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Zeal-DD

@Zeal-DD

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

1st of all Congratulation for the story... i just loved the prologue... interesting concept... would love to read this journey of two imperfect people becoming perfect for eachother

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nihatri

@nihatri

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

Geet sacrificed her fate... Which became the reason of Maan's success

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Vinsh23

@Vinsh23

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

woww new story..

congrats for new story :))

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sanafatima35

@sanafatima35

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

Interesting concept

Loved the prologue

Update soon

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Vinsh23

@Vinsh23

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

blind maan n burnt geet...
both were gonna married but geet thought she was cheating him n rejected him.n he thought othrwise :((

waiting fr nxtt

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annirogc

@annirogc

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

congratz for new story.. intresting concept

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D_4_Devil

@D_4_Devil

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

congrats for new story...

really nice concept...

i m already loving the story...

plz continue it soon...

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swetha03

@swetha03

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

new story...congrats

really nice concept geet with half burned and blind maan

and waiting for the update

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

ohhh i loved it senorita...
this has got to be intriguing...
totally loving u and ur new concepts. waiting for u to start...
ty for the pm...
their fates r tied already. its all just a matter of time!!!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#10

funny she rejected him for him
but how was he to know
she wasnt perfect
but he thought he rejected her for his blindness
when nothing could be truer
she didnt wanna cheat him
though her rejection caused him to close his heart
why did his mom lie to him
why didnt she tell the truth
at least he would have known
and geet dint tell him either
let him decide
instead she decided for him

Edited by chavvi16 - 10 years ago

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