Corporate Love #3_thread 4 link pg1_finish thread for update

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#101

I AM OK WITH ANY THING WHICH YOU FEEL RIGHT FOR STORY DEVELOPMENT

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Leenu

@Blossom_29

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Enjoying it so much continue

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Krupa

@idunno

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#103

i don't know how you plan this story but so far great going only thing i want is when maan will know truth as she is going to work against maan also na?

secondly wants to know maan and geet's past encounter when geet fall in love with maan?

is dev being criminal will be able to stay there for long when he will understand mk's game?

and maneet 's encounter with each other,to know the truth of geet and she loving him?

so if you want you can strech story and if you don't want that is also fine don't mind either way ,you are doing good job ,now no more question answer want more and more updates so update soon.

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jayshu17

@jayshu17

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#104

I have no problem for it...I Loved the way you are writing this story...its quite Awesome...Sam and Geet part is essential for this story...plz continue dear😊

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#105

I think ur flow is good let the story go as its going I like it don't rush it

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#106

it is going good...

Sam -Geet conversation was not boring as it cleared many confusions and at least Sam is there to help Geet and when time will come and he came to know that Maan was not so wrong what Geet thinks of him then he is the one who can clear Geet's mind when needed...

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zornitsa

@zornitsa

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#107

The story... Going super..thrilling..

Sam and geet..conversation.. Was @right placed much needed..

We need maaneet scenes... Hope ..except.. Thery will be together.. @last..

Love ur story... Keep going in ur style..

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tanya94

@tanya94

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Hey...the story is getting interesting'

But can u pls involve !aan a little more...wud love to see his reaction regarding all what's happning

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: chauhan1796
hope maan ko geet k baare m jaldi pata chl jaye aur woh uski help kre aur sath hi apni feelings bhi accept kr le ...

Tht will happen soon... Though in my devil style 😉