AAYEGA..

LOVED HOW HE EASED HER TENSION...ND ASSURED HER HE WAS DER WIT HER ND WILL BE DER FOR HER..SO NO NEED TO WORRY..

ND WAT I LOVED MOST IS

HAAYE...MAIN B WISH MAANG LU KYA...
ITNA REAL TUTATA HUA TARA HAI...
DO TARE TUTANE CHAHIYE NA...EK ARPITA AND EK YASH KA🤔
OK..I UNDERSTAND...HE GOT A DESTINATION...😃😃

MORNING AGAIN ...MANEET MOMENTS ..HER SHYNESS..
I THOUGH MAAN LL TEASE HER ND LL B MORE NAUGHTY..

WEN HE TURNED ON GEET KA BOLNE PAY I WAS LK..😲😲 YEH KAB SUDAR GAYA...

LOVED D PART..VERY VERY MUCH...

ND HAPPY DAT I COULD COMMENT D MOMENT I HAVE READ..
WARNA MY BUSY SCHEDULE..IS LIKE...PATA NAHI KAB COMMENT KARTI HU

PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE SOON...

WAITIN FOR NEXT DASU UPDATE...

PS...WAISE AAPKA NOTE B ACHA THA...EXPLAINED UR POV ..I MEAN...MAAN ND ARPITA ND YASH KA STANCE DER THOUGHTS SO NIECLY...
👍🏼

Thanks Divya and sorry too.. I did not mean by that you are not my admirer and you know ..Not only you bet most of my friend gave me an annoyed look for saying this.. 😆😆

Si Thought to change the line and I changed.. I think you will like that now.Jaao aur padh kar aao..

aur haan note update se bada nahin tha

half tha update ka😡

waise kya socha tumne mere Note ke baare me ki kya hoga isme?😲😲

abhi kahatam nahin hua hai.

Thanks for liking the update..

I used to watch Madhubala till Rishbala were alive,, and I too loved this song on them.but I think it's appearing more apt on Maaneet now..

Thanks again Divya for liking that star part..

Do Taare kyun tootne chhaiye the.. You have to wait for a big surprise from me...you couldn't even think that in your dreams.. ifar main geet ke twins ka naam aroita aur Yash rakh bhi doo tab bhi mera surprise intact rahega..

Lo main bhui morning teasing bana deti to ye to obvious ho jata na.. in every FF it only happens and I m little different😉

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Rashmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: nishamna
Amazing dear.maneet moment was really very beautiful .maan was staring geet continusely as his dream of seeing geet as his bride is fulfilled. Geet was so much nervous but with lot of love maan made her calm.morning was more beautiful as maneet wake up in each other's arms. Maan get amused seeing geet still shy. Waiting for next dear

Thanks Nisha..

They are one finally after so many twists in their life..

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ammu5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#273

Rashmi...thoroughly enjoyed da update without feeling awkward...it ws clean n clear...cnt bear more dn this...finally maaneet r one...Passed in distinction dear as always

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Rashmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: manjeet6
Fabulous update dear
Finely they became one aur almighty bhi unhe aashirwad de rahi hai
And now their love blossom every where

Thanks a lot Manjeet..

haha \wo almighty ka ashirwad nahin hai😆😆

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Rashmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: samidsamid
awsmupdt...u have describe evrry partr in sensual bt also iin decent way...maan was suprrised to see his Geet sitting as bride...thhere r so many eemotions in both oof them... .. there was nothing but immense love btwn thm...aww the shhooting star art u had wrt ws just mindbllowing...its reallly find its place...romntic .tym 4 maneet...updt soon dear...thanx 4 pm

Thank U so much..I m happythat you find it quite sensual otherwise thes kind of scene are very tough to write for me..Thanks that tyou noticed that star part and my intention behind that

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Rashmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: flopsy
Awesum update
I have been a silent reader, but have decided to comment for once.
I have loved each part and enjoyed Maaneets journey from the very beginning.
And this latest update was just so lovely, especially after so long and they final became one, and that too so beautiful, reminded of the scenes from GHSP.😊😛😊

Waiting for next part

Thanks for dropping your comment dear.. But why only for once?

lilked you comment very much..

Please do comment more here..I will feel good..

Thanks for liking PV..

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teja21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#277

Superb update dear

Thanx fr d pm

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Rashmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: sanafatima35
Nice update di
Finally maaneet became one
Journey to their new life starts now in real sense
Geet shied in front of maan
Maan also did not tease her
Will be waiting for next update

Thank U so much Sana and I m really very happy to see your effort,, Please keep it up sana.. I m sure you too will be feeling good after dropping these lines here..

Maan did not tease her as I did not allow him as it happens in every FF😉

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Rashmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: love2_soma
kahin ewoh shooting star yash toh nehi aur woh araha hai maan aur geet ki bachcha banke...chalo atlast after facing sooo many hurdles dey r together...become one soul...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Yes He is bYash,,..

Thanks

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Rashmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#280

Originally posted by: sanum23
very nice ud
maan taking slow steps to not to afraid geet
bcuz shr conferences that she scared
maan make her relax and both drowned
in pool of passion and become one
morning was awesome fr both
geet feel shy to wear her cloths in front
of maan he didn't tease hr
till now that was beautiful journey of maaneet

Thanks Sanum..

Maan knew now that geet hadn't been in physical relation till now,, so e ad to be careful for her..