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swetha03

@swetha03

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Posted: 10 years ago

#501

possessive is not good for health maan😳

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Ruchita

@shruthiruchs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#502

Back to back updates yaar n i hav a long list of back log

But loving it getting to read a lot dat to all fav

Yeh kya i thot its going to maan's entry but twist

Yeh dev kahan se tapak pada

Gud dat u made him bad man more reasons to hate him n curse him with all my heart n sincerity i ve always felt dat it was nt fair to forgive him in d show n let him lose n give him more n more girlsss dat was really arghhh

But superb yaar yahan mann ki bhadas nikal ne ko milegi

Hw i wish i cud get to punch him kamina kahina

I wonder y here n in tainted angel u always make geet feel dat dev is a good guy noo offence just wondering n im curious

I mean yahan toh ek dum clear hai dat such a 🤬 he is still y geet feels dat dil ka bura nahi hai

Drug addict hai n hez hurting her still kyu aur kya bacha tha iss kamine ki list mein pata nahi

Ahaaan finally humare hotty ne entry maar hi di woh bhi in style do aur punch meri taraf se bhi kill him even better

Possessive i c n still must say der is some mischief in dis situation also dats wat i love abt dis maan yaar

Knight in shining armour i c but i guess geet ko bhi under estimate nahi karna chaiye she cud hav punched dat stupid still i like dis title he is d knight for us greek god

My Hotty 😉 aadat ho gayi ab toh geet ko

Grrr dis sanjana is getting on my nerves really wondering wat is d raaaz

N her mom woh toh sis se bhi upar feel like slapping her i mean hw can some one b soo mean n matlabi sirf apne kaam ki padi hai n kinda she is twistedly straightforward

Hw cooly she is asking dem abt living such a locality being so rich but sugar coating her words she is d typical serial wali grrr dnt knw wat to say

She is just behind sanjana n her well being n i guess sooner she is going to try hooking up her with maan or u ve written dat n i forgot

Nw again raaz of khuranas i c dadi is really sweet but i must say really experienced lady easily she understood who is fake n who is real

Some painful past is der of khuranas alsooo kya hoga mee wondering

Hahahahaha dadi ne toh maan ka route clear kar diya khurana house ko bhi apna hi samajhna ofcourse her future home v knw

Aacha hua lighten up ho gaya last mein warna cudnt c dis maan in pain

Super update yaar

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Ruchita

@shruthiruchs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#503

Okkk just re read d CS again lollzz

I ve already did but u knw my memory power n all d stress

Chalo again dekh liya

Just realised story is based in NY n here i was imagining india😆

CS mein toh nahi tha maan studying with geet i mean completing his long left studies

Me off to read d rest of d partsss

I love dis khamoshiyan wala maan ki pic n his characterisation pe tohhh muahhh for u 10000000 pointss

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Ruchita

@shruthiruchs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#504

Hawww hw i wish u take d story der lolllz

But v do need some change spice n variety soo u r doing great with d story so go ur way girl

Okayyy so d prologue guy is finally in d picture

At d start i thot thot okayyy some wer may b dey are a couple blame geet she only made a line my boy but den all cleared nw only best frnd good for our hotty

I love dese kind of frndship wer u can b all urself no fear of getting judged u can speak ur heart out n no matter wat dey ll stand by ur side humesha n forever

Good dat she shared everything with rohan

Lolllz loved d teasing frnds do dat all d tym

Girly giggle is he gay by any chance lollzzz😆

Hahahaha love at first sight nahi drooling at all sights

Grrr her mom btw i was expecting ki maan ll catch dem together

Her mom just pisses me off unbelievable yaar 10 years n she doesnt abt geet's best frnd i highly doubt if geet is adopted or sumthing like dat pata nahi kya raaz hai

Such a mean n selfish lady she is goddd hw can a mother speak like dat told u straightfwd khana banati hai ehsaan nahi hai n i highly doubt hw much work she does

Mental hospital lolllzz dat was hilarious😆

Goddd geet toh gayi ab clean bowled maan se bachna ab definetely mushkil hi nahi namumkin hai almost she ll b infront of him half a day dats nt bad yaar its like a 24/7 for boss secretary jo hai

Yahan bhi maan ko geet k khane ka especially coffee ka deewana bana do 😆

I wonder wats d whole idea n plan behind making geet work dat to for khurana's money is nt d only reason i guess

