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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

congrats for new story!!
seems very interesting!
Maan s blind reminds me of geet from RR ..
cant 4 more

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

interesting prologue geet rejected maan coz of her burns marks on her body while maan thought she rejected him coz of his blindness thtts why he turned cold loved it update soon

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chiki143

@chiki143

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Amazing start... loved the star n thought wat is with the title cold hearted. But the ending para made it clear. So maan thinks geet left him because he is blind but in real geet left because she feels herself not perfect for maan. Loved ur narration dear. Do continue soon

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DreamyMadhu

@Dreamy30

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Congratulation
for the new story... i just loved the prologue...

interesting concept...waiting fr d nxt Update... Cont. soon...

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

First of all.. Many Many CONGRATULATIONS for New Story 👏 😃
Wonderful Prologue 😉
I'm intrigued 😳
Continue Soon !

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DishaMG

@DishaMG

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Congo on the new stry dear
awesome prologue
Interesting...

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Omg!!!
Two imperfect person...were destined to b 2gether..
Bt sacrifice frm one...has really made other perfect.. In a way
Dat he is cold to all ...unknown to d truth dat it was not him who
Was rejected... Bt it was she who felt herself imprrfect..

Duniya gol hai...dono.milenge... Co dey are destined to b together
Intuiging concept... Am hookd...
Loved d way it was narrated...
Nd now..waiting
Waiting
For its start Sona...

Am waiting

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Oww...interesting. ..maan is blind and geet is hving scars...

both r perfect for each other as per maan's mom..but still geet rejected maan thinking he wants beautiful wife

waiting for next update. ..add me in ur pm list