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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
Pooja I think d speed wid which u r stating d story is good.
Enjoying all d parts u r giving
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
i like the way u writing this story i dont have any problem would love if maan also help her
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: ambbiha

I think your going good. I feel Sam and feet part is important for storyline but show us maaneet scene too.


already found solution to that; u will get them in next part i guess...

Originally posted by: chauhan1796

plz make maan come to knw about geet past and dev dirty game soon plus accept his feeling for geet ...


that is not too far maybe in part 14 or so...


Originally posted by: kamnagupta7

Pooja I think d speed wid which u r stating d story is good.
Enjoying all d parts u r giving


thnx 😳


Originally posted by: Drashtilove

i like the way u writing this story i dont have any problem would love if maan also help her


i understand ur concern dear... maan helping her is ok; but she taking his help won't be justice to a woman. so i would like to twist that part a bit, and hope u like that too...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
The way you have written the storyline is refreshing
go ahead with the way you writing the story its very interesting
just waiting now to see how Maaneet will get together again as Geet now hates Maan

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I m OK with the flow u r going, just loving the story
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
the story is going smoothly i just want that maan comes to know about geet's past soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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honestly speaking i want to see maan and maaneet scenes more...
this sam and geet convo is bit strecting for me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
What you want you writr your style us a reader i accepted
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
enjoying the way story going
but off course missing maaneet
maan soon knows geet is victim

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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Its fine the way story is heading... I really don't have problem with your excitement for mystery... ;-) You can strech it few parts... I m not leaving without reading this story complete...

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