Kuch toh gadbad hai

Btw i wonder will dadi still let her call dadi or maam mein badal degi

Getting more n more intresting

Edited by shruthiruchs - 10 years ago

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Sweta

@crazy_sweta

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#505

Originally posted by: shruthiruchs
Okkk just re read d CS again lollzz
I ve already did but u knw my memory power n all d stress
Chalo again dekh liya
Just realised story is based in NY n here i was imagining india😆
CS mein toh nahi tha maan studying with geet i mean completing his long left studies
Me off to read d rest of d partsss
I love dis khamoshiyan wala maan ki pic n his characterisation pe tohhh muahhh for u 10000000 pointss

😆

thanks ruchi 😃

i was waiting for u comment i knew u'd love this story just like me 😳

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Sweta

@crazy_sweta

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#506

Originally posted by: shruthiruchs
Back to back updates yaar n i hav a long list of back log
But loving it getting to read a lot dat to all fav
Yeh kya i thot its going to maan's entry but twist
Yeh dev kahan se tapak pada
Gud dat u made him bad man more reasons to hate him n curse him with all my heart n sincerity i ve always felt dat it was nt fair to forgive him in d show n let him lose n give him more n more girlsss dat was really arghhh
But superb yaar yahan mann ki bhadas nikal ne ko milegi
Hw i wish i cud get to punch him kamina kahina
I wonder y here n in tainted angel u always make geet feel dat dev is a good guy noo offence just wondering n im curious
I mean yahan toh ek dum clear hai dat such a 🤬 he is still y geet feels dat dil ka bura nahi hai
Drug addict hai n hez hurting her still kyu aur kya bacha tha iss kamine ki list mein pata nahi
Ahaaan finally humare hotty ne entry maar hi di woh bhi in style do aur punch meri taraf se bhi kill him even better
Possessive i c n still must say der is some mischief in dis situation also dats wat i love abt dis maan yaar
Knight in shining armour i c but i guess geet ko bhi under estimate nahi karna chaiye she cud hav punched dat stupid still i like dis title he is d knight for us greek god
My Hotty 😉 aadat ho gayi ab toh geet ko
Grrr dis sanjana is getting on my nerves really wondering wat is d raaaz
N her mom woh toh sis se bhi upar feel like slapping her i mean hw can some one b soo mean n matlabi sirf apne kaam ki padi hai n kinda she is twistedly straightforward
Hw cooly she is asking dem abt living such a locality being so rich but sugar coating her words she is d typical serial wali grrr dnt knw wat to say
She is just behind sanjana n her well being n i guess sooner she is going to try hooking up her with maan or u ve written dat n i forgot
Nw again raaz of khuranas i c dadi is really sweet but i must say really experienced lady easily she understood who is fake n who is real
Some painful past is der of khuranas alsooo kya hoga mee wondering
Hahahahaha dadi ne toh maan ka route clear kar diya khurana house ko bhi apna hi samajhna ofcourse her future home v knw
Aacha hua lighten up ho gaya last mein warna cudnt c dis maan in pain
Super update yaar

heheheheh pata nahi kyu

maybe somehwhere i feel story will be more intersting that way agar dev ko acha bataya geet k nazro mai

leking ruchi baad mai uski ashliyat geet ko pata chal jati hai na

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Sweta

@crazy_sweta

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#507

Originally posted by: Desire6
crazy..next part..dena...

havent typed yet this one 😆

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Sweta

@crazy_sweta

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#508

Originally posted by: annirogc
waiting.

will try to update soon 😃

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Ruchita

@shruthiruchs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#509

Final part finally

Start kinda looked like a dream but aila guts yaar dats wat v love himmat aur haq se room mein hi aa gaya

Aur geet ki mom toh hai hi ullu toh zyada banane ki zarurat nahi

Hahahaha i thot almost 24/7 last update but ab toh litreally 24/7 ho gaya lollzz geet toh pakka gayi

I c sumthing iss really really fishy it cudnt b a coincidence all of a sudden maan continuing his studies dat with geet i mean same clg n along with dat giving her a job

Kuch toh pakka gadbad hai some planning is der but kya im nt able to get it hav to wait till d mystery unfolds

Rohan toh gaya tha aaj almost

Hahahaha tooo possessive hotty i c

I wonder hw geet is going to manage whole day n abv dat whole life

Beware ka board lagana padega geet k saamne so every guy ll b careful b4 approaching her

Hahahaha i love maan's wittiness yaar

Always ready with a good come back

He is always so comfy with geet as if he knws her frm ages

Is der sum secret behind dat also

Dk y at every point i feel der is some secret in dis story

Willl b waiting for next though still i have back log

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Ruchita

@shruthiruchs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#510

Originally posted by: crazy_sweta

heheheheh pata nahi kyu
maybe somehwhere i feel story will be more intersting that way agar dev ko acha bataya geet k nazro mai

leking ruchi baad mai uski ashliyat geet ko pata chal jati hai na

Hahahaha dats also crrect allz well dat ends well