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Originally posted by: arorasurbhi

Awesome update...
maan is dreaming about geet...
maan realise his feelings for geet...
maan came to know about geet past & decide to punish dev...

Yes dear... Now u will see MSK in action 😃

Originally posted by: CuteTommy

wonderful part...

Maan had finally given a name to his feelings...LOVE... atlast he realised tat...

but hope he let it know to Geet before its too late...

dev is goingto come back to India... n waiting for the surprise treat planned by Geet n dev's reaction for it...

waiting for the next...

Thnk u dear..

Yes we are at high point ... Things will ago super fast now; and no one will realise ki kya ho raha hai until its too late... So stay tuned 😛

Originally posted by: Mahimaan

<p align="center"><font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">kya bolu now it will me start of maan ka sufar as a lover making love is simple but wahi pyyar samne wali ki soul tak pohcana not so easyMSK so get ready for it love this part awesome part full of emotions 👏</p>

</div>u write beautiful emotions of maan how he get to know he is in love jo sirf physical enjoyment tha wo life ki soul ki zarrorat ban gaya hai ⭐️⭐️⭐️




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in precap I want to dev V/S MSK a lover </font>

Hehehhe... We'll I would say having se* with a woman that caught ur attention is easy...
Lekin once u fall in trap of love; its difficult to come out...
And the most complex thing to understand in the world is a woman!!!

Pata hai I was so unsure abt means emotions kya likhu..
Being gal its difficult yo write emotions of a man..
N maan here himself is a strong n complex character!
But glad I could make it... N u saying that is a stamp on it 😃

Maan v/s dev ho jeaga... Anymore demands madam (accept to continue cl) 😛

PS: comment reply karne wali is writer not ur pari 😛

Originally posted by: Mahimaan

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sorry to correct u dev in adman nikobaaar which is part of India

Its OK na... Geography me PhD thodi karni hai 😆

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

wonderful part..finally msk learn the truth and accept his love for geet..dev deserve the suffering that he is going through now for all the sin anf after comming back dnt know what kind of trap that maan and geet have lay for him..cant wait for maan confession..hope he is on time to catch her before depature...sad it is ending..tks for giving us this lovely story..

Thanks dear..

Yes its time to wind up... But as many are asking to continue m thinking to add a small twist
Tht can make the story more spicy... To tell u truth I already have the epilogue typed up... But its not reaching anywhere near to it soon 😆

Originally posted by: _Chinmayi_

awesome part

loved it

maan realised that he loves geet

he get to know why geet was tolerated dev's misdeeds

he decided he will destroy dev

eagerly waiting for the next part

Thnx...
Yes past was needed to clear all doubts mana had on geet... N once that's gone he is able to see he loves her!!

Originally posted by: crazydream

Maan confused, restless, frustrated by his feeling. He can't understand wats happening to him. N y he is feeling like that. Since Geet has left him he is acting weird. Oh finally he realised he loves her. Getting dreams of him n Geet. that will be soon turned to real. Don't worry Maan.

Getting whole biodata of Dev. his blood boiled hearing how much Geet suffered coz of him.

Whereas its time to sow what u reap. Dev living a life of hell. He is bearing the same pain what he gave to others.

Geet leaving the house.

Big dhamaka will be there in next update.

Pls don't end CL in 3 updates. I m shocked to hear this news. After Dev chapter is over, I want to see Maaneet scenes, maybe Maan wooing Geet, persuading her to be with him humesha ke liye. Or their romance. Pls reconsider ur decision. PLS PLS

Thnx dear...
Maan finally realises his love...
And end time for dev
Yes I assure u big dhamaka in next part..

As far as ur request..
I can't ignore it for u are one of my fav since u started reading cl
But u see the characters in here cannot take a 360 degree turn, like I cannot make maan manofy geet with roses n chocolates n do other weet things... Tht doesn't go with the character...
More of it these two know wht they want from life, I was thinking on options to continue this n I have 2
One makes it a bit longer n story more strong, while with other the no of parts will increase but I am afraid the story may loose its charm !
I will think more on that n decide for some parts now I will keep up the track
Main motive is to give a string story n satisfy the readers...😊

Originally posted by: sweetysaran

Nice story... Read all the parts... Loves it...
Waiting for more:)

Thnks dear... Welcome to cl
Hope u like it here 😊

so now maan know he is in love with geet and how that dev has trap geet and her mother and how he used geet for money and maan has decided to punish him,and will show him stars in day time,and here geet is also ready to punish him lets see is both people meets again or geet left the country but she was wanted to take revenge with maan also na ? for forcing her?what she will do?

Originally posted by: idunno

so now maan know he is in love with geet and how that dev has trap geet and her mother and how he used geet for money and maan has decided to punish him,and will show him stars in day time,and here geet is also ready to punish him lets see is both people meets again or geet left the country but she was wanted to take revenge with maan also na ? for forcing her?what she will do?

about problems in reduced likes may be long wait and people loose interest or may be story didn't flow as they wanted,but i like this story but could have been appreciated if u could have shown more maan geet encounters.

Hmm... Thnx dear 😊
Realisation has come to maan... Finally!

Geets revenge I made clear in last part tht she will leave him n go..
But ur suggestion of encounter is given me a new angle n I have started to think like that.. So let's see what my mind comes up with...

Decrease in likes is I think coz of xam season not a big issue..
N yeah I do turn up late but I can't help it myself